Writing q - Help with a sentence

[TheEarl]

I am trying to describe biting. That nicely delicious move, where you take a small fold of skin/flesh in your teeth and press down just hard enough to get that "Oh!"

I need to describe it in first person, from the perspective of the biter, in one sentence, on the breast. Help me, for tonight I'm crap.

The Earl

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

I am trying to describe biting. That nicely delicious move, where you take a small fold of skin/flesh in your teeth and press down just hard enough to get that "Oh!"

I need to describe it in first person, from the perspective of the biter, in one sentence, on the breast. Help me, for tonight I'm crap.

The Earl

Sounds like the word you're looking for is NIP. Just describe how the protag NIPS or NIPPED on the breast.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[simply_cyn]

I am trying to describe biting. That nicely delicious move, where you take a small fold of skin/flesh in your teeth and press down just hard enough to get that "Oh!"

I need to describe it in first person, from the perspective of the biter, in one sentence, on the breast. Help me, for tonight I'm crap.

The Earl

Just tossing out a couple of ideas to mostly get your own creative thought processes going:

"I captured a small portion of her porcelain like skin between me teeth, just enough to savor her taste and elicit a small gasp of pleasure from her parted lips ..."

"The plump flesh of her bosom was like a juicy peach teasing me to take a bite and I did just that, savoring just enough of it between my teeth and suckled into my mouth to cause a delicious moan to escape from her throat ..."

Bleh ... you get the idea!

 

[TheEarl]

Sounds like the word you're looking for is NIP. Just describe how the protag NIPS or NIPPED on the breast.

Rumple Foreskin

More than one word if poss? Normally I'd use 'nip', but I'd like to make a whole descriptive sentence out of it.

The Earl

 

[yui]

I am trying to describe biting. That nicely delicious move, where you take a small fold of skin/flesh in your teeth and press down just hard enough to get that "Oh!"

I need to describe it in first person, from the perspective of the biter, in one sentence, on the breast. Help me, for tonight I'm crap.

The Earl

Nipping is nice, but I like the word biting. Much more hot and primal.

Close your eyes and bite the fleshy underside of you arm; use your teeth and lips and rub your tongue across the soft skin. Notice the contrast in temperatures and textures. Suck it and love it and lave it; that's my breast in your mouth, small and firm and hungry.

Now tell me how it feels to you, in first person.

 

[TheEarl]

Nipping is nice, but I like the word biting. Much more hot and primal.

Close your eyes and bite the fleshy underside of you arm; use your teeth and lips and rub your tongue across the soft skin. Notice the contrast in temperatures and textures. Suck it and love it and lave it; that's my breast in your mouth, small and firm and hungry.

Now tell me how it feels to you, in first person.

Mmm, maybe you should ghost-write? I'm afraid I appear to be bruised on the underside of both my arms; aftereffect of rugby.

“What’s happening? Who’s there?” she calls out again, louder this time, as if the force that’s doing this to her is across the other side of the room. I feel my smile broadening and I draw a fold of skin into my mouth, closing my teeth around it just hard enough to elicit a soft “Oh!” She shuddered under my touch and my hands course her skin, sliding down to her hips as I bite again.

Is this sexy, ladies and gentlemen?

The Earl

 

[Stella_Omega]

Mmm, maybe you should ghost-write? I'm afraid I appear to be bruised on the underside of both my arms; aftereffect of rugby.

“What’s happening? Who’s there?” she calls out again, louder this time, as if the force that’s doing this to her is across the other side of the room. I feel my smile broadening and I draw a fold of skin into my mouth, closing my teeth around it just hard enough to elicit a soft “Oh!” She shuddered under my touch and my hands course her skin, sliding down to her hips as I bite again.

Is this sexy, ladies and gentlemen?

The Earl

You wanna bite me? huh, huh?
... I have a leetle problem with the smile. Is it a foolish smile, a triumphant smile, a rictus? A modifier could go a long way into getting us inside your head- the reason you're smiling can make things mucho hot!

 

[English Lady]

big smile to nip = funny face pulling. make it a cheeky little smirk and the move works better

 

[Stella_Omega]

big smile to nip = funny face pulling. make it a cheeky little smirk and the move works better

But it seems she can't see, so he's smiling for himself... Which is very sexy in it's own way.

 

[TheEarl]

But it seems she can't see, so he's smiling for himself... Which is very sexy in it's own way.

In the context, you'll know why he's smiling. And it is sexy. It's a powerful smile.

The Earl

 

[Stella_Omega]

In the context, you'll know why he's smiling. And it is sexy. It's a powerful smile.

The Earl

*rubs hands* I'm looking forward to reading it, Earl!

 

[yui]

Mmm, maybe you should ghost-write? I'm afraid I appear to be bruised on the underside of both my arms; aftereffect of rugby.

“What’s happening? Who’s there?” she calls out again, louder this time, as if the force that’s doing this to her is across the other side of the room. I feel my smile broadening and I draw a fold of skin into my mouth, closing my teeth around it just hard enough to elicit a soft “Oh!” She shuddered under my touch and my hands course her skin, sliding down to her hips as I bite again.

Is this sexy, ladies and gentlemen?

The Earl

I'm not qualified to ghost-write for anyone, but I excel at the biting thing.

Sexy. So the blouse is off, then?

for the bruises.

 

[Stella_Omega]

for the bruises.

Not me. He wants to play rugby, I got something else for the bruises- my tongue...

 

[TheEarl]

I'm not qualified to ghost-write for anyone, but I excel at the biting thing.

Sexy. So the blouse is off, then?

for the bruises.

The blouse is partially off. Nothing better than a woman in dishevelled clothing.

The Earl

 

[yui]

Not me. He wants to play rugby, I got something else for the bruises- my tongue...

I was trying not to go there, Stella! Big, hot, sexy, sweaty men make me want to lick them all over and taste their salt on my lips; but I didn't want to blatantly lust after Earl on his writing thread.

*looks around* And the anti-fluff censors are watching me already.

 

[Stella_Omega]

I was trying not to go there, Stella! Big, hot, sexy, sweaty men make me want to lick them all over and taste their salt on my lips; but I didn't want to blatantly lust after Earl on his writing thread.

*looks around* And the anti-fluff censors are watching me already.

Yui, the anti-fluff cesors overload and explode when you show up, so- stop worrying about it!
As far as I can see, Earl's question is answered, and there's nothing left for us to do except... you know... jump his bones...
It's the mud, I like mud.

 

[TheEarl]

It's the mud, I like mud.

The Earl

 

[yui]

Yui, the anti-fluff cesors overload and explode when you show up, so- stop worrying about it!

http://www.addis-welt.de/smilie/smilie/japan/63634.gif

As far as I can see, Earl's question is answered, and there's nothing left for us to do except... you know... jump his bones...
It's the mud, I like mud.

Welcome to the McEarl-Lust Club. Over 100,000 orgasms served.

 

[Stella_Omega]

The Earl

THAT'S not mud! I've never seen such a perfect handprint! How fast was he coming at you?

 

[TheEarl]

THAT'S not mud! I've never seen such a perfect handprint! How fast was he coming at you?

That is mud. It was after a game where I got covere in it head to toe, except where covered by kit. So, when I took my shirt off, I decided to make a handprint, for an av dedicated to Cloudy.

The Earl

 

[Stella_Omega]

That is mud. It was after a game where I got covere in it head to toe, except where covered by kit. So, when I took my shirt off, I decided to make a handprint, for an av dedicated to Cloudy.

The Earl

Oh, okay, I'm settling down now.
I was expecting to hear about the cracked rib, under that handprint-shaped bruise.
... The handprint generally goes on the pony's flank... Just saying, yanno?

 

[yui]

... The handprint generally goes on the pony's flank... Just saying, yanno?

I have some shoes for that sort of thing if you want to borrow them ...

For bruises, ask Earl for his paint ball pics. Ouch.

 

[TheEarl]

... The handprint generally goes on the pony's flank...

Yeah, but Shanglan's not here right now.

The Earl

PS: I've lost weight since the paintballing, thank God.
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=334484

 

[chris 44]

Why restrict yourself to bite when you have the option to suck sensually, to chew cheerfully, to tongue terrifically, to lick lovingly, to kiss cunningly......

Come on guys give me some help here.
Chris

Could be a big day tomorrow. If English Lady has got her sums right, I could lose my virginity. Ah well better late than never.

 

[Stella_Omega]

Why restrict yourself to bite when you have the option to suck sensually, to chew cheerfully, to tongue terrifically, to lick lovingly, to kiss cunningly......

Come on guys give me some help here.
Chris

Could be a big day tomorrow. If English Lady has got her sums right, I could lose my virginity. Ah well better late than never.

What help?
Listen, best of luck on that virginity thing tomorrow! And remember- you could, if you're good, lose it several times...