Would anyone mind.... ?

[WillowPuss]

I tried something new (to me) last night.

(Thats caught your interest, right?)

And, I wondered if I could share it here and get your comments?

The only thing is ... it's a poem.
I sat and wrote a poem.

Not quite sure why
it just sorta happened.

I know I could ask for feedback in the authors section, but it is not that sort of feedback I want.

I would dearly love to get feedback from this forum - cos the poem is about BDSM.


Soooooooo ... would it be OK if I put it here, and ????

 

[Sandia]

I would like to see it.
(I clicked "my stories," but it wadn't there.)

 

[RainCrow]

.

Where oh where is it at WillowPuss I want to read it.

 

[SubbieHubbie]

Way I figure it - go ahead. If it's unwelcome you'll know - but this seems like an accepting group. Personally, I'm always interested in hearing and writing poetry. Actually, now there's a thought, we could look to make this a poetry and feedback thread based in the lifestyle. Or would that extension from only yours to include others be offensive?

 

[WillowPuss]

No, SH, it certainly wouldn't offend me!

I found that there is already a thread on BDSM poetry in the forum ... maybe I will up it there.

Sorry Sandia and RainCrow - I didn't make myself clear.
I had written it, but not posted it.

I may submit it to Lit if the feedback here tells me that I am at least not spouting a lot of nonsense.

 

[cymbidia]

We've already got what you're wanting, SubbieHubbie. It was one of the first threads posted to this forum. You might be interested in reading through the the whole three pages before you post yours to it, too - just to see who writes in our cozy little community. Or, at least, who will admit to doing so.

http://www.literotica.com/forum/showthread.php?threadid=69907

 

[SubbieHubbie]

Thanks Cym, and Willow, look forward to reading that thread in about 5 seconds.