Will someone help a poor author?

[cloudy]

I have a story, Atlantis Revisted, that needs 6 measely votes. Could I bother some of you here to help me out?

Thanks in advance!!!

 

[sirhugs]

needs for what?

 

[cloudy]

to hit the mark to qualify for the monthly contest. It's the only story I've put up that has even come close to qualifying. The first story I posted still has only 48 votes.

I don't care really if I win or not, but it would just tickle the hell out of me to qualify.

 

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[CrimsonMaiden]

Read and voted. Great story!

 

[cloudy]

Thanks, everyone who's voted (yes, even the low ones).

 

[Boxlicker101]

I have a story, Atlantis Revisted, that needs 6 measely votes. Could I bother some of you here to help me out?

Thanks in advance!!!

I read it and voted and left a comment but there is one thing that puzzles me. You say she "rotated her ass in circles". First, this would be redundant because "rotated" would mean going in circles. Second, I had thoughts of Marisela lying face down with Alex on top of her, stationary, while she spun around like a wheel under him. I also had thoughts of Marisela lying stationary while her ass was rotating, like a wheel spinning on a car that is lying on its side. Neither seemed feasible.

Sometimes when I am writing about a man and a woman in the same position, I will refer to her hips as SWIVELING, causing her legs to thrust out alternately, like pistons. This would produce the same result, that of moving her ass around his cock, and is physically possible.

Anyhow, it was a very interesting story and I will read the next part when it posts. (Actually, I didn't look to see whether or not it has posted yet. If it has, I'll read it now.)

 

[cloudy]

Thanks, Box.

The second part isn't up yet, but hopefully I'll get it submitted by the end of this weekend.

 

[Lying Eyes]

I have a story, Atlantis Revisted, that needs 6 measely votes. Could I bother some of you here to help me out?

Thanks in advance!!!

I voted and sent you feedback. Hope you got enough votes now.

 

[the brothers cum]

Intrigued

Read your story and voted, and I must say I am most intrigued. The story was titillating while at the same time making you wonder about what the dreams were. A past life? Will the eventual disaster that befell Atlantis play a part in the tale. I can't wait for Chapter 2.

 

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