You must like this one ... come on.

[letterman999]

Oops I am so sorry Letterman. I accidentally deleted this. meant to reply. Can you please edit and repost the original poem? I am deeply sorry for that. Mod mistake.

 

[letterman999]

recovered ...

I love three girls loving me. Our touches, each,
inflame beyond the blogosphere. I'll never slip
acidic comments (unprovoked) nor breach
our tight camaraderie. We'll jointly whip
each other's asses to a fever pitch. High praise
will be their quid. The quo I ask of them?--
an automatic moan or scream. As for envy,
let those who can't keep up eat hippo phlegm.
Why try conducting non-revelers to our gift
for scaling Mt. Priapus? Catch my drift?
Of course you do! Who needs intercourse credit?
Some lady in Oklahoma will condmn this poem;
but being who I am, so free, I'm loath to pen an edit.

 

[PandoraGlitters]

here goes

I would not edit this either. It has said everything it came to say. At first I was turned off and then I thought, with some whispered respect there in my brain, "Wait! That's what he wants!" then the low whistle of "Evil Genius!"

 

[PandoraGlitters]

Postscript thought:

You have to be from Kansas. People from Kansas (or Kansas-ish parts of Missouri) are the only people who bother to look down on Oklahomans.

But hey! Welcome to the PF&D! Really. I mean that.
I did enjoy the playfulness of this and look forward to reading more of your poems.

 

[letterman999]

Thank you

Lol ---
Kansas is the 'rich' part of Kansas City.
My sister lives in a million dollar house.
I have a $600-a-month three story clustered
apartment. (Third Floor) College lecturers
are poorly paid.

So gracious you are for the welcome.

L999

 

[PandoraGlitters]

Oh I grew up in Wichita. I know. My "aunties" (later I finally clued in that they were a lesbian couple) lived in subsidized housing in central KC. Fun times. Those babes were killer partners in cards. Serious sharks.

 

[Maria2394]

Hey, Letterman

why don't you submit your poems? You will have a wider range of readers and thus, maybe, receive more feedback. Just a suggestion.

be well

~ m

 

[Maria2394]

re: your Q via pm

to submit, you go to your control panel and click on the submissions link and
go from there. I gather you access the PDF from some other method than using your control panel. If you do not know how to get there, ask a mod because I could not tell you if you do not know already.

good luck.