X-Men: Evolution II (not finished need help)

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It had been a week since Rogue and Scott’s “encounter.” All of the students finished their finales and the seniors finally graduated from high school. In honor of the recent events, the headmaster of the School for the Gifted, Professor Charles Xavier decided to throw a party for the young mutants. And with a pool located behind the mansion what better party, then a pool party. The instructors were preparing food, while most of the students were lounging around the pool. Being young and free of school, the young mutants were defiantly enjoying themselves in the company of each other.

However, Rogue being the gothic recluse that she was, isolated herself from the group. She laid herself down on a lawn chair and tried to stay as far away from her peers. Especially while wearing a bathing suit, Rogue normally isolate herself like this due to her powers. She always feared that someone might accidentally touch her and possibly hurt that person. However, Rogue had just recently discovered that she could control her absorption powers. Only Kitty and Scott knew of Rogue’s control and for the moment, she decided to keep it that way. Hold habits die hard and Rogue enjoyed being by herself.

As she was lying out, trying desperately to get a tan, she occasionally caught some of he boys looking at her.

“Ya know,” Rogue thought “For a girl who isn’t all that popular, ah sure do get gawked at a lot.”

With new confidence about herself, Rogue decided to wear a very small black and purple bikini. The bikini was perfect at showing off Rogue’s wonderful features. Her smooth pale white legs led up to her firm and toned stomach. These two attributes alone would drive most pubescent boys to madness. However nothing compared to her ample chest. Needless to say Rogue’s breast were much too large for the material to cover.

“Maybe sporting all this cleavage wasn’t such a good idea,” she thought to herself. “Tha guys are practically tripping over their tongues.”

Trying to dismiss the gawkers, she gently put down her sunglasses and her head drifted to one side as she tried to relax in the cool sunlight. Her mind wandered to a variety of things. However one thing stood out above the rest, her little…“encounter” with Scott. The past week, it had been the only thing she gave thought to. Just the thought of having him in her mouth again sent shivers down her spine. As she immersed herself with images of Scott’s member, an unnoticed shadow snuck up on Rogue.
“Hey, like, why don’t you put those things away?”

Rogue tilted her head. Through her shades, she noticed a short and thin brunette girl standing in front of her.

“What was that Kitty?’ Rogue asked.

“Your boobs, why don’t you put them away before one of they guys pass out from lack of blood flow to the head.”

“Your just jealous that you can’t flaunt your boobs like I can,” the sassy gothic girl snapped back.

Kitty looked down at her own chest. Her breast could barely even fill up her B cup bikini top.

“Good point,” Kitty consented as she sat down next to Rogue. “It’s funny, were roommates and I’ve like barely seen you lately. I guess what with finals and graduation and all.”

Rogue sat herself up and she noticed that Kitty was about to talk her ear off. However the conversation took a sudden turn for a more appealing subject.

“So, are the rumors true?” Kitty questioned.

“What rumors?”

“You and Scott, word has it that you two hooked up.”

“What!!!” Rogue exclaimed as her eyes widened.

“Don’t worry, like, most of the students have pretty much dismissed it has pure rumor. You know, because of your powers and all.” Kitty explained. “But I know different, I know you have control over your powers.”

Rogue slouched back down and crossed her arms over her chest. It was quite obvious that she was very upset on hearing this.

“So, like how was it?”

A smile shot across Rogue’s face as she thought back to that day.

“Well, first we kissed. And ah must say that he has the best lips in the school. Not to mention that tongue of his.” Rogue then sat herself up as she started to enjoy the conversation. “Mmm, he tasted so nice.”

Kitty just sat there, listening to her roommates every word with the biggest grin on her face.

“Oh my god, then he started sucking on my neck! Just him sucking on my neck coulda made me…go crazy.”

Kitty then butted in “I wonder how good he is at sucking on other things.”

Rogue’s head darted over to Kitties and their eyes meet. The two young girls both fell over laughing uncontrollably. Once they gained their composure, Rogue started up the girl talk again.

“Well, unfortunately we didn’t get that far. But I did get to prove my wonderful oral skills.” Rogue admitted with a naughty grin.

Kitty smiled again as an expression of interest covered her face.

“Wow, aren’t you a little slut.” Kitty giggled. “So….was he…big?”

“Well,” Rogue said as she thought. “While I have nobody to compare him to, I’d have to say yes. More than a mouthful.”

“Nice, I always thought Scott was well hung,” Kitty admitted and after a bit of hesitation asked her next question. “What did he taste like?”

“Mmmm, very nice, his skin was so smooth. When I first tasted his juices, it was kinda bitter. However when he came it got a little sweeter, not to mention it was nice and warm. Just thinking about it gets me hungry.”

“Oh my god! You swallowed? Kitty exclaimed.

“What like you wouldn’t? You’ve never do that with your boyfriend.”

“I don’t know if you’d call Lance my boyfriend, but I don’t like him that much.”

“Well, don’t knock it until you’ve tried it sugah.”

“So are you two, like dating now?”

“No, despite the wonders my mouth gave him, I still couldn’t get him to forget about little Miss Perfect.”

“Yeah, like Scott will probably always love Jean.”


Right now that's all i have and obviously i'm not done. I plan on having Rogue and Jean get together, despite the fact that they hate each other.

Any ideas and suggestion would be great.

And if anyone can comment on the exsisting part of the story and anyway to clean it up that would be great as well.

THANKS!
 
Hi Phoenix646,

I'm not a somebody, but i am an anybody. :)

I don't have any earth shattering ideas for you, sorry, but don't you sometimes find that you can be stuck on a story for weeks or even months, then suddenly an idea will just come into your head and within an hour you can bang it all out?

M-m... Rogue and Jean hating each other but getting together? Yes I like that idea. Maybe they could have one hell of a big fight, that gets physical, and then gets really physical? ;)

Well good luck, and happy creating.

Alex (fem)
 
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