Hello, Zantu, or Xantu? I am Quesla, a blid reader. I have been reading your Demon Child series. I am on chapter 4 or 5. It is the one in which Nika touches the Red Giant Horse before he race. Your work with weaving the language difference in to the dialogue is EXCELLENT! But it has been upon the revelation of Nika's empathic powers with the horss that I have become commited to read yor work on this right through to the end! The sensation that Nika has of the overwelming excitment and emotion of the crowds of warriors is well written too. The distinct impression of the people,including Nika not knowing what is happening to her is well written too. The frictionbetween soemembers of theTwised Dagger clan and theincidental aquisition of the Broken Spear clan of a remaldi woman as a Haig creating friction with the two groups and internally between the one dagger warrior and Nika poises the story for your next chapters! I am "looking" QUITE! forward too more! I partcularlywant o hear more of areatonship between Nik & Demon, the red stallion! Love Ligh: Quesla