Will's Ride

[RavishedAngel]

My other thread didn't get any posts, so I figured I might as well try again. I'm a bisexual submissive, and I really really really enjoy rape and blood and nonconsent and screaming and all of that good stuff... Be as rough as you'd like. Bestiality/nonhuman, BSDM, etc, are definitely acceptable.

Will

It was his eighteenth birthday, and for that his parents had given him a horse. A gorgeous, light-footed stallion, colored a light reddish-bronze color. It matched his hair, oddly enough.

Overwhelmed with joy at his new gift, Will had taken the horse out for a ride nearly as soon as it was put into his care. His parents had been reluctant to let him go -- after all, he and the horse still needed to be aquainted so that they would respect eachother. But he had gone anyway, and he rode all through the day, never taking a break until it was nearly dark out. A bad idea, that, since his horse was getting irate by the early afternoon, and the stallion didn't hesitate to flip the boy off of its back once they slowed down.

The stallion stayed nearby while Will tried to regain himself -- his head had landed barely an inch away from a sizeable rock set into the ground. There was no use trying to ride back now, since he'd only be thrown off again, and he might not be so lucky next time.

So the boy sat, bronze bangs falling over his green eyes, white tunic and brown pants wrinkled from the stallion's fit. Nobody would go out looking for him yet, since he used to run off like this all the time.

 

[RavishedAngel]

Anybody? If no one's joining, than can someone give me tips on how to write something better? :\

 

[katalynn]

Black cloaked figure flashes through the trees, weaving in and out of the branches as easily as it would be on ground. No sounds were made cept for the wind rustly through the trees, blowing my scent in the other direction. Followed the boy on the horse. The horse clearly irritated, finally throwing the boy off hard onto the ground. I could only laugh, mostly at the horse laughing at the boy.

Drew closer while staying in the trees, somewhat surprised the horse stayed by his side, then again any animal would stay by their humans side. The boy slowly woke, moving to sit up, I waited just a bit more before slipping out of the trees keepin to the shadows and within my cloak so he wouldn't see my face, nor my skin. Even my hands had gloves on them reaching up towards the elbows.

Drawing long, perfectly shaped, sharpened, and the perfect shine of a sword to his throat. Handles were snake like twining together at the tails, two heads on both sides wrapped around a dragons claw towards the top. Both snakes had rubies for eyes.
Lifted his head so he could look into the depths of my shadowy hood, never seeing my face. Soft yet stern voice trailed from with the depths;

"Why are you on my lands? You are very far from where belong."

Looked towards the horse, a beauty indeed far to wonderous for a boy.

"Did you steal this beast? If not then why ride him like he's nothing more than a beast? Even animals need rest to you know."

Pressed the sword a little more against his throat, letting him feel the sharpness of the tip, yet being careful to not cut him. He was pretty tasty looking and I may find some use for him.

"Speak boy.. Or I shall find a way to make you respect this beast in a way you most likely won't like."

A sly grin crossed my lips that the boy could not see as I waited for his reply.

 

[RavishedAngel]

Will

"Why are you on my lands? You are very far from where belong."


Will gulped, but didn't speak. Where had that...thing come from? He hadn't even heard it draw near...and it was quite startling to have a sword jabbed at your throat from the shadows.

"Did you steal this beast? If not then why ride him like he's nothing more than a beast? Even animals need rest to you know."

Again, he didn't speak, though a small flush rose to his cheeks. He -had- been irresponsible with his horse...

"Speak boy.. Or I shall find a way to make you respect this beast in a way you most likely won't like."


A shiver ran down his spine. He didn't want to know what the cloaked thing would do to him.

"I...I didn't steal it. It's mine. And I d-didn't know it was your l-land...I..I'm s-sorry..P-please don't kill me..." He had a fairly light voice that suited his slim frame. Probably good for singing...and screaming.

 

[katalynn]

His voice was to tender and timid to be lying, let alone be a theif. Watched how he acted a bit longer, mostly sizing him up. He was bigger than me, yet he does not attack to defend himself. Does he even know how to fight? Does not matter, it's been a long time since I had a *pet* he would be perfect. Tongue lightly crossed over my fangs as I thought of what to do with him. Used to be I would be on the other side of this very sword, sad thing is my father learned the hard way to not abuse one such as myself. Pondered what it would be like to have a pet of my own.

"Very well.. m'pet.. I believe that you did not steal him.... But, you did indeed treat him poorly. Surely there is something I can think of that would make a proper apology."

Traced his jawline as I withdrew the blade from his throat, walking towards the beast. Placing his head within my hands.

"I bet you don't even have a name for him do you? A pet without name given to another pet. Such a pitty."

Fangs were aching to taste his sweetness, but right now he had to learn to treat creatures with respect. I decided to let him choose a right punishment for himself and if I didn't feel it was good enough I would choose it for him.

"Seeing how you have mistreated a helpless creature on my lands, I feel there is indeed a punishment to be dealt with. One that would make you aplogize and respect what you have. Namely this beast."

Took the gloves my hands he was now able to see the deep, dark blue skin that layed beneath them when I reached for the horse. Still I kept the hood over my face, not yet revealing my true nature.

"Tell me.. m'pet... what do you think would be an appropriate apology to give this creature that you weild?"

Turned towards the guys direction;

"I shall not kill you.. But you shall not return home either."

 

[RavishedAngel]

Will

"I...I...what? W-what do you mean, p-punishment?! Please, who...whoever you are, j-just let me go...I beg of you...I...I need to go...please..."

He tried to push himself up off the ground, but he was still sore from his fall, so his movements were slow. He should've paid attention to his parents this time.

And...blue skin? What -was- that thing? He half-stood, half-slouched, staring at the cloaked being. He didn't think it would let him go. Well, she. It did sound like a female voice, anyway. But he wasn't positive. And...blue skin...

"Please...c-could you just tell me how to get out of here?..."

 

[katalynn]

Watched how he struggled to get up;

"m-m-m- seems the horse has already punished you well enough. I will let that slide this time.. Well for now.. Treat him poorly again and I shall not be as easy."

Silent steps walked to him, reaching my hand out to his throat forcing him to stand upright, though not choking him. He eyes were so innocent, so pure. Sad for him they will not be pure for long, making the mistake of runing into me.

"As I already said you may never return. Until I decide to release you, to your family you are dead."

Cocked my head slightly as if in thought, free hand lifting the hood from my head finally. Long silver hair with red streaks streamed out from the hood, elvish features with cat like silver eyes, cat like fangs that peeked out from my smile.

"What am I you ask... That is a very good question.. Though chances of one as young as you, may have never even heard of my kind. I am a Dark elf as you humans call us. Now.. I am.."

Grin became almost evil with the thoughts, tracing my nails along the tender skin of his neck.

"I supose that I am now considered your master.... What do you think of that? .. M'pet.."

Just holding him in my claws was arousing enough, never thought I would be aroused by being the dominate one. Soon he would be at my every command and that was more arousing than I could imagine. Held onto his throat backing him up against a tree, pinning with my body pressed against his, leaned in and kissed him hard. I wanted to see if he would struggle, in fact I expected him to put up a fight. Though I held the kiss for as long as he would allow me, forcing it on him with my nails still at his throat ready for his move.

 

[RavishedAngel]

Will

His eyes flew open in surprise. What the hell was she doing to him? He tried to turn his head to the side, to pry his lips away from hers. And he tried to push her away with his hands. He wasn't struggling as much as he normally would, as he was still a little shaken from the stallion's fit. Plus, he didn't feel that he was in life-threatening danger. Yet.

With a scowl, he shoved her away, or at least made an attempt to, putting his legs into it this time.

 

[katalynn]

I let him push me back only to have him hear me laugh.

"So there is wildness within the innocence."

Eyes gleamed with wild energy, filling with lust of every passing second. His lips were so sweet, his skin so soft, body was pretty muscular for his size. He was so perfect. I had to have him now.

"Well m'pet.. there are two ways we can do this. One is by having you willingly submit to me. Or two... Lets just say it won't be an easy road. But either way you will not be returning home, and I will have you. Whether it be now, or back at the castle it makes no difference to me."

My eyes tore into his soul as we made eye contact, I knew he was getting ready to put up a fight regaurdless of how sore he was. I was tempted to make him strip down right here and now, but I thought I would give him one last chance. The horse will get his respect sooner or later, for now, it's my turn to play.

"What shall it be.. I want you.. Want you as my slave.. m' pet... And I will have you as I wish... Just depends how hard or easy your willing to make this."

Stepped up to him again, gripping his neck to pull him forward and just as quickly, taking one of his arms behind his back and putting him into a pin. Each time he struggled, more pressure was place on his arm. Our bodies pressed together, my front to his back. My hot breath ran across his neck and ears, followed by teasing kissing licks. All the while keeping his arm curled up behind his back, pinned firmly.

 

[RavishedAngel]

Will

"Well m'pet.. there are two ways we can do this. One is by having you willingly submit to me. Or two... Lets just say it won't be an easy road. But either way you will not be returning home, and I will have you. Whether it be now, or back at the castle it makes no difference to me."


Will gulped. Castle? Who was this woman?!


"What shall it be.. I want you.. Want you as my slave.. m' pet... And I will have you as I wish... Just depends how hard or easy your willing to make this."

"Let go of me!"

He growled with a renewed energy, raising his foot up to ram back against her leg. He wasn't going to be anyone's slave. The boy kept struggling, trying to get his arm out of her grip.

 

[katalynn]

Excitment filled my eyes as the boy struggled and kicked back.

"m-m-m there is fire in you. I like that. Although it will do you no good to fight me."

I had given far to much time to get his energy back, that was about to end. My shin was pounding in pain from where he kicked, but I ignored it. Putting pressure on his arm with my weight now, pushing him to the ground on his front. One knee on his arm now allowing both my hands free, reaching for some rope, *never leave home without it* and tied both his hands behind his back with one end, the end tied around his neck. Now if his hands pulled or struggled it would put pressure onto his throat. I had to be uncomfortable, but he hurt me, so it was all fair.

"Now that is what you get for kicking me, lets what else your going to make me do to you."

Sat, straddling on his ass just watching him as I pulled out on of my daggers, the more I played with him the more I wanted him, soon I'll have him stripped.

 

[RavishedAngel]

Will

At first Will did try to struggle, but he stopped as soon as he realized that he could strangle himself if he continued. He set himself to growling quieltly at his captor. That bitch.

It did feel odd to have her sitting like that on top of him, though. Odd in a good way. He had never even gotten close to a woman before -- his parents were strict in their beliefs of chastity until marriage. They had talked about marrying him off to one of the local girls within the year, though.

"What're you going to do with me?..."

 

[katalynn]

"Tha's a good question really....."

I had ideas of course, but never really taking control like this, wasn't really totally sure of what my next move was. None the less, I played it off as if I did know what to do. This was new to as much as it was to him, I knew the only way to have him was to .. well.. take him, I won't rape him.... no.. instead i'll figure out how to make him want me... Play games with him till it drives him insane that he needs me.

Without words began toying the blade at the collar of his tunic, easily cutting through the material, lightly, very lightly touching his skin. Watching as it sends chills through his nerves. Lifting his hands as I continued down my path, to his belt, bareing his back to me. Moving the material as far as it would go to both sides, followed by trails of my nails. His back looked so tender, muscular for his gerneral size. I had always had a thing for backs and necks, and his was perfect.

"Tell me pet... have you ever been with another female? Have you ever felt the pleasures of a female? Pleasure such as this..."

Leaned down, pressing my body against his, kissing between his shoulder blades up to his neck, then down his spine. Hot breath and tasteful licks leaves trails that followed the touch of my lips.

"You can try to fight this if you wish, for now that is... Sooner or later your body will betray you..... "

Whispered lightly into his ear, the dagger cutting lightly through the material once more, making it easier to take the rest of the tunic off. Hot tender kisses followed the touch of the dagger as inches of skin was bare.

 

[RavishedAngel]

Will

(I'm very sorry for taking so long to reply!)

The boy shivered as his back was exposed, but not really from the cool air. More from the feel of metal against his skin, and from the dark elf's kisses. It felt so strange...and so good. Of course he had never been with a woman before. But he didn't answer her, just bit his lip and breathed against the ground.

His back was smooth and toned, and his skin soft. So untouched, so innocent. He'd be a perfect "pet" once he was trained. And even when he wasn't trained, he'd still probably be quite fun. Especially considering that he was a virgin.

 

[katalynn]

His silence told me more than enough towards my question. Finally working the rest of the tunic off his arms and back, not leaving much left to the material. This was so exilerating, having a virgin at my mercy.. to do as I wish with him.

"So, my pet hasn't felt the pleasures.. That's a shame for you, so young, so innocent. This should be the ultimate time to explore such pleasures."

Purred into his ear, whispering my words lustfully.

"Do you still want to fight me?"

Kissed down his spine towards his tail bone, nipping at the tender skin here an there. Lifting off his ass to sit back onto the back of his thighs, clawing and pawing at his back, watching as he slowly began to squirm. Lingering my hands over his sweet, tight ass, slipping between his legs, grinding my hand along the pant line, pressing against his sex. Slowly clawing back up his bare skin, leaving red trails to follow reaching for his ear to whisper;

"What does my pet want?"

My body pressed against as I layed down ontop of him, toying with his ear.

 

[RavishedAngel]

"So, my pet hasn't felt the pleasures.. That's a shame for you, so young, so innocent. This should be the ultimate time to explore such pleasures."

Those 'pleasures' did sound quite good, the way he thought of them. But then again, considering who this woman was, and what she was doing to him...He didn't know if he'd enjoy what she wanted to do with him. Will said nothing.

"Do you still want to fight me?"

Again, he didn't respond. Of course he still wanted to fight her. He wanted to kick her away and run as fast as he could. But he couldn't do that now. He'd let himself be trapped. And then...in a way, he didn't want to fight her. He had no idea what exactly he wanted. Or if he wanted anything.

His eyes widened as the woman's hand began its exploration. He squirmed and tried to wriggle away from her touch, but to no avail. Damn that rope that held his hands together. And he bit his lip again when her fingernails dug into his skin.

"What does my pet want?"

"St-stop...Please..."

 

[katalynn]

"Come now pet. You really think I'm going to stop? You.. You have gotten me so arous-s-s-sed, and you want me to stop?"

Letting one of my fangs nick at the tender throat, not enough to cause severe pain or blood loss, just enough to taste his sweet virgin blood. I didn't feed off blood, was more of a *treat* to me. Lingering on his neck where the blood swelled lightly at the scratch, licking it to add a pleasant feel.
Went back down towards his ass, clawing down his back a bit harder making the red trails a bit deeper, never breaking the skin just raising the blood underneath. After a few strokes along his back, decided it was time to roll him over. It would be uncomfortable for him, though, I was not ready to untie him knowing he would fight if he had the chance.

Once I had him on his back, the burning of the claw marks seeped into his back as he layed on the ground. Straddling him at his pelvis, feeling the slight arousement between his pants. I had him to where he can watch everything that I do, taking off my cloak followed by my vest. Allowing him to see the bare, firm breast, letting him feel their nakedness against his chest when I leaned down to kiss him.