Can someone make a story of this rp - http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=865246
or story about cheating sexy mom and submissive wimp son
or story about cheating sexy mom and submissive wimp son
Follow along with the video below to see how to install our site as a web app on your home screen.
Note: This feature may not be available in some browsers.
Can someone make a story of this rp - http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=865246
or story about cheating sexy mom and submissive wimp son
Is this supposed to be like a humiliation story? I honestly think this would be more effective coming from the son's perspective. After all it is HIS mom and the person he hates most in the world is trying to bang her.
I would love to see that kind of story......where the "bully" starts playing Mr. Buddy yet the son knows he just wants to get closer to his hot young mom but is too intimidated to say anything....so he just watches his innocent mother sink further into the arms of this brute until finally....... gawd why can't there be more stories like that here.![]()
I'd suggest try writing your version.
A cure exists. It's called 'writing'. Write and write and write, and eventually, you might not suck. But if you don't write and write and write, your writing will *definitely* suck. Practice makes proficient.I would, but unfortunately I suck big time at writing.![]()
To me, the basic problem is: how does Mom go from prim-and-proper to boy-fucker? In the LIT universe, of course, logical motivation doesn't matter. She just DOES. "Oh, Roy looks good; think I'll fuck him." IRL is a bit trickier. Has he stalked her, targeted her, played tricks to alienate her from Dad and family? Does he blackmail her, then turn her into an insatiable sexpot?the basic idea - prim and proper mother and her son's classmate or bully become lovers. son knows, but can't do anything - he is a wimp. he likes to watch than to do anything. and mother likes it too.
I like what you're saying here. This story might be very interesting, but it could also easily deviate into a number of cliches. Obviously, in the LIT universe, nothing is too 'realistic' or 'logical', but I still think the best stories are the ones that progress somewhat slowly and naturally. Something that keeps you guessing (atleast somewhat).To me, the basic problem is: how does Mom go from prim-and-proper to boy-fucker? In the LIT universe, of course, logical motivation doesn't matter. She just DOES. "Oh, Roy looks good; think I'll fuck him." IRL is a bit trickier. Has he stalked her, targeted her, played tricks to alienate her from Dad and family? Does he blackmail her, then turn her into an insatiable sexpot?
I like what you're saying here. This story might be very interesting, but it could also easily deviate into a number of cliches. Obviously, in the LIT universe, nothing is too 'realistic' or 'logical', but I still think the best stories are the ones that progress somewhat slowly and naturally. Something that keeps you guessing (atleast somewhat).
To avoid cliches, I think the son shouldn't be the typical wimp, he's quite a normal guy in his class, somewhat quiet, but doesn't stand out too much, he generally avoids trouble and mainly hangs out with people outside of his school. The bully isnt a typical meathead with giant fists and a ten inch cock either. He is one of the more popular guys and quite goodlooking, but doesn't terrorize the class. He dominates on a more subtle level and always seems to get his way in class, annoying kids like the son, who doesn't speak out much.
Somehow the son does something to embarrass the bully infront of the entire class. This wouldn't be something planned, this would happen completely accidentally, but the bully would blame the son for it. Instead of simply beating up the son after school, he decides to go deeper with his revenge, planning on making the son look like a fool for the entire school.
To do this, he plans on fucking the sons mother, a possibility here could be that he tapes the sex, another possibility could be making sure that the father catches him and letting the story leak out through word of mouth. The tape might work better and also provides other possibilities.
The whole seduction shouldn't happen in half a chapter, preferably this takes quite a lot of time. I like what Hypoxia wrote about this, perhaps he stops by the son's house ('stalking') (which the son lets happen, thinking the bully just wants to eat his snacks and play his games, he's too afraid for a beating to tell him to piss off). He could target her, flirt with her, seduce her in a more subtle way. I've always thought blackmail or simply taking the ten inch cock out (which the mother would jump on, ofcourse) the easy way out. The bully pushing himself into their lives and getting closer with the mother over the course of time is much more subtle and harder to write, but will also pay off bigtime.
So, why would the mother accept the bully's advances? I'm not completely sure on this one. I havent thought of anything too creative but perhaps the father was travelling for work quite a bit, or they could have moved into the neighbourhood not too long ago and the mother doesnt have any friends yet, which is why she enjoys and accepts the company of the bully.
So, how and when does the mother let the bully fuck her? Well, again, I don't think I have an idea that hasn't been tried before, but what seems most likely and interesting to write about is that the bully is simply very charming, perhaps his manipulations have caused a slight rupture between her and her husband, on a weak moment he strikes, and tapes it all.
Why does the son not try to stop this? Well, first of all, he's quite afraid of physical repercussions from the bully. Since he embarrassed the bully in the beginning of the story he has been happy he's gotten off pretty well, and when he realizes what the intent of the bully with his mother is (which the bully would probably try to hide) he would only try to sabotage it in a non-obvious way.
But what about the point of view? Well, this comes down to comfort for the writer first, but it also plays a role in the information we'll be getting. If the bully is to be our point of view we could get an insight into his psyche, all the subtle manipulations and seductions would be quite obvious to us, as the bully would go over it in his head. If the mother would be our point of view we'd get a clear view of the end result, how she perceives the seductions and how she's slowly baited, slowly pulled into 'the dark side'. If the son would be our point of view we'd get less information, since he wouldnt have his nose right on top of all the sexual happenings. Obviously he'd witness most of it in one way or another. A very good writer could make this lack of information even more arousing than getting the full information. It would also be easier to work a humiliation theme in this way.
And how do we go from there? Well, there's multiple options. If the writer was all about humiliation he would probably describe the way the story or tape would spread in detail. Things could also take a different route. If the writer wanted to stretch the story he could let the son sabotage the tape in one way or another, after which the bully would have to make a second attempt on the mother, which would mean more sex. The story could also be flipped around. What if the attempt of the bully to seduce the mother would fail, and he'd come home defeated, only to find the son fucking the bully's mother! Could be quite the switcharoo.
Anyway, these have been my rambling thoughts on this subject. I quite like the idea of it, but a lot of the stories I've read about this subject have either been full of cliches or shortcuts. There are a few good ones out there though.
So let's twist the cliche. School bully (Biff) targets MILF mom (Melissa) of non-aggressive boy (Norm). Meanwhile, across the street, the same scenario is playing out, with genders reversed. Clique queen (Ashley) targets studly father (Franco) of non-clique girl (Giselle). Biff and Ashley are a pair, and devious. They coordinate their strategies, advise and support each other, etc. Maybe Biff plays nice to Giselle and Ashley flirts with Norm to distract them from what's really happening. I'm not sure how Melissa's hubby Harold and Franco's wife Wilma are involved -- except for their affair, of course.I quite like the idea of it, but a lot of the stories I've read about this subject have either been full of cliches or shortcuts.
So let's twist the cliche. School bully (Biff) targets MILF mom (Melissa) of non-aggressive boy (Norm). Meanwhile, across the street, the same scenario is playing out, with genders reversed. Clique queen (Ashley) targets studly father (Franco) of non-clique girl (Giselle). Biff and Ashley are a pair, and devious. They coordinate their strategies, advise and support each other, etc. Maybe Biff plays nice to Giselle and Ashley flirts with Norm to distract them from what's really happening. I'm not sure how Melissa's hubby Harold and Franco's wife Wilma are involved -- except for their affair, of course.
Throw in enough cliches and it almost makes sense.![]()