Your comments, please!

[christo]

Ladies and gentlemen,

I would greatly appreciate it if you wise and gentle folk out there would read my stories and let me know what you think of them. Most of my stories are in the Mature category, and from what I've read in other threads that isn't the most popular category out there. I've received a number of e-mails from people telling me they liked my stories, and I hope everyone else will too.

Mother of the Bride (Got an "E" for this one!)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=6635

Mrs. Reid Ch.1
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=4047

Mrs. Reid Ch.2
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=3928

Mrs. Reid Ch.3
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=7059

A Close Shave Ch.1 (The narrator's an arrogant jerk, I know)
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=4046

A Close Shave Ch.2
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=5374

Santa's Sexy Aunt
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=5375

Aunt Kathi
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=5376

The Sexy Smoking Stripper
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=6888

 

[christo]

Anyone? Anyone at all?

 

[Whispersecret]

HOw mature is mature? I don't really think I'd be interested in reading about retirees getting it on, much as I'd like to oblige you, Christo. Everyone deserves a little feedback.

 

[CAT~~]

So far it seems like the majority of the mature stories are about women in there 40's. Of course if you're only 20 something, any one in their mid-30's would be more mature.
I've enjoyed the majority of stories that I've read of Christo's.
I don't know if having a category of Mature is really needed. Unless you specify the age somewhere in the story, you'd never know that it was an older woman with a younger man or visa versa.
But, no matter the category, I do enjoy your stories, Christo! Keep up the good work.
Cat~~

 

[christo]

Thanks!

Thanks for the posts! Perhaps the "Mature" category should be retired. The stories I've written are about women in their forties with men (or boys) in their teens or twenties. Not senior-citizen sex which, while I hope to have it when I hit my sixites (Viagra for everyone!), isn't what I want to write about at the moment.

I hope you'll give 'em a look and let me know if you like them!

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

christo, today, I read your story called "Mother of the Bride" I found it to be a very well written story. Even being three pages long, it kept my interest. I liked the way you built the suspense and I enjoyed your indepth storyline. You took your time before delving into sex, and I found that to be refreshing. Way to go, you deserved an Editor's choice. The only thing I found that could have been improved upon was some spelling errors. Nothing that a good spell check program can't fix...but it was truly a very worthwhile read, thanks for sharing your works on Literotica. I promise to read the rest of your stories as soon as I am able. And, yes, I voted....

Hugs KitKat

 

[CW]

Aunt Kathi

Just read the Aunt Kathi story. Excellant! Very good bit of writing there. Easy to follow, not overloaded with impossible sex scenes, nice character development, believable emotions displayed.

You do need to get out of the 'Mature' catagory though. I'm sure that you'd garner a larger audience then.

Again, good job.

 

[DEFENDER]

Santa's sexy aunt

i read this and i thought it had a good story line, what some fantasies are made of...
keep the grey cells moving!

 

[Guest]

Mother of the bride

Hey Christo,

I just read "Mother of the Bride". It was a very good story. I had never read any of your stories before, probably because they are in the "Mature" category and I typically spend my time in "Loving Wives", but this was a very good story.

Keep up the good work!

Ray

 

[christo]

Thank you!

Thanks for the replies & comments. I have been posting more of my stories in categories other than the Mature one. It's tough to get people to look at your new stories these days because there are so many getting posted every day (which is a good thing), so if you end up in a category that doesn't get a lot of traffic you can fall through the cracks.

I'm actually trying to get away from the mature woman/younger man theme for stories I'm writing now. I'll conclude the series I've started, of course, but I'm trying to get branch out a bit.

Hope you keep reading my stuff & keep the comments coming!!