About ready to take the plunge and write my first Lit story. Not sure if I want to tackle it by myself or with a writing partner. Maybe the first part of a multi chapter. Here's my outline so far:
Nickie has been hiding massive gambling debts from her husband Max. They are both in their middle 20's. The couple pays off all of N's debts but they go broke in the process. They move in with N's mom Lisa to save on rent. L is in her early 50's. M is so angry he won't even sleep in the same bed with his wife much less have sex with her. He wants to get a divorce but doesn't have the money for a divorce attorney or even a cheap place to stay. N and L are bunking in L's room in a king bed. M is by himself on a cot the guest room.
This is where the actually story starts. M is asleep in his room two nights after moving in. L comes in and wakes him up. She is wearing old sweats yet looks very alluring in them. L asks M to trade rooms with her and get into bed with his wife. She says N is really sorry and will do whatever it takes to win him back. M is unmoved and refuses.
L loves her daughter more than anything and decides to motivate M into cooperating. She gets naked and teases his cock until he is obviously aroused. M tells L that he has been faithful to N even after the gambling but that he is glad to take revenge by fooling around now. L pretends to be convinced that N deserves it but stops playing with M once he is sufficiently aroused to obey her commands. She orders him not to cum with her but to get into bed with is waiting wife in the other bedroom. M says he would rather just finish himself off than ever have sex with his wife again.
L becomes physically Dom and forbids M to finish himself off. He tried repeatedly to touch himself but she prevents him each time. Sexual frustration eventually forces M to comply and go to his wife. Without getting dressed, L accompanies him to make sure he does what he's supposed to.
N is waiting on top of the king bed wearing a tiny nighty. L tells her that she has gotten her husband ready as they had discussed. N is disappointed but not surprised that her mom had to jump start M.
Sex between M and N as L watches, commands, and touches herself.
Nickie has been hiding massive gambling debts from her husband Max. They are both in their middle 20's. The couple pays off all of N's debts but they go broke in the process. They move in with N's mom Lisa to save on rent. L is in her early 50's. M is so angry he won't even sleep in the same bed with his wife much less have sex with her. He wants to get a divorce but doesn't have the money for a divorce attorney or even a cheap place to stay. N and L are bunking in L's room in a king bed. M is by himself on a cot the guest room.
This is where the actually story starts. M is asleep in his room two nights after moving in. L comes in and wakes him up. She is wearing old sweats yet looks very alluring in them. L asks M to trade rooms with her and get into bed with his wife. She says N is really sorry and will do whatever it takes to win him back. M is unmoved and refuses.
L loves her daughter more than anything and decides to motivate M into cooperating. She gets naked and teases his cock until he is obviously aroused. M tells L that he has been faithful to N even after the gambling but that he is glad to take revenge by fooling around now. L pretends to be convinced that N deserves it but stops playing with M once he is sufficiently aroused to obey her commands. She orders him not to cum with her but to get into bed with is waiting wife in the other bedroom. M says he would rather just finish himself off than ever have sex with his wife again.
L becomes physically Dom and forbids M to finish himself off. He tried repeatedly to touch himself but she prevents him each time. Sexual frustration eventually forces M to comply and go to his wife. Without getting dressed, L accompanies him to make sure he does what he's supposed to.
N is waiting on top of the king bed wearing a tiny nighty. L tells her that she has gotten her husband ready as they had discussed. N is disappointed but not surprised that her mom had to jump start M.
Sex between M and N as L watches, commands, and touches herself.
but it needs to be done in a way where L maintains a Dom role over M at all times. He can't ever be in a strong enough position to negotiate any "I will if..." demands with L. Also, I think full mom/daughter might be best to save for chapter 2. 
How about something like N doesn't want to do it with mom in the room but L convinces her daughter that M won't unless she is there to supervise?
