Wilderness, that was wonderful

[stillthepriss]

I just read your story, and it was amazing. I am eagerly awaiting part two. So often when one writes erotic fiction, the author fails to allow the characters to grow and develop. You, my dear, do not have that problem.

I have written and posted on other sites, but have yet to post here. When I finally muster the courage to do so, I will look forward to your feedback.

 

[Chanson_bleu]

Dead Write Part 1

No wonder it got an Editor's Choice icon right off the bat! Moving storyline, natural dialogue, real life, vivid characters... I loved it!

So, please hurry up and post Part 2. Nobody got naked in Part 1!

 

[wilderness]

I can't believe I got an E!

The comments on this first chapter have been wonderful. Plus the Editor's endorsement was totally unexpected. Thank you Laurel or whomever bestows such honors. Now that the first chapter had such an auspicious beginning, I fear I have no place to go but down. lol

Chapter's 2 and 3 are pending, while chapter 4 is still in its early stages. If anyone is in a rush for the finale, I'm afraid you'll be disappointed. The build up is most of the fun for me (and at my age sometimes all the fun). Thanks again and I'll try to keep you interested.