YAAAAAHHHHOOOIE!!! -- WHISPERSECRET where are ya girl!?!?!

[Savage Kitten]

Did you see it?? HUH? HUH??

OMG!! *jumping up and down - doing cartwheels and flips* It's there girl!! IT'S THERE!!!!

*fans face trying to settle down*

ok ok.. i don't toot my own horn about my stories btu I submitted this one soooooooo long ago. A lot of sweat and labor went into it and I could not have got it looking as great as it does without Whisper's help. (SHE IS A MIRACLE WORKER!!!)

I actually thought Laurel denied it for some reason!

YAAAAAAAAHHHHHHOOOOO!!! it's up! it's up! it's upppppppp!!! *grinz*

 

[coach]

excelent work Kimmy..oops sorry Kitten. A well written story I enjoyed it and looking forward to many more.

And its nice to see you so excited about getting it up.

[Edited by coach on 10-16-2000 at 01:01 PM]

 

[Ezzy]

CongrDulations Savage Kitten, mmmmmmm the wait was worth it.


EZ http://smilecwm.tripod.com/cwm2/sleep.gif

Ps. spelled for the flamers.

 

[Cheyenne]

My work is done here. No one will ever forget again how to spell CongraTulations! Whether you want to or not!

By the way, congrats, Kitten.

 

[Whispersecret]

Shhh...<chuckles> You wrote the story, Kitten. I only pointed out the stuff that bugged me and made suggestions as to how to fix it. <winks>

You should be proud of yourself. Isn't it a great feeling? I remember a combination of pride and anxiety filling me when the first chapter of my story was posted. I'd been preaching so long about good writing that I was terrified people would crucify me when my own stuff finally got posted.

I'm very glad that I was able to help you out. But that's all I did. The words and ideas flowed from your head. I'm happy for you. Bask in the glory!

 

[Gaucho]

Whispersecret - the story doctor of the Lit board! Actually, hon, it's all about the titties. When you've got them working, everything just flowwwwwwws like it should.

Shake, shake, shake,
Shake, shake, shake,
Shake those titties
Shake those titties

(With apologies to KC and the boys)

 

[Whispersecret]

No, no, no!

I'm not the story doctor! I am not available for critiques. (I don't call it editing anymore. I offer far too many personal opinions for it to be considered editing.) I'm too selfish with my time right now. My second erotic story is almost finished, and I don't want to lose my momentum. (As if there are scores of writers just breathlessly waiting for my golden touch! <rolls her eyes> Heh heh.)

Hey, Gaucho, I like your version of the song much better!

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Kitten, I would love to read your story. Do you mind telling me what it is called so I can check it out? Thanks abunch.

Hugs Kitkat

 

[Whispersecret]

Earning the Grade, Mr. Jack's Way.

 

[Rolly]

Whisper, I read your story finally and it was ...

GREAT.
Superb character development and a grand plot. Loved the ending more so than the beginning. The forced sex section is not my taste, but somehow you made it come together with passion and love. Good work Whisper! I gave you 5/5… for the teacher.
Jane with a friendly hug.