Won't you come say hi to me? :)

[Daisy May]

Hello Literoticans!

Just checking out the site and playing around in the forums before I post any of my poems and stories. I checked out the FAQS, read some of this, some of that, and everything looks pretty neat so far, and a lot of fun.

Anything I need to be warned about, please fill me in. It may take me a while to understand it all, but I'm a fast learner. So I think

Daisy May

 

[annaswirls]

Hello Literoticans!

Just checking out the site and playing around in the forums before I post any of my poems and stories. I checked out the FAQS, read some of this, some of that, and everything looks pretty neat so far, and a lot of fun.

Anything I need to be warned about, please fill me in. It may take me a while to understand it all, but I'm a fast learner. So I think

Daisy May

Welcome Daisy May!

oh come on just post 'em! Please!
we will be nice, I promise

Warnings? oh it is much more fun to have the warnings come and meet you

but seriously, there are some bizarre things at literotica, like why you are a virgin, why are their different profiles for different places at lit, why there is no mention of poetry on the opening screen, things like that.....

come on in, the water is fine!

~anna

 

[Daisy May]

Thank you, annaswirls

Wow, okay! Those things I didn't find in the FAQ. Maybe you could be kind enough to tell me all this.

I'm a virgin, I see. This looks a little strange. I read that I have to wait to post my picture after a 100 posts. Not a problem. Now, I'm really laughing about that virgin thing. I'm 33, have children and well, I'm sure you get the hint.

Thanks for the welcome!

 

[HomerPindar]

Just goes to show, you're doc was wrong, you can be a virgin again!

An easy way to learn how to do things in the form messages is to hit the quote button to a message that does what you want to do. For example:

Writing in a larger text...

And once you see how it's done, you can skip the actual reply and use that particular trick where you want.

 

[Daisy May]

Just goes to show, you're doc was wrong, you can be a virgin again!

An easy way to learn how to do things in the form messages is to hit the quote button to a message that does what you want to do. For example:

Writing in a larger text...

And once you see how it's done, you can skip the actual reply and use that particular trick where you want.

That was cool

Thanks!

 

[DeepAsleep]

Warnings?

Don't bend over if you can't see behind you.

>=]

 

[Daisy May]

xox

 

[annaswirls]

sweet!


Have you checked out the new poems here?

I swear most of us have only found the poems in here by complete accident.

bump in the night


New Poems

 

[Daisy May]

sweet!


Have you checked out the new poems here?

I swear most of us have only found the poems in here by complete accident.

bump in the night


New Poems

Yes, I have, Anna. Seems I'm all over the place. I like!

 

[champagne1982]

Hi Daisy May. Welcome to the Lit side of erotica.. although we do try to keep them tittilated.. tantalized.. tight.. turgid..

alliterate side of Lit? ..

well I'm sure you get the idea.

 

[The_Fool]

Hi Daisy May. Welcome to the Lit side of erotica.. although we do try to keep them tittilated.. tantalized.. tight.. turgid..

alliterate side of Lit? ..

well I'm sure you get the idea.

I just love it when you use alliteration.....

Hey Daisy May. Watch out for monkeys, fools and liars......

 

[lustheart]

Alliteration.....yes, thats what im missing....HEY, 100 POSTS! XD

 

[Guest]

Welcome, Daisy May.

 

[Edward Teach]

Welcome Daisy!!

You aren't a Southern gal by any chance, are you?



Ed

 

[Daisy May]

33333

 

[WickedEve]

Hey Daisy May. Watch out for monkeys, fools and liars......

Especially, fools.

Howdy, Daisy May!

 

[Daisy May]

Howdy back, WickedEve

 

[champagne1982]

The undeniable pleasures
we have found together
make me want to wake each day
to live and love you more.

Hearing a soft moan
escape from deep
within your dream;
the aroma of night’s passion
still on your warm skin,
heighten my senses
and cause cravings
I could not have known
would be born again in morning.

With gentle caresses
to wake your sleepy body
from soft repose,
I find affecting you
becomes a powerful
aphrodisiac
as your arousal brings,
for me, unexpected desire.

Soft kisses leave
a trail of moist prints
down the length of you
until lips of fire
replace feather-like strokes
with warmer,
wetter sensations.

Morning passion
controls and unfolds
pleasure reminiscent
of night’s communion.
Day breaks as your body;
my center of the universe,
explodes with the sunrise
and another day
of loving you begins.

<snip>...</snip>It's all is new to me, so I'm just gonna keep on reading in these forums and see how people comment to others poetry before I submit my own.

Well Daisy, let me comment on your poem. This is a sweet tribute poem and one I'm sure the romantic among us will enjoy as a quick, smile-inducing read.

I can't give you much advice on the poem, thematically, because, you see, this theme has been written and re-written since humanity first discovered that everyone, given a pen, can write (maybe not in coherent symbols, but they'll put lines somewhere)! I'm sure your lover loves it.

Your phrases are rhythmical and as I read through, I hear the lilting lisp of whispers in my darling's ear. It's a solid example of a free verse love poem.

Thankyou for sharing.

 

[flyguy69]

Well Daisy, let me comment on your poem. This is a sweet tribute poem and one I'm sure the romantic among us will enjoy as a quick, smile-inducing read....

Yep, that's what it induced in me. A big, stiff smile! /

Welcome, Daisy May!

 

[champagne1982]

Yep, that's what it induced in me. A big, stiff smile!

Welcome, Daisy May!

How saucy is that? You've gotta love comments like this, too, Daisy May. We have lewdly lacivious lotharios all over the place in lit!

 

[flyguy69]

How saucy is that? You've gotta love comments like this, too, Daisy May. We have lewdly lacivious lotharios all over the place in lit!

Careful! You start alliterating like that and you'll get the Fool foaming at the mouth again!

 

[Daisy May]

Well Daisy, let me comment on your poem. This is a sweet tribute poem and one I'm sure the romantic among us will enjoy as a quick, smile-inducing read.

I can't give you much advice on the poem, thematically, because, you see, this theme has been written and re-written since humanity first discovered that everyone, given a pen, can write (maybe not in coherent symbols, but they'll put lines somewhere)! I'm sure your lover loves it.

Your phrases are rhythmical and as I read through, I hear the lilting lisp of whispers in my darling's ear. It's a solid example of a free verse love poem.

Thankyou for sharing.

Thanks. Yup, it's one of those poems that everyone has seem to have wrote at one time or another. I have others but I'm going to give myself some time before I start submitting. I hope it was at least half enjoyable

 

[BooMerengue]

Hiya Daisy!

Here's a link you can use, I'm sure! Test Your Posting Here

and use the trick Homer showed you if you really want to
yell

at someone! lol

Welcome- you will love it here.

 

[Daisy May]

Thank you, BooMerengue

 

[BooMerengue]

... and when you want to say something and aren't sure what? Try this... http://www.tonitags.co.uk/images/laugh4.gif