thekarpathianman
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I'm grateful to get your comments on :
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=383366
English is not my mother language and therefore I kindly ask you to forgive my mistakes.
Hoping to improve my writings in the future, now I'm very interested to have feedback on the subject. Opinions/suggestions from the readers are very important for me!
Thanks
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=383366
English is not my mother language and therefore I kindly ask you to forgive my mistakes.
Hoping to improve my writings in the future, now I'm very interested to have feedback on the subject. Opinions/suggestions from the readers are very important for me!
Thanks
