would someone review a partial 1st story?

[Fredthecanuck]

I don't know anything about this or if I may have any business in trying to write. All I do know is that I have always enjoyed erotica and have several ideas run through my head from time to time. I have finally set some of it to 'paper' but do not know if I should be content with that or if someone else may see enough merit in it to enjoy it as well.

 

[bisexplicit]

There are plenty of people who will be happy to do this.
While you can ask here, in our friendly HT section...there is an editor's forum and an author's hangout which I think might provide you with a lot of help as well.
Good luck.

 

[Leeleigh]

I don't know anything about this or if I may have any business in trying to write. All I do know is that I have always enjoyed erotica and have several ideas run through my head from time to time. I have finally set some of it to 'paper' but do not know if I should be content with that or if someone else may see enough merit in it to enjoy it as well.

Go for a professional.. thats what I do for my stories.. They tend to catch not only the spelling errors, but also the grammer and word usage errors that we don't.

 

[leagel]

Fred,
I would be happy to look over your story and give you an honest appraisal. Although I'm not a professional editor, I recently edited a selection of short stories put together for a graduate thesis at my local university. And I'm a lawyer (shh, don't tell anyone) so I work with writing all the time...Of course, working with erotic writing will be a bit more enjoyable than working with briefs...

 

[Fredthecanuck]

Thank you for replying but I am totally lost here

I realize I don't even know how to respond or contact any of you. I have a lot to learn.

 

[Leeleigh]

I realize I don't even know how to respond or contact any of you. I have a lot to learn.

honey, click on each name and our profiles will come up.. on the left hand side of the page is our profiles, on the right hand side of the page is a way to get in touch with us. You have a pm aka private message feature, that if we activated it will allow you to message us, and also a email feature that also, if we have activated it, will allow you to send an email to us.

Hang in sweetie.. you will learn.. If you have questions, you now know how to PM or Email people.

Hope that helps you.

 

[Leeleigh]

BTW honey... activate yours.. I just checked and you have not done so.. If you need help, pm me and I will walk you through what you need to set up.

 

[Fredthecanuck]

Thank you Leeleigh

I have found out thanks to you how do enable some of the features.
There is a lot more to learn.

 

[Leeleigh]

I have found out thanks to you how do enable some of the features.
There is a lot more to learn.

You are very welcome. I am not on much during the day, but am here alot during the night.. If you need help, please feel free to pm me.