Tricialen
Literotica Guru
- Joined
- Jan 3, 2008
- Posts
- 6,154
I just posted chapter 3 of Demon Wind and while the story is doing well..there hasn't been a lot of feedback on the other chapters...
I would love to have some constructive feedback...I want to be better, smoother...umm comments would be very appreciated...
Demon Wind ch 3
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=367184
I would love to have some constructive feedback...I want to be better, smoother...umm comments would be very appreciated...
Demon Wind ch 3
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=367184
