TheRedChamber
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As a relatively new writer, who has been writing soley one-shot stories so far, one of the things I've been exploring is the various ways to structure a story. I tend to write in numbered subsections and like to have a very clear view of what I'm trying to achieve in that numbered section and ensure that the number of words in each section is appropriate (doesn't need to be the same, but needs to match the rough importance/complexity of each section). I'd be interested in what some of your favourite story structures are and why you think they work so well. I'll give some examples of what I mean.
Type 1. Two Lives Converge and Diverge
Used in my story Midnight in Italy
Section 1 and 2. (Male Perpective) Male character notices and lusts over and plans approach of female character. Section ends with him knocking on the door of her hotel room (they haven't interacted at all yet).
Section 3. (Female Perspective) What the female character is doing right before the knock. (She's not necessarily thinking about him, but has her own currently unsolvable problems which she needs taking her mind off)
Section 4. (Male Perspective) The seduction.
Section 5. (Female Perspective) The sex (and her view of the seduction which doesn't wholely match the male characters view).
Section 6. (Third character perspective). The two characters never meet again. The final section is from the view point of someone who does have contact with both and has 'the full story' of what happened.
Type 2. The good old ABAB
Used my story My Dom is Such a Nice Lad
Section 1. (Male/Dom perspecitve) An erotic but non-sexual encounter between the two main characters.
Section 2. (Male/Dom perspective) The characters discuss the section 1 encounter in friendly, relaxed way
Section 3 and 4. (Female/Sub perspective) A sexual encounter that mirrors the section 1 erotic encounter, but from the other perspetive. (Two sections due to length and a slight themic break halfway through)
Section 5. (Male/Dom perspective) The characters discuss the section 2 encounter in and their plans for the future in a friendly, relaxed way
(You could also do this one the other way round with meeting, sex/eroticness, meeting, sex.)
Type 3. I don't exist when you don't see me.
Used in my story Barbie Ferrari and (to some extent) in Four Weddings and a Funeral.
Each section has a specific date and time that it takes place. The section detail everytime the two main characters met and nothing else. There may be a gap of a week or gaps of years. Each section begins shortly before the second character enters the first characters view and finished moments after they leave.
Type 4. The Escalation Story.
Used in my story How My Mother Met You
The story starts mildly and things get crazier and crazier until either the characters reach nirvana or nope the fuck out.
Section 1. After claiming it's difficult to get a girlfriend, the male MC's mother immediately gets one by chatting to the waitress on his behalf.
Section 2. Everything's great in the relationship, but the MC is slightly weirded out that his mother brought the female MC's new sexy lingerie.
Section 3. The MC's discovers to his horror that his mother has been making instructional videos for the female MC about how to deep throat. (The female MC is now pregnant and he's going to propose.)
Section 4. During the confrontation about the revelation in section 3, the MC discovers the female MC and his mother have had sex.
Section 5. Despite his misgivings the male and female characters have reconciled. Then he catches the female MC and his mother in the act.
Section 6. The female MC and his mother get married and start raising his child and invite him to 'rejoin them'.
Section 7. The male MC takes action to bring things to a close.
Type 5. Location, Location, Location
Used in my story Before She's Thirty
Each section takes place in a clearly defined different locations and hopefully each is significantly different in feeling. While obviously there are story threads running through the whole thing, each location is the setting for a clear story beat.
Section 1. Italian Restaurant - female MC wants to loose her virginity before her up-coming thirtieth birthday, but is having a disasterous date. Her date, instead of ditching her, proposes a radical solution.
Section 2. The Streets of London and Hair Salon - female MC has hair-cut to try and adopt a new persona to allow her to get over her sexual fears.
Section 3. His Apartment bathroom - having a panic attack she locks herself in the bathroom until her head is straight again.
Section 4. The Bedroom - you can guess this.
Section 5. The kitchen - the next morning they have the whole, 'what happens next' converstation.
Type 6 and 7. The Dream and Its Realization and No Context to this Footage.
For the story First Refusal I went a bit crazy and included two new structures in the same story - too ambitious? Well maybe given it wasn't well recieved.
Prologue. The section is written from a 'camera lense' perspective. We see what people say and do, but none of their inner thoughts. The female and male characters meet for the first time and are having sex within minutes - the camera cutting away once the sex begins. This feels weird as no context, explanation, or inner feelings are given.
Section 1. From here on the out the story reverts to the third-person close to our female MC and explains her daily life and currenty frustrations.
Section 2. The frustrations manifest as a dream. She discusses the dream with a friend and a solution is proposed.
Section 3. The prologue is repeated but from third-person close and we now understand what is going on.
Section 4. All the sex we missed after the prologue cut.
Section 5. The MC realizes her dream from section 2 - a lot of the language and events are similar but reality doesn't always quite match.
Epilogue. We return to the 'camera lense' perspective for the close of the story. We don't need the inner thoughts any more because we now understand what is going on with the characters.
Type 8. In Media Palpo and Same Time Next Week.
(Latin for in the middle of the stroke - maybe, I don't speak Latin)
As used in my story All Three Holes (IMP) and Well Situated with Hidden Potential (STNW)
For STNW, the story may have a set-up, but finishes with only a short coda with the protagonists agreeing they've had a good time and agreeing about when the meet next time (and what extra things to do then)
For IMP, the story starts with sex already underway, or just beginning and ends right after it finishes (or possibly allowing some clean-up) - no real discussion of the consequences next stage of the relationship are discussed lest it become STNW.
So, Lit authors - what are your favourite other structures? Which ones haven't worked for you? Do you use or avoid any of the above. Anyone you are completely sick of?
Type 1. Two Lives Converge and Diverge
Used in my story Midnight in Italy
Section 1 and 2. (Male Perpective) Male character notices and lusts over and plans approach of female character. Section ends with him knocking on the door of her hotel room (they haven't interacted at all yet).
Section 3. (Female Perspective) What the female character is doing right before the knock. (She's not necessarily thinking about him, but has her own currently unsolvable problems which she needs taking her mind off)
Section 4. (Male Perspective) The seduction.
Section 5. (Female Perspective) The sex (and her view of the seduction which doesn't wholely match the male characters view).
Section 6. (Third character perspective). The two characters never meet again. The final section is from the view point of someone who does have contact with both and has 'the full story' of what happened.
Type 2. The good old ABAB
Used my story My Dom is Such a Nice Lad
Section 1. (Male/Dom perspecitve) An erotic but non-sexual encounter between the two main characters.
Section 2. (Male/Dom perspective) The characters discuss the section 1 encounter in friendly, relaxed way
Section 3 and 4. (Female/Sub perspective) A sexual encounter that mirrors the section 1 erotic encounter, but from the other perspetive. (Two sections due to length and a slight themic break halfway through)
Section 5. (Male/Dom perspective) The characters discuss the section 2 encounter in and their plans for the future in a friendly, relaxed way
(You could also do this one the other way round with meeting, sex/eroticness, meeting, sex.)
Type 3. I don't exist when you don't see me.
Used in my story Barbie Ferrari and (to some extent) in Four Weddings and a Funeral.
Each section has a specific date and time that it takes place. The section detail everytime the two main characters met and nothing else. There may be a gap of a week or gaps of years. Each section begins shortly before the second character enters the first characters view and finished moments after they leave.
Type 4. The Escalation Story.
Used in my story How My Mother Met You
The story starts mildly and things get crazier and crazier until either the characters reach nirvana or nope the fuck out.
Section 1. After claiming it's difficult to get a girlfriend, the male MC's mother immediately gets one by chatting to the waitress on his behalf.
Section 2. Everything's great in the relationship, but the MC is slightly weirded out that his mother brought the female MC's new sexy lingerie.
Section 3. The MC's discovers to his horror that his mother has been making instructional videos for the female MC about how to deep throat. (The female MC is now pregnant and he's going to propose.)
Section 4. During the confrontation about the revelation in section 3, the MC discovers the female MC and his mother have had sex.
Section 5. Despite his misgivings the male and female characters have reconciled. Then he catches the female MC and his mother in the act.
Section 6. The female MC and his mother get married and start raising his child and invite him to 'rejoin them'.
Section 7. The male MC takes action to bring things to a close.
Type 5. Location, Location, Location
Used in my story Before She's Thirty
Each section takes place in a clearly defined different locations and hopefully each is significantly different in feeling. While obviously there are story threads running through the whole thing, each location is the setting for a clear story beat.
Section 1. Italian Restaurant - female MC wants to loose her virginity before her up-coming thirtieth birthday, but is having a disasterous date. Her date, instead of ditching her, proposes a radical solution.
Section 2. The Streets of London and Hair Salon - female MC has hair-cut to try and adopt a new persona to allow her to get over her sexual fears.
Section 3. His Apartment bathroom - having a panic attack she locks herself in the bathroom until her head is straight again.
Section 4. The Bedroom - you can guess this.
Section 5. The kitchen - the next morning they have the whole, 'what happens next' converstation.
Type 6 and 7. The Dream and Its Realization and No Context to this Footage.
For the story First Refusal I went a bit crazy and included two new structures in the same story - too ambitious? Well maybe given it wasn't well recieved.
Prologue. The section is written from a 'camera lense' perspective. We see what people say and do, but none of their inner thoughts. The female and male characters meet for the first time and are having sex within minutes - the camera cutting away once the sex begins. This feels weird as no context, explanation, or inner feelings are given.
Section 1. From here on the out the story reverts to the third-person close to our female MC and explains her daily life and currenty frustrations.
Section 2. The frustrations manifest as a dream. She discusses the dream with a friend and a solution is proposed.
Section 3. The prologue is repeated but from third-person close and we now understand what is going on.
Section 4. All the sex we missed after the prologue cut.
Section 5. The MC realizes her dream from section 2 - a lot of the language and events are similar but reality doesn't always quite match.
Epilogue. We return to the 'camera lense' perspective for the close of the story. We don't need the inner thoughts any more because we now understand what is going on with the characters.
Type 8. In Media Palpo and Same Time Next Week.
(Latin for in the middle of the stroke - maybe, I don't speak Latin)
As used in my story All Three Holes (IMP) and Well Situated with Hidden Potential (STNW)
For STNW, the story may have a set-up, but finishes with only a short coda with the protagonists agreeing they've had a good time and agreeing about when the meet next time (and what extra things to do then)
For IMP, the story starts with sex already underway, or just beginning and ends right after it finishes (or possibly allowing some clean-up) - no real discussion of the consequences next stage of the relationship are discussed lest it become STNW.
So, Lit authors - what are your favourite other structures? Which ones haven't worked for you? Do you use or avoid any of the above. Anyone you are completely sick of?
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