hpycpl
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I think this would make a great story. It may be lengthy but I think it will be good in the end. This may seem like I’m trying to compose this myself but I am an editor and by no means a writer. I do have some thoughts on where I think the plot should go.
There is a couple, Jack and Jill (any names will do)married for ten years. Jack as of late is into having his wife dress sexy and revealing for him whenever they go out, enjoying his view and appreciating the looks she gets from men. They had started going out to eat every Wednesday night, their “date night” in hopes of keeping their closeness that all their married friends had seemed to loose.
Here I thought a segment about a night out with sexy exposure and teasing followed by some hot sex to show the fun that was enjoyed by both. Maybe a POV from both. It would be good to show a little reluctance on Jill’s part turning into eventual enjoyment
The bad economy had started to take its toll on Jack’s business and they had to cut back on many things but they resolved to keep their weekly date. They both enjoyed each others company and Jack wasn’t about to loose his one night a week to show off his wife. Money was getting so tight that they started to consider Jill getting a job. As luck would have it a girlfriend of Jill’s let her know that her boss was looking for a tutor for his college student son (19 years old). Apparently this kid was flunking out of school and his worst subject was American literature which was Jill’s major in college. The boss was willing to pay big bucks to have his kid pass.
Jill’s friend made an appointment for her with her boss and Jill kept it just to see if it would be worth it to tutor this wayward kid. When she met Mr. Smith she could tell he was very rich and very controlling by the clothes he wore and the way he treated his employees. He checked out her credentials and was satisfied that she would be able to the job. The matter of pay was a little different from what Jill expected. She would only be paid a minimum amount but there would be very lucrative bonuses paid for good grades. The setup was laid out so that smaller bonuses would be given for in class quizzes, and bigger bonuses for tests and a large bonus for midterm and semester grades, the better the grade the bigger the bonus. The boss explained that the only night she would be able to tutor his son would be Wednesdays evenings as the other nights were taken up by football practice and another night class. Jill accepted the job. Mr. Smith told her he would be in contact with her to let her know when she could start.
Jill told Jack and he was very disappointed about loosing his Wednesdays. She assured him that they could still go out and she could go tutor after especially now that there was extra money coming in. That was ok with Jack.
One Wednesday while out on their “date night” Jill got a call on her cell. It was Mr. Smith and he wanted Jill to start that night. With him being the demanding type Jill couldn’t say no so she said she would be there at nine. As usual for their Wednesdays she was dressed very sexy a tight see thru top with a plunging neckline sweater over it with some skin tight pants and stiletto high heels. There would be no time to change before she went to the Smith’s but she figured she could just be careful about the neckline and it would be fine for that night. The son is handsome and built good and kind of a wise guy. That night he’s very attentive to the lessons and even more attentive to Jill’s chest. Jill notices and does her best to not flash, but blows it off as she thinks this young kid (19 years old) could never be interested in her.
Mr. Smith doesn’t know why but does notice his son’s interest in his studies and gives Jill a generous tip telling her he likes the fact that his son is now seemingly interested in schoolwork.
The next week Jill dresses for Jack but is careful to bring something to cover-up with for the lesson afterward. The kid (Tom) is not as attentive to his studies and lacks any enthusiasm. Mr. Smith notices it too and there is no tip that week.
The following week again Jill dresses for Jack and again brings an appropriate cover-up. Only this night is very warm and Jill can’t keep the sweater on. Again the interest returns and Jill starts to catch on. She thinks its flattering and is amused. She also thinks that if that’s what it takes, why not, it’s no more than she does while out with Jack, besides Jack will probably love to hear about it. Once again there is a nice tip for Jill at the end of the evening.
Week 4. Tom tells Jill about a quiz coming up and they go over the material. Tom is paying more attention to Jill’s outfit than the work and Jill tells him to concentrate. Tom tries to make a deal with Jill. If he studies real hard and concentrates on work for a half hour then they can have a half hour to have fun. They work hard for the ½ hr and then they start to relax but Tom isn’t happy and Jill asks why. He tells her it’s because she has her sweater on and she understands now that the fun is looking at her. She is wearing a plunging neckline top with tight pants so it won’t be so bad to take off the sweater. So she suggests that they play a card game and she takes off her sweater. There is another tip that night.
Week 5. The quiz is that Friday and they study hard for an hour. In her head Jill is already spending the money from the quiz bonus. Just as before Tom wants play time so Jill relents. This time she is wearing a see-thru top with a lacy bra underneath. Tom compliments her and she like it.
It can progress on and on from here getting more and more daring. I thought that Tom would start to ask her to wear special things for him. Also I thought that part of Tom’s class would be to critique a movie and they would have to watch it together getting close on the couch etc. then further down the road Tom might start asking to kiss or dance or cuddle etc. to finally end with Jill taking Tom’s cherry. This may be hard to believe in this day and age that a college kid is still a virgin but it would work here. Jill could be keeping Jack informed along the way and reaping the benefits of his energized excitement which also would get her off each night she was aroused by Tom. Jack may even encourage Jill.
I also thought it could be told in third person narrative with POVs from all characters. Let me know what you think.
There is a couple, Jack and Jill (any names will do)married for ten years. Jack as of late is into having his wife dress sexy and revealing for him whenever they go out, enjoying his view and appreciating the looks she gets from men. They had started going out to eat every Wednesday night, their “date night” in hopes of keeping their closeness that all their married friends had seemed to loose.
Here I thought a segment about a night out with sexy exposure and teasing followed by some hot sex to show the fun that was enjoyed by both. Maybe a POV from both. It would be good to show a little reluctance on Jill’s part turning into eventual enjoyment
The bad economy had started to take its toll on Jack’s business and they had to cut back on many things but they resolved to keep their weekly date. They both enjoyed each others company and Jack wasn’t about to loose his one night a week to show off his wife. Money was getting so tight that they started to consider Jill getting a job. As luck would have it a girlfriend of Jill’s let her know that her boss was looking for a tutor for his college student son (19 years old). Apparently this kid was flunking out of school and his worst subject was American literature which was Jill’s major in college. The boss was willing to pay big bucks to have his kid pass.
Jill’s friend made an appointment for her with her boss and Jill kept it just to see if it would be worth it to tutor this wayward kid. When she met Mr. Smith she could tell he was very rich and very controlling by the clothes he wore and the way he treated his employees. He checked out her credentials and was satisfied that she would be able to the job. The matter of pay was a little different from what Jill expected. She would only be paid a minimum amount but there would be very lucrative bonuses paid for good grades. The setup was laid out so that smaller bonuses would be given for in class quizzes, and bigger bonuses for tests and a large bonus for midterm and semester grades, the better the grade the bigger the bonus. The boss explained that the only night she would be able to tutor his son would be Wednesdays evenings as the other nights were taken up by football practice and another night class. Jill accepted the job. Mr. Smith told her he would be in contact with her to let her know when she could start.
Jill told Jack and he was very disappointed about loosing his Wednesdays. She assured him that they could still go out and she could go tutor after especially now that there was extra money coming in. That was ok with Jack.
One Wednesday while out on their “date night” Jill got a call on her cell. It was Mr. Smith and he wanted Jill to start that night. With him being the demanding type Jill couldn’t say no so she said she would be there at nine. As usual for their Wednesdays she was dressed very sexy a tight see thru top with a plunging neckline sweater over it with some skin tight pants and stiletto high heels. There would be no time to change before she went to the Smith’s but she figured she could just be careful about the neckline and it would be fine for that night. The son is handsome and built good and kind of a wise guy. That night he’s very attentive to the lessons and even more attentive to Jill’s chest. Jill notices and does her best to not flash, but blows it off as she thinks this young kid (19 years old) could never be interested in her.
Mr. Smith doesn’t know why but does notice his son’s interest in his studies and gives Jill a generous tip telling her he likes the fact that his son is now seemingly interested in schoolwork.
The next week Jill dresses for Jack but is careful to bring something to cover-up with for the lesson afterward. The kid (Tom) is not as attentive to his studies and lacks any enthusiasm. Mr. Smith notices it too and there is no tip that week.
The following week again Jill dresses for Jack and again brings an appropriate cover-up. Only this night is very warm and Jill can’t keep the sweater on. Again the interest returns and Jill starts to catch on. She thinks its flattering and is amused. She also thinks that if that’s what it takes, why not, it’s no more than she does while out with Jack, besides Jack will probably love to hear about it. Once again there is a nice tip for Jill at the end of the evening.
Week 4. Tom tells Jill about a quiz coming up and they go over the material. Tom is paying more attention to Jill’s outfit than the work and Jill tells him to concentrate. Tom tries to make a deal with Jill. If he studies real hard and concentrates on work for a half hour then they can have a half hour to have fun. They work hard for the ½ hr and then they start to relax but Tom isn’t happy and Jill asks why. He tells her it’s because she has her sweater on and she understands now that the fun is looking at her. She is wearing a plunging neckline top with tight pants so it won’t be so bad to take off the sweater. So she suggests that they play a card game and she takes off her sweater. There is another tip that night.
Week 5. The quiz is that Friday and they study hard for an hour. In her head Jill is already spending the money from the quiz bonus. Just as before Tom wants play time so Jill relents. This time she is wearing a see-thru top with a lacy bra underneath. Tom compliments her and she like it.
It can progress on and on from here getting more and more daring. I thought that Tom would start to ask her to wear special things for him. Also I thought that part of Tom’s class would be to critique a movie and they would have to watch it together getting close on the couch etc. then further down the road Tom might start asking to kiss or dance or cuddle etc. to finally end with Jill taking Tom’s cherry. This may be hard to believe in this day and age that a college kid is still a virgin but it would work here. Jill could be keeping Jack informed along the way and reaping the benefits of his energized excitement which also would get her off each night she was aroused by Tom. Jack may even encourage Jill.
I also thought it could be told in third person narrative with POVs from all characters. Let me know what you think.
