Writer Needed for Hypno-Wife Doctor Story idea!

rover0003

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Hi,
I came up with a story idea but my writing skills aren't that good could someone help me out with writing the story?
Here's the idea:
A faithful and conservative wife goes to see a
therapist for stress problem. After the doctor sees
her nice figure, he hypnotizes her into thinking that
he's her husband (who's on a business trip) and bones
her like there's no tomorrow. She begins to suspect
that something is wrong when he asks her to do things
that her hubby never asked before (like massages his
feet with her tits, etc). After he's done with her he
hypnotizes her again this time he tricked her into
thinking that her bra is still on even though he kept
her bra as a momento and told her to go home. Her
humilation continues as she goes shopping around the
mall (without a bra on and she picked a super thin
sheer white cotton t-shirt to wear that day--hot day).
She got stares and strange comments from people of all
ages. She keep telling her that it's "okay" and she's
"decent" because she's wearing a thick sports bra. She
so convienced she everything is okay that she took her
time and even went in an icecream store to get some
icecream...the coolness of the store really does
wonders on her already super visible nipples. It was
so hot that day that she has decided to take off her
t-shirt in the mall. She finally realizes something is
very wrong when a teenager commented about the color,
shape, and texture of her tits in so much detail that
she knew he could see them.
Not sure about the ending yet.

What do you think? If you have the time to write it
it'll be great!
 
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rover0003 said:
Hi,
I came up with a story idea but my writing skills aren't that good could someone help me out with writing the story?
Here's the idea:
Just read your stories on mcstories.com...must say
that you're a very talented writer! It was my pleasure
reading it!
Are you thinking about writing another story? I have a
suggestion:
A faithful and conservative wife goes to see a
therapist for stress problem. After the doctor sees
her nice figure, he hypnotizes her into thinking that
he's her husband (who's on a business trip) and bones
her like there's no tomorrow. She begins to suspect
that something is wrong when he asks her to do things
that her hubby never asked before (like massages his
feet with her tits, etc). After he's done with her he
hypnotizes her again this time he tricked her into
thinking that her bra is still on even though he kept
her bra as a momento and told her to go home. Her
humilation continues as she goes shopping around the
mall (without a bra on and she picked a super thin
sheer white cotton t-shirt to wear that day--hot day).
She got stares and strange comments from people of all
ages. She keep telling her that it's "okay" and she's
"decent" because she's wearing a thick sports bra. She
so convienced she everything is okay that she took her
time and even went in an icecream store to get some
icecream...the coolness of the store really does
wonders on her already super visible nipples. It was
so hot that day that she has decided to take off her
t-shirt in the mall. She finally realizes something is
very wrong when a teenager commented about the color,
shape, and texture of her tits in so much detail that
she knew he could see them.
Not sure about the ending yet.

What do you think? If you have the time to write it
it'll be great!

There are a couple of problems with this.
1) You cannot make anyone do under hypnosis what they wouldn't do otherwise.
2) You have her thinking things through under hypnosis. By definition that doesn't work. Hypnosis is a state of complete release from active thought among other things.
3) The bra thing will only work until it's pointed out to her. Then it falls apart.
4) You have a hypnotized woman walking around a shopping mall interacting with people out of the control of the hypnotist. That is a dangerous situation.

The story can be written, but the above problems have to be dealth with to make it believable. To do that would be quite a long story. It would be much better to break it up into a smaller context.

Look at this thread.... https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=191076

This story is actually already written and submitted but not posted yet. It has much of what you are looking for.
 
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