naughtychanteusez
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- Joined
- Feb 5, 2007
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Hi, I've written and had approved my first story (with an "H" rating) and am afraid it sucks! No one has commented and barely anyone has voted for it, could someone check it out and give me some constructive criticism? The story is Do You Love Me Yet? in the BDSM category.
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