Wife Submitting to Another Woman

[alirk]

My wife is 35 and newly into body conditioning. She has been actively pursuing a fitness class with martial arts components. My wife is slender, demure(to the point of being meek), and she seems to have an inferiority complex which I don't understand.

I have always wanted to write a story about her submitting to another woman. A woman who somehow compels my wife to do anything and everything she desires. It can involve her being physically overpowered at first but I imagine it containing many elements of the woman dominating her psycologically. The woman wears her resistance down...teasing her...taunting her....showing my wife "her place".

My wife wants to resist and she does for as long as she can but this woman always ends up with my wife doing anything she wants. My wife is ashamed that she does these things but can not resist. I also imagine the woman in the story is not the prettiest or most attractive. She may be bigger and curvier than my wife(my wife always complains about her small breasts). This woman always expects my wife to be showered, fresh, and looking sexy while she may be almost the opposite. The one thing this woman has is an extreme amount of arrogance/self confidence that she uses against my wife.

I know that this scenario is not realistic and I struggle how to write it. I don't imagine it being violent but the woman can use her superior size to dominate my wife. Is there anyway to write a semi believeable story along these lines?

Thank you!

M

 

[bisexplicit]

I think you have the story rather nicely developed already. One possibility is to make the other woman the instructor of the class - therefore, she'll most likely be stronger, and also have an authoritativeness about her.

Maybe in order to get the scenario going, during class the instructor could degrade your wife in front of everyone for not properly doing whatever and insist she stay after class for extra help.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

IOne possibility is to make the other woman the instructor of the class - therefore, she'll most likely be stronger, and also have an authoritativeness about her.

Maybe in order to get the scenario going, during class the instructor could degrade your wife in front of everyone for not properly doing whatever and insist she stay after class for extra help.

Nice idea, Bisex.


Alirk, did you plan on giving a slightly more detailed bio of your wife for this story? Or do you want authors to develop their own character? (Same with her name, pet name, etc.)

 

[silverwhisper]

i would think some physical traits would help, since if an author describes her as being athletic when she's actually petite, that's probably not a good thing. :>

ed

 

[alirk]

My wifes name is Sara. She is a college educated stay at home Mom. For 10 years she worked at a large chemical company and had the skill to go far in large account sales. She gave it up after we had our 2nd kid. My job requires me to travel and put in some long hours, which she tries to understand but occasionally comments about. When it comes to outward apperances, she seems self confident, educated, and driven but on the inside she feels weak and incompetent. I try my best to be supportive and loving.

Sara is 5'4", 112 lbs; 34b-25-35 and very proud of the results of her fitness class. She is extremely dedicated to it. She is very self conscious about her small breasts and often comments to me now that she needs a "boob job". I think she is beautiful and love her as she is and tell her that everytime but I believe she really feels inadequate because of her smaller breasts.

Sara is also stronger than she realizes. She is not athletic but she isn't a couch potato. She just doesn't have the competitive drive to complete a competition. She will fight and struggle but in the end she submits.

I hope this helps and I sure appreciate your comments and thoughts so far.

Thanks,

Alirk

 

[alirk]

Bisexplicit, thank you for your ideas, I like them very much. What would you think would happen after class? Some kind of arguement or a situation where my wife had to do what ever this instructor wanted?

Thanks!

Alirk

 

[BedtimeStories77]

i would think some physical traits would help, since if an author describes her as being athletic when she's actually petite, that's probably not a good thing. :>

ed

That's what I was thinking, too.

 

[bisexplicit]

Bisexplicit, thank you for your ideas, I like them very much. What would you think would happen after class? Some kind of arguement or a situation where my wife had to do what ever this instructor wanted?

Thanks!

Alirk

Basically, thats what I was thinking. After tearing down her defenses, the instructor would proceed to try to give her "extra help" with some of the exercises. The instructor could then get a bit too close for comfort, a struggle (either mental or physical) could ensue, and eventually your wife could give in.

 

[alirk]

Basically, thats what I was thinking. After tearing down her defenses, the instructor would proceed to try to give her "extra help" with some of the exercises. The instructor could then get a bit too close for comfort, a struggle (either mental or physical) could ensue, and eventually your wife could give in.

I like that alot and picture the struggle being both physical and mental. The women teases her, taunts her, while basically tearing apart all my wife's defenses.

What do you think it would be like when my wife realizes that she has to give in? What would the instructor be thinking? What would be the act to signify that my wife gives up? Is the struggle in her head important as she does whatever this woman wants?

Thanks for all your help!

Alirk

 

[bisexplicit]

What do you think it would be like when my wife realizes that she has to give in?

A combination of defeat and submission would be the best route to go, in my opinion.

What would the instructor be thinking?

The instructor could possibly do this sortof thing routinely - pick out smaller, meek women who she thinks she could easily dominate for her own perverse plesaure.

What would be the act to signify that my wife gives up?

This could be whatever you would like - she could simply allow whatever it is to continue without protesting, or she could be forced to say that she, in fact, enjoys whats happening...

Is the struggle in her head important as she does whatever this woman wants?

Yes, I think her inward struggle would be very important in the story.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Is the struggle in her head important as she does whatever this woman wants?

I'd say that maybe she's a natural sub. Not that she ever really knew what BDSM was, etc., but the "struggle" with the instructor awoke something within her she didn't know was there.

 

[Flashlight7.5]

pushing martial arts angle?

I'm a martial arts instructor (and never-ending student). If I were writing this, I'd throw in some martial art themed submissions. What does she study? I can tell you that fighting can be an arousing experience from all the endorphins involved. Ground fighting can be quite intimate. If your wife does ground fighting at all, a simple "cat fight" could lead to more and more dominance.

Also, what do you want them to end up doing? Is your wife just going to sweep the martial arts school with a toothbrush or is she going to have her hands chained above her head to a speedbag hook and screwed with a strap-on?

One more thing, is your wife going to read this?

 

[alirk]

My wife is being instructed in Tae kwon Do. She is not doing any form of combat training, just physical fitness training. It may not be true martial arts training. She loves it though and would take it to the combat phase... I don't think she has the drive....I think a woman would make her submit.

I would love to read about my wife turned into this woman's sex toy. She would be doing anything the woman wanted....anyplace, anytime.....the superior woman not in the freshest...cleanest state but she would expect my wife to be clean as a daisy. I imagine alot of forced oral sex and many boundaries pushed. My wife is very conservative sexually and virgin to many practices.

I would love for her to read the story but I don't think she would enjoy it. As a matter of fact, she would haul me to couseling or the lawyer!

Alirk

 

[krd-tld]

Dominated wife...

Briefly told:


My wife is one of those great gals who is comfortable hanging with the guys, makes friends more easily with men, can be counted on for no game playing( as we guys call what we dont understand about women) and frank conversation, knows her way around power tools, and easily banters with the boys sexually, but clearly lets it be known when her line is crossed. In general with only a few exceptions, other women dislike her...

We were best friends for 10 years before that very fertile soil yielded LOVE, and it was amazing how those secrets we kept from a "friend" revealed themselves in a matter of days once we became lovers. Within a week at the most we knew each otrhers worst and best and all in between past, our fun fantasies, and our dark ones.

One of her "secrets" was a profound desire to experience intimacy with another woman. She was never even allowed a friend to sleep over or to stay at a friends ONCE in her school years, and felt she had missed the best and innocent chance of her teen years. As an adult, there has been no innocence to her few opportunities, and she has been scared off by the experience of the women. As well as a bit shy about admitting she isnt at all into the stereotypical oral sharing, but more in line with her love of manly powertools, really wants to belt on a powerfull and vibrating strapon and take another woman like a man.

She decided many a year ago that a first step might be at least to go to a strip club, and many of her friends have promised to take her, but never followed through. She thought maybe once comfortable in the atmosphere, shed go for a lap dance as her first taste of female intimacy.. also au unfullfilled dream.

Until I came along. Not long ago we discovered a new club in our area( well 70miles isnt all that far where we live). And on the first opportunity went to this seedy little no alchohol full nude joint. The first dancer was miore silicon than flesh, and a real letdown. But the second.... I could see in my wife's eyes, and with my own, something special in this gal.
And when she was done dancing, I approached her and the club manager to arrange a private lap dance with my wife, explaining briefly the circumstances. Well, the dancer it turns out had in some way had an intuitive and instant liking to my wife. And the private dance, with me as a nonparticipating witness, was far more than ever I had seen performed on either a man or woman.
My wife, completely in eye wide open shock, discovered that she was not "OK" with touch and being touched by another woman. NO she was panty wet knee trembling "Oh MY GOD" aroused, and this dancer went as far as giving her oral through her very sheer panties. I got so hard I had to turn away and stop watching...

Well, it ended, and when my smell sensitive wife announced she had the smell of the dancers pussy all over her, the dancer had repeatedly put fingers in her own pussy and ass and then ran her hands all over my wife, I knew wed be hitting the shower as soon as we got home. But it was SIX hours before my wife actually showered! And we couldnt stop talking about this for days.

But my wife couldnt believe how she, a former Air Force Security Policeman, had beed dominated by this sensuous woman. So a week later, we went back and I apprioached the dancer again, explaining we had to find out of that had been real, or just "first time" enthusiasm.

Well, this time there ended up being no panties between labia and mouth, and my wife was audibly moaning, attracting a lot of attention away from the stage, and again completely helpless in this womans power.

We've left our number, and gotten hers, and she will be soon coming to our home for a provate show, where my wife is determined she will exert herself and THIS time be in charge...

Good luck honey, youve already been conquered by feminimity unbounded, your masculine side will be helpless....

 

[FoursUp]

This sounds like a great idea..something I have been looking for here on lit.

 

[alirk]

I do have a thread in the Sexual Role Play discussion board I am trying to get going. It's titled "I Can't Believe It" and it is about the same theme as this thread. If you are interested please jump in.....or give ideas!

Alirk

 

[alirk]

How Explicit

What would be the worst thing this woman could get my wife to do? As a reader, what would turn you on?

Alirk

 

[bisexplicit]

What would be the worst thing this woman could get my wife to do? As a reader, what would turn you on?

Alirk

Typical "worst things" include anal play, sometimes "wet" sex, and forcing someone to be with an opposite gender and/or someone else.

Whatever "worst thing" you do, just make sure you like it/enjoy it, and I'm sure someone else will as well.

 

[race_1962]

I like adding to the story that the instructor is married to a real stud of a man that she eventually brings her home to. Seeing the small busted wife introduced to her first big one excites her.....as it does me. ;-)

Any thoughts on this?

Would the instructor be responsible for checking out your nude wife and making her submit to her razor? I got to think as a typical mom, she has long forgotten grooming down below.

have fun with it.

 

[alirk]

Typical "worst things" include anal play, sometimes "wet" sex, and forcing someone to be with an opposite gender and/or someone else.

Whatever "worst thing" you do, just make sure you like it/enjoy it, and I'm sure someone else will as well.

Hi Bisexplicit, thanks for your comments. I like all the things you listed but one thing you said makes me wonder. You said "typical" and while I know I can't totally reinvent this situation, I am hoping to make it more than typical(but still very explicit). Would it be interesting if the dominant woman liked my wife to clean and fresh but she would be sweaty...hot....not fresh. She would get off on subjecting my wife to this, forcing her to submit, and humiliating her. There are many things I imagine some of which are very deviant. DISCLAIMER BECAUSE I FEEL GUILTY ABOUT THIS>>>>I know this is very wrong to fantasize about. I compartmentalize it and only bring it out here.

Alirk

 

[alirk]

I like adding to the story that the instructor is married to a real stud of a man that she eventually brings her home to. Seeing the small busted wife introduced to her first big one excites her.....as it does me. ;-)

Any thoughts on this?

Would the instructor be responsible for checking out your nude wife and making her submit to her razor? I got to think as a typical mom, she has long forgotten grooming down below.

have fun with it.

I could see the woman bringing my wife home to her husband and them both using her anyway they wanted. THe way I see it, this woman would force my wife to submit to her.....take all the fight from her. My wife would no longer be able to resist anything this woman wanted and this would feed the woman's desire to do more and more to my wife.

Alirk

 

[MsLinnet]

What would be the worst thing this woman could get my wife to do? As a reader, what would turn you on?

Alirk

Ok I don’t think the Sensei would use there position against a student but lets say this one was brutal in her conditioning tactics and if a pupil dose something wrong punishment is harsh lets say they are made to strip and continue the class naked or partially naked or something like that and continuing to build on that further punishment i.e. a strap across the pupils arse or back and making the tasks the has pupils to perform just a little harder than she can complete there for the punishment would continue until her will is broken until she is conditioned to it and expects it as part of the training she starts to want it untill she will do anything for the Sensei.

 

[alirk]

Ok I don’t think the Sensei would use there position against a student but lets say this one was brutal in her conditioning tactics and if a pupil dose something wrong punishment is harsh lets say they are made to strip and continue the class naked or partially naked or something like that and continuing to build on that further punishment i.e. a strap across the pupils arse or back and making the tasks the has pupils to perform just a little harder than she can complete there for the punishment would continue until her will is broken until she is conditioned to it and expects it as part of the training she starts to want it untill she will do anything for the Sensei.

Thanks for your comments and ideas, MsLinnet. I agree that in reality a Sensei would probably never abuse their position to take advantage of a student. I am not totally sold on making the other woman someone who knows martial arts. That was just one idea. If you have any others, let me know....I am very open to ideas.

Thanks,

Alirk

 

[MsLinnet]

Thanks for your comments and ideas, MsLinnet. I agree that in reality a Sensei would probably never abuse their position to take advantage of a student. I am not totally sold on making the other woman someone who knows martial arts. That was just one idea. If you have any others, let me know....I am very open to ideas.

Thanks,

Alirk

I love this idea Alirk. The more I have been thinking about it, the Sensei is the ideal person to starts the ball rolling, but what about making the Sensei a man, he works on the braking down process.
Then he introduces his wife who is the real dominance in the relationship, and it is the wife that calls the shots and we find out that it is not only your wife who is her total slave but he Sensei also...

What do you think?

Linnet

 

[chatbug]

My wife is 35 and newly into body conditioning. She has been actively pursuing a fitness class with martial arts components. My wife is slender, demure(to the point of being meek), and she seems to have an inferiority complex which I don't understand.

I have always wanted to write a story about her submitting to another woman. A woman who somehow compels my wife to do anything and everything she desires. It can involve her being physically overpowered at first but I imagine it containing many elements of the woman dominating her psycologically. The woman wears her resistance down...teasing her...taunting her....showing my wife "her place".

My wife wants to resist and she does for as long as she can but this woman always ends up with my wife doing anything she wants. My wife is ashamed that she does these things but can not resist. I also imagine the woman in the story is not the prettiest or most attractive. She may be bigger and curvier than my wife(my wife always complains about her small breasts). This woman always expects my wife to be showered, fresh, and looking sexy while she may be almost the opposite. The one thing this woman has is an extreme amount of arrogance/self confidence that she uses against my wife.

I know that this scenario is not realistic and I struggle how to write it. I don't imagine it being violent but the woman can use her superior size to dominate my wife. Is there anyway to write a semi believeable story along these lines?

Thank you!

M

I've read everyone else's responses, and I have to ask, do you play a role in this story? Does the way your wife acts around you change as a result of her being dominated? Does she act more submissive around you? More dominant as a reaction to what's happening to her?