Would anyone be interested in taking a look at something I wrote before I submit?

[VixenValkrane]

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[SynSlave]

I'll have time tomorrow (unless you somehow manage to get it to me within the hour). I'll pm email but if you can put host it on google/MS docs/drive it's usually more convenient for everyone.

Either way.

 

[MadameSarcasm]

What kind of feedback are you looking for? Overall impression, grammar, what works, what doesn't?

 

[wxpprnpprnt]

If you want a random reader's non-expert opinion, I will be happy to read carefully and give an honest opinion.

 

[BrokenSpokes]

I'd be willing to take a look. PM if you still need a reader.

 

[waratah]

Interest in other people's draft

Pm if still looking

 

[Specula]

Hey all,

This was my first attempt at an erotic story. It is not very long, 754 words. Older man, younger woman.

If anyone wants to give it a read and let me know what you think comment or PM me.

Thanks

Vix

I'd be happy - it is one of my big interests.