Writer's Block! Need help with story!

[Lovepotion69]

Hi all,
I'm working on my first story and well, I kinda know what I want to write, but it's not working. I finally got to the sex scene and suddenly my darn brain shut off! Can you believe it, I'm writing an erotic story and I can't come up with anything for the sex scene, how pathetic is that? LOL

Please help me!
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She could hear the soft thump of the coat falling onto the cold linoleum floor. Her heart was beating faster and her stomach started to churn with excitement. She could not remember the last time she had felt this kind of excitement within her. Suddenly she felt him grip her right arm and waist. The grip was tight and she was surprised by the strength in it. Before she knew it, he had forcefully spun her around to face the wall.

With one hand running along her inner legs he pushed her legs apart. Standing with arms stretched out in front of her, palms firmly planted against the white cement wall and legs spread, she could feel him coming up from behind. His breath tickled her neck and made her shiver in anticipation.

His hands wiggled its way around her waist, she could feel him tugging at her sweater and before she knew it his hands were gripping her breasts. Gently but firmly he started to knead them, slowly working up the tempo. She could feel him standing right behind her, his belt buckle digging into her well-rounded ass. His breath still sending shivers down her spine and his lips playfully tugging on her earlobe.
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The male character is to be very much in control, think the cliche strip search thing. I just can't come up with what exactly he can do to her! Help! Brainstorming ideas please.

Thanks!
/LP
P.S Hm, and this is definitely not the final version. I probably will change some stuff and add some more detail, but please come up with ideas.

 

[peterpan]

Cool! this is the best use of the human brain!

He slides her sweater/dress/etc over her head, perhaps not all the way in which case she could not see.

Or perhaps clothes could be ripped down the back.

Alternatively she could be pressed against the wall by his body, in which case sweater could be removed with her hands infront or behind.

Her partially removed tee-shirt/dress could be twisted in one hand to allow him to restrain both wrists either behind her back, or above her head against the wall.

She hears/feels him loosening his belt, his other hand gripping her hair/or holding one arm behind her back etc.

 

[sirhugs]

I think he leaves the outer clothes in place for now, and rips her panties off, sliding a finger into her.

I like lots of dialogue, so I think he verbally assumes copmmand, and she agrees, but she says very liitle.

Then, do you want the sex to continue here, or take it to another location? Yopu have not established where they are. The linoleum floor suggests a home, but it could be an office I suppose. The white cement wal is instutional- is it a scvhool, or factory? Is there a table or counter he lifts her onto, and then rips the rest of her clothes off? Or do they go into a bedroom?

 

[Lovepotion69]

I think he leaves the outer clothes in place for now, and rips her panties off, sliding a finger into her.

I like lots of dialogue, so I think he verbally assumes copmmand, and she agrees, but she says very liitle.

Then, do you want the sex to continue here, or take it to another location? Yopu have not established where they are. The linoleum floor suggests a home, but it could be an office I suppose. The white cement wal is instutional- is it a scvhool, or factory? Is there a table or counter he lifts her onto, and then rips the rest of her clothes off? Or do they go into a bedroom?

They are in a cinema. I don't intend to move the location. It's not in the screening room, just in the cinema building. By the back exit and you can hear people walking by outside.

It's based on a real thing, but of course I want to make it more interesting than it was! lol

 

[sirhugs]

do you want her naked?
do you want him to enter her forcefully from behind, pressin her into the wall, or turn her and fondle her, before the sex?

His mouth closes tightly on hers to muffle her protests ( are they real or mock?).

he binds he wrists behind her, using her bra.

any of these images help inspire you?

I think you spend at least 100 words on his fingers on her thiighs and labia. And as many on the treatment of ner breasts and nipples. Mix the two sets of imaghes, also tossing in his erection rubbing against her, and intercut her emotional reaction.

the actual sex is the anticlimax to the buildup. but the intensity makes the release sweet.

 

[TrinaT]

Is it someone that she was interested in that she saw at the cinema? Was she hoping to intice him or was she already teasing him hoping for this type of response? I agree with SirHugs, the buildup for this can really charge up the story.

Just my humble opinion.

Trina T.