Yes, even yet another category question

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Couple gets an invitation they've long waited for.

At an elaborate dinner club, the wife is selected to be used by a single male in front of the crowd on stage. It gets a bit rough, but not bad. She's the narrator so she's telling how she's thrilled about it all.


EC ?
E/V ?
Fetish ?
First Time ?


NOT LW or BDSM

 

[TarnishedPenny]

E&V would be my choice, were it my story.

I am, BTW, jealous of the concept. Good luck with it!

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

I am, BTW, jealous of the concept. Good luck with it!

I've never asked for a Beta Reader, but since you've shown interest. ....

Only 3,500 words so far.

 

[TarnishedPenny]

DM to follow!

Nope. DM not working. But, yes, I would be delighted.

 

[iwatchus]

I second the vote for E/V

 

[Bamagan]

E/V sounds like a reasonable fit, especially if her primary thrill is coming from the exposure of the act. I could see a case for Fetish if you emphasize the sex-out-of-marriage and/or roughness angles as a significant component of her arousal, though (and since you have ruled out LW).

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

DM to follow!

Nope. DM not working. But, yes, I would be delighted.

I've already found a few more spelling and continuity errors since I sent it.

Needs several more read throughs.


The only reason I mentioned Fetish is the temporary use of a one bar prison, though I didn't use that name for the appliance.

 

[TheLobster]

The only reason I mentioned Fetish is the temporary use of a one bar prison, though I didn't use that name for the appliance.

A pillory? That's actually a pretty lively tag, it seems, though mostly in NC/R and BDSM. The former wouldn't really work for you if the whole thing is consensual, and so wouldn't the latter if we're talking only about a minor part of the story.

She's the narrator so she's telling how she's thrilled about it all.

Is the thrill primarily about being watched by anyone? If so, then E&V is the obvious choice.
But if it's mostly about her husband seeing her in such position, then LW would seem like a more fitting choice -- or Fetish, if you understandably want to avoid it.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

A pillory?

Not familiar with that word, so I had to look it up.

Not even close.

 

[TheLobster]

Not familiar with that word, so I had to look it up.

Not even close.

Yeah, googling for "one bar prison" brings an odd T-shaped device which clearly something different. Not quite sure how it's supposed to work, which I guess is a good reason to read your story when it comes out!

 

[Dashabout]

I'm not a writer but I am an avid reader of the E/V category having some experience in both ends, more in the thrill of E than V which can and has led to E.

My vote is the E/V but ultimately it's your choice.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Yeah, googling for "one bar prison" brings an odd T-shaped device which clearly something different. Not quite sure how it's supposed to work, which I guess is a good reason to read your story when it comes out!

Not a lot of decent pictures for some reason. My setting is not a dingey basement a there are no chains.


https://i.redd.it/hands-tied-v0-47n979601nca1.jpg?s=422cd45b399bae206962fef1125ac3c6e37cdf70

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

E&V would be my choice, were it my story.

I am, BTW, jealous of the concept. Good luck with it!

Crashed and burned.

My only current sub-4

 

[TarnishedPenny]

Crashed and burned.

Oh, I am so sorry! Despite some what were minor disagreements, I think it had beaucoup potential. Perhaps you can let it lie fallow for a while? That often helps with mine. In any case, thanks for the chance and good luck!

 

[Bamagan]

Crashed and burned.

My only current sub-4

Are you referring to Table 8? I imagine it could take a little while to find its audience. The 'open relationship' aspect may have thrown some of the more vanilla and/or 'pure' E/V readers. It might be worthwhile to submit an edit to add a few more tags, so people who enjoy swinging, sharing, or the like will someday be able to find it via search.

 

[AlexIce]

I'm leaning towards E/V but part of me is kind of leaning towards Group Sex

 

[Writer61]

Yeah, googling for "one bar prison" brings an odd T-shaped device which clearly something different. Not quite sure how it's supposed to work, which I guess is a good reason to read your story when it comes out!

Old form of punishment in England (& probably elsewhere) where a person is locked into the device somewhere public allowing outraged citizens to throw rotten fruit etc. at them.

You probably know the verb 'to pillory', which is to undergo that punishment. These days used in a sense of general public humiliation.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Oh, I am so sorry! Despite some what were minor disagreements, I think it had beaucoup potential. Perhaps you can let it lie fallow for a while? That often helps with mine. In any case, thanks for the chance and good luck!

4.06 now

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Somehow managed to claw up to 4.23