Young Writer, could use some tips

[atenai]

Hi all, I've submitted about 8 or so stories so far, 6 of which are approved as of the time of this post. The link below goes to my author page, where you can find a list of my stories. If anyone has any feedback, I'd love to hear it, either here or via the feedback system.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=609987&page=submissions

I'm relatively new at this, and I'd like to improve. Thanks!