Writing Challenge ~ November 2012~ Comments and Reviews

[Britwitch]

WRITING CHALLENGE REVIEW THREAD ~ NOVEMBER 2012​

Just a few little rules for this thread:-

• This thread is for comments and reviews only. Submissions go here!

• Please keep your comments focused on the pieces posted for the challenge running from 1st – 30th November 2012 only, this is not really intended to be a thread for conversation/flirting/mayhem and so on (Sorry to be a bore!). Writers should be able to find reviews/comments for their pieces without having to trawl through pages of banter (no matter how amusing/sexy it might be!)

• Readers/Reviewers:- Please keep your comments and reviews polite and, wherever possible, positive. If you have constructive criticism or advice for writers please do give it but be polite about it! You don’t have to like everything you read but if you really don’t have anything nice to say about something then I would suggest you refrain from posting. And if all you want to say is you liked a piece and no more…that’s great too! We all know how writers like to be appreciated!

• Authors:- Please take constructive criticism as it is intended, as an attempt at improving possible flaws/problems/areas of confusion in your piece. They are not (hopefully!) personal attacks on you or your work.

• This is supposed to be a fun way to get to know new writers and potential partners, to exercise our writing brains, it’s not a competition, please keep that in mind!

• One more thing…suggestions for future prompts are very welcome and should be PM’d to me – Britwitch – as a link ideally.

Previous challenges and reviews can be found here.

Happy reading!

 

[Miss_Vivi]

Hey all, I read all of them.. well most of them but here are my thoughts.

DW- Yours was very sweet, and I loved how you could feel her disappointment in the moment, before it was ever so nicely replaced. Also, excellent use of "fecking".

Yeishia- You aren't going to believe me, but I really enjoyed yours. Spine tingling and unexpected, I loved it.

SB/Bubbles- So. Sad! Still I loved it.

Sorry I had no real critiques of y'all, I was just enjoying the pieces.

 

[DarkWarrioress]

Hey all, I read all of them.. well most of them but here are my thoughts.

DW- Yours was very sweet, and I loved how you could feel her disappointment in the moment, before it was ever so nicely replaced. Also, excellent use of "fecking".

Yeishia- You aren't going to believe me, but I really enjoyed yours. Spine tingling and unexpected, I loved it.

SB/Bubbles- So. Sad! Still I loved it.

Sorry I had no real critiques of y'all, I was just enjoying the pieces.

Thanks, Vi. I wanted to do something different. With these challenges I usually end up doing something like SB did.

*grins* As for fecking, I didn't see her as type that outright said fuck a lot, so she would use a substitute.

I find it interesting how, so far, only M13 picked the other prompt.

 

[Scuttle Buttin']

SB/Bubbles- So. Sad! Still I loved it.

Thanks!

Thanks, Vi. I wanted to do something different. With these challenges I usually end up doing something like SB did.

I thought I'd do something a little different than I normally do on here.

 

[Mav Unlimited]

Yeishia, that was awesome. I loved it! You keep writing.

 

[yeishia]

Hey all, I read all of them.. well most of them but here are my thoughts.

Yeishia- You aren't going to believe me, but I really enjoyed yours. Spine tingling and unexpected, I loved .

Thank you...

Yeishia, that was awesome. I loved it! You keep writing.

I am trying, thank you Mav