Would someone please edit for me?

[jondong420]

I think the story is pretty well written, so far, but I am no pro. Would someone please read and edit my material. I would say it would be classified as "Gay", to this point.......

 

[jondong420]

the cable guy

oopsy

 

[Tigersman]

Posting story

I think you are getting ready to discover you broke one of the rules of Literotica by posting this much of your story. Laurel does not tolerate this. What you should have done was tell how many words, the category your story would fit in and the timeframe you wanted to have your story edited.