Woman turns loser into bull

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Premise: woman with access to pharmaceutical and conditioning technology transforms a loser guy into a bull she has/thinks she has, under her control.

So this idea came from reading a hypnosis story where the person who got hypnotized was submissive to the person who invented the tech but they in turn had been conditioned to be able to call forth a new confident persona which let them dominate other women.

So the idea is to have an older woman find a younger man who is nice but physically and socially pathetic. Whether tricking him throughout, or telling him half of the truth (that she will make him irresistible to women or even promises sex in exchange for letting him be her guinea pig) she gives him a series of injections and creates a programming system to make him a physically imposing (muscular) specimen who is now swinging a more impressive cock, sweating powerful pheromones and has a confidence boost that will kick in whenever he is stressed. With his new attributes, he quickly begins a number of sexual conquests...not realizing he’s still completely under control of his benefactor.

So the question is: who is the benefactor and what does she get out of it?

1. My original idea was an aunt and her nephew. She transforms nephew to ruin her sister’s social standing, planning on getting him to pursue his family members and record it.

2. Benefactor is testing system to be used on the market. Men would kill to receive the treatment while women would love to have the control.

3. Bored supervillain. She’s in hiding but wants to get up to some fun. While she waits to get the newest news that it’s safe to go back to villainy, she entertains herself watching her experiment claim the sleepy town she set up in.

Of course, our new bull doesn’t necessarily have to follow the rules. Our scientist might think she’s made herself immune only to suddenly become a conquest (though for added fun, the control she did try to put on him makes sure he keeps coming back to her, even when she’s exhausted from their last fuck).

Another thought was format. I thought it might be interesting to have it third person when it’s the woman and the bull when he’s not actively under mind control and then have it be in first person when the bull is recounting his conquests to his mistress.
 
If the confidence boost is solely stress-triggered, he’s gonna get his ass beat by the next scrapper to come along and insult him for whatever reason.

Perhaps tie it to stress while aroused, instead? Even that’s risky - out to a club, gets a cutie dancing dirty with him, and hubby/boyfriend shows up.

I like the 3rd person overall with a 1st person confessional bit, but am not sure how to pull it off without losing the reader. Maybe confessional then flashback to the action in 3rd person?

Maybe stress of a particularly embarrassing confession (incest, a GILF, homosexual encounter,? All are possibilities) could flip the switch and Nice Nebbish turns into were-playboy and takes the programmer?
 
Maybe it should be more, anytime he’s about to slip back into his old habits of being nervous around women or preferring to leave a stressful situation, it will trigger him to suddenly meet things head on and the confidence to try handling things as opposed to fleeing. He’s naturally had a confidence boost from his new physique and sexual prowess, but if he’s in danger of slipping back, he’ll get a surge of confidence.

For example, he starts seducing a woman and her boyfriend or husband shows up ready to fight, he suddenly feels like he needs to stay and deal with it. He doesn’t need to fight, he can suddenly strike up a conversation and the raw confidence he has either confuses the paramour into thinking nothing was going on (seeing this guy have no reaction to his accusations just confuses him: Even a real scumbag would at least try to antagonize him) or buys enough time for the pheromones to overpower them and become submissive to him to.

Though other situations triggering it would be interesting and does tie into something that would be interesting. I don’t read the genre too much but I do often see bulls that also use the husband for satisfaction tend to get portrayed as not queer, like getting a blowjob or fucking a guy as a warm up to fucking their wife/girlfriend doesn’t count

I would actually like the loser turned bull in this case to be queer. Maybe he gets a confession in the locker room and the sudden surge of confidence due to the situation lets him not only fuck the guy but come out to himself as bi, pan, or just generally queer.

The switch in perspectives I figure would be between the woman who transformed him reflecting on how things are going, and reports she receives from him, which are in the first person. Essentially, he comes to do a “job” enters a trance, and then reports what happened between their last visit. After the report, she lets him out of it and either has him go so she can reflect on it, or let him out and have sex with him.
 
Maybe the woman is creating her own personal bull so that she can use him to procure female lovers for herself?

Another idea, veering quite a bit from the OP's idea, is that the woman is a kindly elderly woman who just wants to help people. Particularly, geeky young men. She takes them in, fucks them, nurtures them, builds up their confidence with charm, kindness, and lots of practice, and then sends them out into the world to enjoy themselves. And then finds her next "protege" to start the cycle all over again.
 
I really like both those ideas. The second would make for a pretty good story.

The first would be pretty entertaining and would easily work into the story. She tasks him with not just finding lovers of his own but also gauging their interest in women and then bringing them back to her to be trained into her own sapphic lovers.

...could get pretty funny too if things get out of hand.

For example:

James met me at the door, his wide smile letting me know he expected praise for his new “acquisition.” I feigned disinterest and let him take my shoes off before leaving him kneeling in the mud room; it was important to remind him of his place once in awhile, after all. I took my time in front of my bedroom door.

I heard two sets of labored breathing that only seemed to get more desperate as I turned the knob. When I opened the door, I saw that James had done VERY well: a mature woman with a figure that even the greatest artist in the world couldn’t put to canvas and a young woman, middle 20s at best who radiated a conflicting innocence yet sensuality that only direct experience could properly describe, were kneeling topless with their backs to me, their only clothing sheer panties, stockings and a rapidly growing patch of goosebumps.

“My what wonderful little sweets have made their way here. Turn around and introduce yourselves my pretties. I assume James let you know what is expected of you?”

They turned and my jaw dropped. Not at their beauty though they certainly were but rather WHO they were.

“Oh yes, mistress, Master James was very clear how best to be your sluts.” Said Mayor Lewis, giving me a smile she definitely didn’t let the voters see.

“Yes mistress, I’m eager to serve.” Said a certain celebrity whose name I will leave off lest I incur the wrath of her record label.

“Just a moment, dears.” I said, slipping out of the room. What the fuck was I going to do?!
 
Maybe the woman is creating her own personal bull so that she can use him to procure female lovers for herself?

Another idea, veering quite a bit from the OP's idea, is that the woman is a kindly elderly woman who just wants to help people. Particularly, geeky young men. She takes them in, fucks them, nurtures them, builds up their confidence with charm, kindness, and lots of practice, and then sends them out into the world to enjoy themselves. And then finds her next "protege" to start the cycle all over again.

This is more what I was thinking when I clicked on this idea, butttttt I've been around lit toooooo much because it also dawned on me that the "woman" could be the guy's mother.

I'll bet people would love that kind of story... mother fucking her son until he had the confidence to get other women.
 
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