Would really like some feed back on my stories.

[angelbitchss]

Sorry people, I have fixed the links to stories, any feed back appreciated

I really would like to know what people think of my stories. Any changes that could improve them, good or bad. Hope to hear from some of you that have read them.

I really like to respond to people who give me feedback. I am going on holidays Aug. 13-21, but when I get back I will respond to all who have left me feedback. Angelbitchss

latest: sex and the great outdoors english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=204540

previous ones:

masters work shop:
english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=204542

master, remember me always:
english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=204539

 

[angelbitchss]

tks buce

Thanks buce, I appreciate the feed back. I do hope your next hike is a very memorable one. Angelbitchss

 

[tobe_decided]

master's workshop

i loved the ideas in this. definately my top ten of fantasies. the battery was a woderful touch.

 

[angelbitchss]

TKS tobe

Hey tobe

Just want to say thanks for the feedback. I am glad you liked the story. And the battery does give a bit of a bite. Not something I like to use very often. Actually when he mentioned tring it, I did freak a bit. It does carry a zap.

Angelbitchss