Would like to have someone read and give general feedback/suggestions.

[HappySpouse]

I've written about my wife having her first bisexual experience with a stripper. I would like a few more sets of eyes on it before I take it to her for final approval.

 

[HertsSub]

I've written about my wife having her first bisexual experience with a stripper. I would like a few more sets of eyes on it before I take it to her for final approval.

Happy to take a look at it.

PM me.

P

 

[sdsioux]

happy to look

Happy to read and give an honest opinion. PM it to me.
Tom/sdsioux

 

[HappySpouse]

Messages sent. Thanks a ton for your help.

 

[sdsioux]

how did you make out?