Will my alternative reality BDSM be OK here?

[FactorySlave]

Hello all

I posted stories on a couple of now defunct sites, and I'm wondering if such stories would be OK here. There's nothing nasty or illegal. The stories, set in the near future, feature a conscription system where all males work for a couple of years or more in less than pleasant conditions, e.g. chained to machines in factories. The world isn't a particularly nice place with a handful of rich families calling the shots. My stories are told through the eyes of our hapless conscripts or their mainly female overseers.

I'm told the stories were well written with a gritty realism. As I say, there's nothing distasteful apart from topics such as slavery and violence, but it's all fiction thankfully.

I'm happy to write a few stories, but I'd like to know if they're likely to be published here. The stories will be new and would not be on any other sites.

Thanks for feedback.

 

[Bramblethorn]

What aspects in particular are you thinking might be a problem here?

 

[tomlitilia]

Not sure exactly what you mean by "ok", but it wouldn't break any general rule, at least if there is ultimately some gratification experienced by those forced into sexual acts. You may want to stay away from the BDSM category, where many (vocal) readers expects explicit consent. You couldinstead go for non consent or sci fi.

 

[FactorySlave]

It's just a bit more violent - a few whips, etc. - and non-consensual than what I've seen on this site. It's clearly a femdom theme which I've tried to use in a realistic scenario. If someone's not into femdom, it won't appeal, but there are no deaths, rape, minors, etc. Thanks for the reply.

 

[jaF0]

and non-consensual than what I've seen on this site.

Then it may not fly.

 

[FactorySlave]

Not sure exactly what you mean by "ok", but it wouldn't break any general rule, at least if there is ultimately some gratification experienced by those forced into sexual acts. You may want to stay away from the BDSM category, where many (vocal) readers expects explicit consent. You couldinstead go for non consent or sci fi.

Good point. OK means acceptable. I doubt I'd cause offence, but if the genre isn't for this site and it doesn't get published, it'd be better to know now.

Point taken on the BDSM. It's more non-consensual/alternative reality.

There aren't many sexual acts for our poor conscripts.

 

[FactorySlave]

I'll give that a try. Thanks.

 

[TarnishedPenny]

Here's the 'Lit' difference between BDSM and Non-Con. With the former, there's an expectation at least of consent at some level. With the latter, it's 100%, cast-in-concrete required that the 'victim' eventually derives some pleasure. As well, the site refuses to publish snuff or pure torture stories. Femdom is fine.

So, guy chained to a machine, a whip being taken to him on occasion by a female overseer?

Hard to be certain, but I think it could fly, particularly if the guy tied to the lathe got some form of sexual satisfaction from time to time.

The only way to be certain, of course, is to submit for publication.

 

[SimonDoom]

Keep in mind that when you ask if something is "OK" around here, the two main questions are (1) does it violate any of the Site's content rules, and (2) what category does it belong in?


The key rule with nonconsent stories is that the character in the story must derive some enjoyment from the activity.

The other rule to know is that BDSM readers are picky about the issue of consent, and if you want to avoid their wrath then you would be well-advised to publish the story in nonconsent rather than in BDSM.

 

[jaF0]

'Course, you could get super kinky and make the guys depositors to a bank to help sustain the population. Attach some sort of milking device while at their workstations if you get my drift. They'd have to have some sort of pleasure somewhere along the line to be able to produce the elixir of life.

 

[FactorySlave]

Thanks all. We'll see.

I guess the poor guy chained to his machine enjoys the scenery of the passing females, but that's part of the story's intent, i.e. the sheer frustration a young guy would feel.

Anyway, my first attempt has been submitted for approval

 

[jaF0]

The stories, set in the near future, feature a conscription system where all males work for a couple of years or more in less than pleasant conditions,


My stories are told through the eyes of our hapless conscripts or their mainly female overseers.

Maybe feature a graduation ceremony of sorts where the guys get their just release with the overseer of their choice.

 

[FactorySlave]

I like to let the reader use their imagination. In reality, such goings on would be rife. Plenty of scope for sub plots.

 

[KeithD]

You take your risks (or don't) and reap your reward or backlash (or both). Being a good writer includes making your own decisions and risks.

 

[lovecraft68]

Incest and Non con are pretty much trump categories, if a story contains elements of either they belong in that category.

Another issue you might have is although femdom is obviously a part of real life BDSM...women in control stories are received poorly here , too many of the incels from the Loving wives category make the rounds to trample on them, and even in BDSM its become far too skewed towards women have to be submissive right up to the bitch should get hers.

However, femdom does seem to do well in fetish as does most things. I've found that the fetish category has an audience of men who are actual men and don't whine about everything.

 

[FactorySlave]

Thanks all, I've posted the first part (Slavery 2050) in the non-consensual area, so we'll see if it gets any likes or otherwise.

 

[lovecraft68]

Thanks all, I've posted the first part (Slavery 2050) in the non-consensual area, so we'll see if it gets any likes or otherwise.

I think the title will get you some attention. The word slavery might appeal to some BDSM readers who cross over into the NC category as well.

Seeing this is your first submission once it goes live go to the feedback forum and starta thread looking for feedback and post the link there if you want some opinions.

 

[FactorySlave]

Thanks, I'll do that now.

This is a great site, so it'd be good to keep within the rules. There's definitely no minors, blood, rape, deaths or incest, but it could be seen as very non-consensual. You've got 18-year-old males chained to machines. What's in it for them?

Well, they get to see the nice ladies I've added to the mix plus the not so nice overseers. It's not massively different from the UK's national service back in the 1950s, and whilst those guys weren't chained, they didn't get to see nice ladies wandering past each day.