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I an new to this site and after reading some of the stories i was wondering if someone could please write this story for me

a 50y old man goes to stay with his 24y old neice and her husband. This man is the dark side of the family, overweight, always getting drunk, in and out of prison and never married. He has always had a thing for his neice who is very good looking but dislikes her uncle. The uncle arrives unexpectedly and husband invites him to stay. The couple are short for money after husband has accident and is unable to go to work. Without husband knowing, uncle proposes to give couple money if neice will let him feel her up. She agrees but uncle has more things on his mind.

there are some very good writters out there and i hope someone will use this idea.
 
Are you the same guest who has asked for this same story many times before? We've now had "old man" (50s), neice (24) and her new hubby..."old man" (50s), his YOUNG son (20s) and his new bride (24), and so on. We've had this same idea asked for at least 3 to 4 times now, but with different family members.

It seems it hasn't been favored the past few times it was asked for. Maybe that's a sign?
 
I like a couple aspects of this story.

older, estranged uncle comes back into womans life. she and her husband are having hard times.

what if the husband agrees to let the uncle make a move on his wife, for some extra cash?

the uncle appears to be helping them out a little bit, giving them some cash, bailing them out of a couple of loan sharks, setting the husband up with some interviews.

I would prefer to write the story as the husband knowing and the neice not. the husband agrees to do dastardly things so that the uncle can have closer peeks at his neice, watch the couple have sex, watch her undress, etc...
 
Chicklet said:
I like a couple aspects of this story.


Read the first couple pages of this board. You'll find *this* story at least 3 more times. Always 50-ish old man, 24 year old woman, and young (same age-ish) husband.
 
<shrug>

well, that does't mean I can't like it, does it?

maybe if it gets written this time it'll stop popping up = )
 
Chicklet said:

well, that does't mean I can't like it, does it?

I never said you "couldn't" like it. I was merely making a point similar to you asking Fun4Wolfgang why he had two threads out of the SAME nature. Maybe if that oral one is written, too, Fun4Wolfgang will stop asking for it?
 
Write it

I'll write it if you want they're going to be some changes though but I hope you like it all the same. :)
 
good

between the two of us we're bound to please SOMEBODY

:D
 
well...

Shouldn't be too difficult Chicklet...

Is that picture below your nick you?
 
I'll let her

I'll let her take it from here than... I'm still working on a story and it's taking me a much longer time to finish it than I anticipated. Don't know if I should post it here, might as well actually but it does seem like most people here don't really like non-consent stories. Ah well... Can't hurt to try.
 
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why dont you start the story yourself we all would give a helping hand wouldnt we ?
 
Of course I'll work on something similar heh.
Don't nessarily need help on it though...
 
both chicklet and stranger have a beautifull body.. :eek:
also i like this tory it could be very good if someone writes it correctly
 
MrFrost said:
both chicklet and stranger have a beautifull body.. :eek:
also i like this tory it could be very good if someone writes it correctly
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I guess i ain't good enough for you ?:(
 
pretty_lil_stranger said:
whiteboy...I'm sure you could both write it and come up with entirely different stories!!!

Unless I have that scary mental link with Whiteboy like I did with the other person who wrote the OTHER "private lessons" In that case, they would be remarkably similar...<Grin>

(For those who don't know, I wrote a story which I thought was completely original...At least, I'd never read anything like it. Then I find another story, same plot, same title, with the same main characters names!)
 
Chicklet said:


Unless I have that scary mental link with Whiteboy like I did with the other person who wrote the OTHER "private lessons" In that case, they would be remarkably similar...<Grin>

(For those who don't know, I wrote a story which I thought was completely original...At least, I'd never read anything like it. Then I find another story, same plot, same title, with the same main characters names!)

you tell it like it is girl :p
 
MsLinnet said:
Originally posted by MrFrost
both chicklet and stranger have a beautifull body.. :eek:
also i like this tory it could be very good if someone writes it correctly


I guess i ain't good enough for you ?:(

Oh, I wouldn't say that!

-T
 
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