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thekarpathianman

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See:
http://www.literotica.com/s/young-studs-for-carol-ch-04.
Two months ago, after long time, I wrote the fourth Chapter of this Story.
The subject is one mature high class lady (small sized, but busty), who is trapped, in her own house, together with her 18 yo son, by a group of fugitive convicts (three black and one white). All of the men are young, big and well endowed, especially the white one, who is a gigantic, very tall stud. In addition, the boy is sexually attracted to his mom.
During the story, the older woman becomes the "plaything" of the younger studs and her son, who witnesses all the orgiastic sessions, hopes to have, finally, the opportunity to fulfill his incestuous desires.
If you love this subject and want to read the story, please let me know your comments/suggestions/feedback: it would be a great help, for myself, to continue with another chapter (or to stop, in case of negative majority).
Thanks a lot.
 
Ch 01 posted 9/11/08, Ch 02 posted 10/22/09, Ch 03 posted 12/22/09, Ch 04 posted 1/17/12.

It's kind of hard to keep interest in a story told with one and two year gaps between chapters.

There was one story that I've been following that Ch 01 was posted 4/11/11, Ch 02 12/01/11, and Ch 03 yesterday for which I had to reread the first two chapters to remind myself what had gone before, and that one was only 3-8 months between the first 3 chapters.

Sorry, thekarpathianman, even if the storyline appealed to me [it didn't], I'm not up to reading all four chapters to give you feedback.
 
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