I've had this story idea for a while and am wondering what y'all think about it.
Mary, 18, is an only child raised by very Conservative, religious parents. She knows next to nothing about sex and even less about masturbation. What she does know, though, is that when she touches herself down there during her weekly baths before Church, it feels really nice.
Jim, 20, lives next door in the same apartment complex. The apartments were originally one big one, but a thin wall was inserted a few decades back. For the past years, he's sorta ignored Mary as he thinks she's plain and boring, but one Saturday evening, he's heard her panting and moaning and the splashing of the water as she pleasured herself. This aroused him greatly, of course, especially after he finds out the back of the bathroom cabinet is just a thin plastic board that can be removed and he can watch her through the cracked-open cabinet doors on her side if he's lucky and standing at just the right angle.
I'd first follow the two independently -- Jim being raised pretty liberally, knowing a lot about sex and not feeling ashamed of it, while Mary's just exploring her sexuality and thinks it's a sin etc. Then I'd stage a meeting between the two...
Thoughts?
Mary, 18, is an only child raised by very Conservative, religious parents. She knows next to nothing about sex and even less about masturbation. What she does know, though, is that when she touches herself down there during her weekly baths before Church, it feels really nice.
Jim, 20, lives next door in the same apartment complex. The apartments were originally one big one, but a thin wall was inserted a few decades back. For the past years, he's sorta ignored Mary as he thinks she's plain and boring, but one Saturday evening, he's heard her panting and moaning and the splashing of the water as she pleasured herself. This aroused him greatly, of course, especially after he finds out the back of the bathroom cabinet is just a thin plastic board that can be removed and he can watch her through the cracked-open cabinet doors on her side if he's lucky and standing at just the right angle.
I'd first follow the two independently -- Jim being raised pretty liberally, knowing a lot about sex and not feeling ashamed of it, while Mary's just exploring her sexuality and thinks it's a sin etc. Then I'd stage a meeting between the two...
Thoughts?
