Winsome Romance

[champagne1982]

Hello all. My Valentine's Day story is posted. I appreciate all comments on my story. It's about a young woman falling in love with an older man.

Winsome Romance

 

[dfm4393]

It is well written and flows evenly. You do an excellent job of setting each scene with phrases like “He held her in an embrace that was roughened, she now suspected, by the rawness of his feeling.” It allows the reader to understand the characters emotions as if they were connected. It did not have much sex which may disappoint some but also please others.

 

[champagne1982]

The best sex is implied...

If a writer of erotica finds the need to always include implicit sex in their stories, I think they are fooling themselves. Erotic behaviour can be as simple as a smile and a gesture, tab A doesn't always need to be inserted into as many slots as it can feel its way into.

With that said, dfm, thank you for your comments and compliment.