Would anyone like to edit some prose of mine?

average gina

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Well, I have put a thread in the editor's forum, but I figured I'd ask anyone here. Besides, I'm a sucker for positive reinforcement. I believe I am strong enough to actually take criticism on this stuff as well.

I'm embarrassed to say that my prose writing is a polar opposite of my poetry. It's probably kind of vanilla compared to what is out there. I'd like to post "Spades" here to see if anyone has an opinion about it. "Spades" is about four strangers brought together and a master, with the assistance of a mediator, have a session of group sex. There are a few other stories that I have written.

Would anyone oppose my posting it for all to see? :eek: :confused:
 
Oh yeah...

The thread in the Editors' forum is here. It includes parts of all of the stories I've written.
 
Well, I guess 'edit' is a strong word. If anyone is interested in looking at them without being critical about it, let me know, please....
 
Hi, Gina! Normally I would say yes, but I'm pretty busy this week, and I cannot not be critical on my edits/reviews.

If you don't mind waiting and don't mind permanent scars, PM me. :D :devil:
 
Thanks. I don't know if this person wants me to say their name, but someone is assisting me. Thanks!
 
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