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[Guest]

I Am new to this sit and have started to read some of the stories. most are a lot better then stores on other sites.
Anyway i love reading stories where wives sleep with other men to get out of trouble(eg pay rent), or stories where innocent wives loose control and do thing they woundn't dare think of.

So i was wondering if someone could write a story where a man who is invited to a party by his neighbors, who are a young married couple. The man is a bit of a pervert who has been spying on the very attractive wife since they moved in. After the party the husband falls asleep leaving the slighty drunk wife and the man to clean up. the man fools around with the wife, and the wife goes along with it untill she relises whats happening and tries to stop but the man forces himself onto the her. The alcohol takes its effect on her, she gets aroused and looses control. She ends up doing things she never tried with her husband

 

[coleman]

i posted this idea but my regestration details didn't come up

 

[Axeltheswede]

I'm not trying to discount your story idea. You have outlined a fairly common "Loving Wives" story scenario. If you like a non-consent aspect to your story, check out that section.

Suggest you take a tour through "Loving Wives" and "Non-consent". If you don't find what you are looking for, let us know on this BB where current stories are lacking. New twists usually get a good reception here.

 

[coleman]

I have seen most of the stories and i want this one to be different. Such as the writter could write more about the man next door spying on the wife, also the wife could realy dislike the man next door but the husband invites him over. When he forces himself onto her the wife tries to get away but there is something deep inside her that wants her to sleep with the man. Mabey its the alcohole that stops her from thinking propley. This idea could also be different by making the wife innocent and the man the opposite, criminal like.

 

[Axeltheswede]

Thanks for considering my suggestion. This is the type of info a writer needs to get into the story.

Sounds like the wife has some attraction to the neighbor she is trying to suppress. Cape Fear meets the 'burbs.

This one might have some appeal to Tatewaki. Underlying psychological conflict is something he likes. How about it, Tate? You know you always wanted to do a "Loving Wives" with a twist.

 

[Tatewaki]

Thanks for considering my suggestion. This is the type of info a writer needs to get into the story.

Sounds like the wife has some attraction to the neighbor she is trying to suppress. Cape Fear meets the 'burbs.

This one might have some appeal to Tatewaki. Underlying psychological conflict is something he likes. How about it, Tate? You know you always wanted to do a "Loving Wives" with a twist.

Never done a Loving Wives before. That genre has always been a no-fly zone with me. I think I may have told you why in a PM a long time ago.

Perhaps its time to let the healing begin ...

If you help me with it, Axel, I'll give it a go. I'll need to know what hot spots such a tale has. I'll bump and link another thread I started. (One that has had zero response, surprisingly enough.)

What makes certain genres tick?

Cheers!

-T

 

[Guest]

This sounds like a very good idea. I hope the writter above writes it.

 

[Guest]

a small varriation may be usefull

What if the married couple is invited to a party by an evil neigbour and when the husband falls drunken and asleep, the (may be drunken or drugged?) wife agrees to make sex with the most beautifull member of the company. When their act finishes, the man takes her clothes and leave her absolutely naked in one of the rooms of the negbour's house. And the young wife is taken roughly and violently by the all other men ( some camera may films this?).

 

[coleman]

I dont like the part where the wife agrees to heve sex with another man because the wife is faithful to her husband. But the part where all the men use her is appealing. Mabey at first the neighbor forces himself onto her and she tries to leave then another man comes into the act and they double team her. She gets lost in the moment and starts to enjoy things. As they are finishing up she then relises what just happened.

 

[lexium]

How does it sound for the couple to invite the neighbor over for dinner. The husband believes the neighbor is a really nice guy. The wife trys to tell her husband that she doesn't like the neighbor, but the husband brushes it off as her coldness toward strangers. The neighbor has a trick up his sleeve. The husband and neighbor stay up very late drinking, and the wife gives up and goes to bed. The neighbor drinks the husband under the table, and sneaks into bed with the wife while the husband is passed out. The neighbor fucks the wife better than she had ever been fucked, all-the-while believing it was her husband in the darkness. The neighbor slips out of bed and out of the house before day break. The wife wakes to find her husband passed out on the sofa. She can't deny her desire to be fucked like she had by the neighbor. A routine of drinking the husband under the table and fucking his wife begins.

 

[Axeltheswede]

Just think of all the twelve step programs these three will be attending in the future. Sex addiction, alcoholism, marriage counseling.

Actually lexium, you have an interesting idea. One aspect of a loving wives story is missing. The husband would have to know what was going on and enjoy watching.

Coleman seems to have some pretty specific ideas about this story. I'm interested in how he sees this variation.

 

[coleman]

I like lexium's idea. But i dont want the husband to be involved. The idea where the neighbor gets the husband drunk is good. How about the neighbor sneeks into the bedroom to find the wife asleep. He gets in bed with her and starts to "play" with her while she is asleep. He blind folds her and starts to fuck her. She wakes up thinking its her husband. The two fuck like crazy and as they are about to finish up the blind fold slips off and the wife gets the shock off her life. The neighbor finishes off and quickly leaves. She feels ashamed that she cheated on her husband.

I hope someone can use this to write a story.
Also mabey The wife goes over to the neighbors house the next day to confront him and tell him that nothing between them must ever happen again. The neighbor cant keep his eyes off the attractive wife so he forces himself onto her, and the wife gives in to her desires.

 

[Guest]

the False identity idea is good, also like the fact the neighbor seduces the wife into submission. This is shaping up to be a hot story.

 

[lexium]

Maybe the husband and wife is fooling around, foreplay. The husband has the wife on the verge of cuming when he remembers that he invites the neighbor over. The husband is junk already. The continues to fold his horny wife. The neighbor formulates his plans to take the husbands place. The wife realizes that the neighbor is not going away and goes off to bed horny. The husband paces out, but not before tell the neighbor how he pleases his wife and about her horny nature. In the darkness of the bedroom, the neighbor touches and teases the wife like the husband said. The neighbor takes the wife to a new level. Finally, he plows his cock into the wife, which is longer and ticker than the husband's. The wife realizes that this is not her husband, but with her legs up to his shoulders and his powerful cock thrusting inside of her, she is powerless to stop him. She enjoys the fantastic fuck and begs him to return when her husband is away.

 

[coleman]

This idea is good also, but i like it how the wife is blindfolded so she doesn't know its the neighbor because that way she can not see a thing.

 

[Axeltheswede]

Looks like lexium has this story. Are you going to write it?

 

[lexium]

I'm actually working on a whore piece. The reason I would go without the blindfold is, how would the wife react to being blind folded. I think, taking fantasy to the brink of reality make for the best stories. Now, if the husband mentions to the neighbor that the wife likes being tied up, then the toys are available and in play. Otherwise, why would the husband blindfold his wife? Or, why would it be OK with her if it wasn't something that they haven't done before?

 

[Axeltheswede]

Serious question. What category do you use for a "whore piece"?

Loving wives doesn't really cover it, even if she is married. Maybe group if she has multiple partners. I wonder how you see it.

 

[lexium]

Serious question. What category do you use for a "whore piece"?

Loving wives doesn't really cover it, even if she is married. Maybe group if she has multiple partners. I wonder how you see it.

Haven't really given it much thought. I usually write incest stories. Group Sex, I guess. I can taylor the story where the woman can do the group thing often enough to make it fit. I guess that's what you have to do when there is no genre(sp).

 

[coleman]

I might let the blindfold idea slip, it will just have to be very dark inside the room.
I hope someone gives this story a go.

 

[lexium]

blindfold

The blindfold could work. I was just thinking that it would be something that she was use to. A game between her and her husband. Maybe that's what really turns her on.

These ideas are great. I would like to read it, if someone would care to have a go of it.

 

[Guest]

has anyone thougth about writting this story. is sounds very good

 

[lexium]

No, but I would love to read it.

 

[Texguy]

Maybe she has poor vision?

Here's an idea, maybe there isn't neccesarily a blindfold or extreme pitch darkness, maybe the woman just has poor eyesight, and doesn't have her contacts in when the neighbor gets in bed with her? If the neighbor looks enough like the husband, along with the wife's poor vision, this could work too.

Any thoughts?