WRITING CHALLENGE - The Novella

musicankane

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Hey all my fellow writers. I'm back from a fancy vacation during I had time to think of a interesting and new idea on sexual threads.

I'm calling it a writing challenge my friend because this will be a challenge that is open to any and all who wish to post.

The Story: Ben Harper is a shy young man who onlys wants a social life. Yet like a typical shy resevered guy, he isn't very popular nor successful with the ladies. He is a RPG nerd, playing various card games and dungeons and Dragons type things. The day a new game comes out Ben is first in line to get his starter set. When he opens the pack of cards he is covered by a golden light and suddenly finds himself in this fantasy world. Stranded in the middle of the forest he is in an unfamiliar, and highly erotic world.



Here's the challenge. During most threads here each writer has their own characters. However in this thread, all writers must write in the POV of our hero Ben.

Each writer will write a section of our story and at the end he or she will write two choices that the next writer in line must take. You can take the story anywhere you want so long as it encorporates one of the two choices given to you by the writer before you.

Think Final Fantasy Erotica.



IC:

Ben Harpers head hurt as the sunlight pierced his eyes. He winced as he sat up and rubbed his eyes. It took him a moment to realize he was sitting in the middle of a pile of dry leaves. Suddenly awake Ben jumped to his feet and looked around. Trees surrounded him, thin rays of line barely piercing the foliage.
Where am I? What is this place? He thought in a panic.
Ben started making his way through the woods, sticks and leaves crunching under his feet. Think....Think....I was opening my new cards, then what? His head was a daze of fog and blured images. He tried to find some kind of path or clearing. He didn't know why but he had playing enough D&D to know you always had to find a path to find your way.
He had been walking for, he didn't know how long, when he heard a sound that wasn't a natural part of the forest. HE turned his head trying to hear the sound better.
It sounded like breathing.
Moaning.
Turning toward the sound he stepped carefully. He found a path made of smooth dirt and rocks, across the way he saw it clearly as day. There was people there, a man and a woman. He stepped closer and heard the women moaning, loudly. He had to focus before he realize they were having sex...right there in the woods!
Behind him he heard a rumbling coming up the path. It was loud and fast, and heavy. He glanced back and saw a black cloaked man riding some kind of big hairy warthog looking thing. It was eight feet tall and had huge tusks tied together by a leather harnest. The rider had a large axe strapped to his back and looked like he meant business.
"Holy father, give me thy purifying seed in my womb. Cleanse my body with your holy fluid." The woman moaned loudly.
Ben was in the middle of the path, in a panic.

Does he diving into the bushes toward the fucking couple? Or does he wait for the black rider?
 
Ben and the fucking couple

OOC: Sounds like fun, here we go.

IC: Ben didn't want to get caught out in the open with this man coming towards him, and it looked like the couple was hidden a bit, at least enough for them not to be seen by the rider if they kept quiet.

He made a quick decision, and jumped into the bushes with the couple, making his apologies, and shooshing them. "We have company, keep it quiet." He said with a bit of harshness in his voice, but knew that they had to be quiet or dead.

The man was about to say something when he saw the rider and nodded to Ben. He held a hand over the womans mouth, to keep her quiet, and pointed the rider out. She nodded, and they took and waited hoping that they were hidden enough.

It looked like they had made it without the rider seeing them, when she sneezed, and the rider stopped.

What does Ben do, does he.
1. Jump out and surrender,
or
2. Hold his breath and hope that he didn't hear them.
 
OOC: Don't take it like criticism, I'm delighted that you started the thread and look forward to participating, but do you know about www.chyoo.com? It's Literotica's sister site, apparently, because you can use your Lit username and password there. It's a site with multi-author branching stories just like this one, which you might be interested in if you don't already know about it.

IC:
Ben stayed quiet. He was too terrified to move, or speak, or even breathe. He sat like a mouse in the bushes, where the man held the woman's mouth tightly closed now, shivering slightly at what was to come. It was no use hiding now, however. The rider clearly heard a sneeze and now he dismounted to investigate. It was clear why he wasn't afraid to go rummaging through the bushes alone - the man was huge, like his odd-looking mount. He idly spun a big, heavy mace with scary-looking barbs in his hand, while moving branches with another. It was only a matter of time before he would find all three people hiding, they all realized that, and this was when the man leaned over to Ben and started whispering very quietly into his ear.

"I will bless your seeds with all my holy power, stranger, if you promise to take Lilly to safety and take care of her. I will distract this monster whilest you flee with her. But you must swear to me you will look after her. Do you?"

1. Go along with the man's plan.
2. Try to flee together.
 
OOC: Yeah I know about Chyoo. I don't like it because there a very few stories worth reading and often it's a pain in the ass to get to anything good.)


Ebn looked at the man. "Bless my what?" He asked shocked.
The man leaped up and a pulled Lilly to her feet. "Take her now!" Then he pushed the naked woman toward Ben and took off running toward the black cloaked rider. "OVER HERE YOU SKRULL PIECE OF GORGON SHIT!" He cried launching himself across the path.
The rider reared up on his warthog-like creature with a grugling roar and took off after the man.
Ben didn't think about it further. I took the woman's hand and pulled her through the woods in the opposite direction. Lilly bounced behind him moaning in pain as her bare feet hit hard twigs and rocks, and branches whipped at her bare skin. Ben slapped things out of his way, knocking trees limbs and bushed from their path. They were running for a long time before they burst into a clearing with a village.

Go to the village? Or ask Lilly for somewhere else to go?
 
Ben took Lilly again and led her towards the village. Just then she pulled up and began to flay backwards.


"I cant go there. You cant take me there, please somewhere else. My father, you a stranger and a man. He would strip the hide from my back for this. Please, to the church" she begged. Ben looked at her in disbelief. Okey, to the church he thought as she backpeddled. He turned and began following her down a trodden path to a little building. He at once stopped just short of the building feeling a strange dread creep into his heart.

He could not go in there and yet he was to protect Lilly. Ben did not usually go back on a promise and he did try to help others as much as he could. Something was not quite right with the little shack. He wanted much to turn and walk back to the top of the hill and into the village. He wanted to get some help for the man.


Does he go in and see if there is a reason for the feeling?

Does he leave Lilly and go on to the village seeking help?
 
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