Wife, prostitute, story idea

[DAMND ONE]

Okay, I try but my stories never come out the proper way, so if any one here can use this, please have a go.

The story of a wife, who willfully contracts to become a prostitute for a year; and here's the conditions.
1) Must be willing, and agreed to by husband; who must also sign the contract.
2) The contract is for one year, and permits the pimp/madam to modify, tattoo, pierce, brand, implant or enhance the prostitute as he/she wishes.
3) The brothel is in a country that permits prostitution, brothels, and pimping.
4) The woman will only be able to communicate, and respond in this nations language for the duration of the contract. (Here she can either forget English or not)
5) The husband cannot and will not have any contact except that initiated by the pimp/madam

So, hopefully someone will have some fun with this.

 

[kaitlyn_sun]

why are they doing that? what happened that put them in that situation?

 

[Sean Renaud]

Okay this is a rather bizzarre idea.

1) Why are they willing? You already threw out the non-con story idea which is the only one that makes sense here.

2) Dear God why would you ever agree to THAT?! Those a permanent changes that you would never agree to under pretty much any circumstances.

3) Why is it being legal important? You can't legally consent to slavery and if we've already broken that rule illegal pimping is immaterial. It's like being able to maim or kill someone and then worrying about having a boxing license.

4) Utterly pointless, of course she communicates in their native tongue. More to the point people don't forget languages in a year or two. They might be less comfortable after a decade or so but it takes a lot more than a year of not speaking a language to forget it.

5) Why?

Honestly this only works as a Non-Con story of some sort. Normally I'd say non-con OR a large sum of money but anybody in a position to pay the kind of money it would take to get a couple to willingly separate and agree to be modified like that along with the other risks pretty much doesn't exist. You'd have to promise them a country!

 

[kaitlyn_sun]

well... hold on. you don't need to throw the baby out with the bathwater. there ARE reasons a couple would consent to that. maybe not in real life, but this is fiction, don't forget. we just have to make it up.

off the top of my head? blackmail. If the husband did something awful... perhaps he accidentally killed the son of a crime-boss in a car accident. they'd find him and starts cutting off his fingers with gardening sheers before his wife begs for mercy... and the crime-boss says he'll spare him if she agrees to do...

well, everything you said.

I do agree, the language thing is a stretch. I understand WHY you'd like it to happen. you know how you COULD force it into the story if you really wanted to? drugs. if she's constantly being fed barbiturates it would devastate her language skills... and it would also alter her perception of the world so as it goes deeper into her year it becomes more disconnected and hellish.

removing contact with the husband... that skips over a major element of dramatic tension. you WANT those moments of contact... both to torture the husband and to highlight the depths of depravity she's being brought to. I'd say he sees her once a month for the year. in fact... you could probably tell this story entirely by skipping from visit to visit.... showing how far she falls each time.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Blackmail isn't consent by definition. That's the problem it can't be any sort of blackmail, it can't be done under any threat. It basically has to be for love, fun or money and fun money, not I need to pay off the Mafia money or else it's not consent.

Other than that I like Kaitlin's take.

 

[jeninflorida]

This is a complex subject....

Some women like the idea of a secret romp to try something new or to explore a social taboo like bdsm....or a woman....

I dont think women want a pimp. This, to me only works in blackmail

Pretty women fantasy or a high end escort are power fantasies that will work. Maybe the couple needs money (who doesnt) or maybe shes attracted to her boss and he needs an escort for a party or event and the relationship expands...

Or maybe its darker, like The Client List but she likes it...after the initial shock

 

[BuckyDuckman]

1) Must be willing, and agreed to by husband; who must also sign the contract.

Relatively easy to do. As another suggested: on the wrong end of a crime lord. Easier answer (and this can work for many more conditions): they need the money.

2) The contract is for one year, and permits the pimp/madam to modify, tattoo, pierce, brand, implant or enhance the prostitute as he/she wishes.

I sort of like this criteria. Think "Extreme Makeover." She's plain going in and potentially a bombshell coming out?

3) The brothel is in a country that permits prostitution, brothels, and pimping.

Annoying, but doable, along with the next one, too. For example, Germany.

4) The woman will only be able to communicate, and respond in this nations language for the duration of the contract. (Here she can either forget English or not)

Unlikely she'll forget a language, but it could be part of her contract that she only communicates in the country's language so she passes as a local - though a local could know multiple languages. Sort of a B.S. criteria, otherwise.

5) The husband cannot and will not have any contact except that initiated by the pimp/madam

If she's in a foreign country, it's unlikely the husband could see her regularly. Easy for the pimp/madam to regulate her access to communication devices.

So, hopefully someone will have some fun with this.[/QUOTE]

The waiting and wondering puts the hubby in a cuckold situation, exquisite torture as he awaits the return of his once blushing bride and the changes that will bring. Could be an interesting story.

 

[kaitlyn_sun]

I actually hadn't thought the experience would IMPROVE the looks of the wife... I was thinking she would be horribly, permanantly degraded. really obvious, explicit tattoos... piercings....

I DON'T think there's anything sexual about mutilation, but there's minor elements of it you might actually bring into it.

 

[DAMND ONE]

The input is very interesting. Germany is the known nation where prostitution, brothels, and pimping are legal; but Greece, Poland, Denmark, Slovakia, Honduras, Venezuela also have these three legalized.

As for the wife, she could be wanting to do something wild just once, or talked into it by some one who already did this type of contract. I leave this up to the writer's imagination. Or it could be a shaky marriage to begin with, and this is her idea of that trial separation.

Hopefully someone could make this idea into a story.

 

[Sean Renaud]

The stakes are still too high without a good reason. Even if you take the husband completely out of the equation what sane woman is going to agree to permanent body changes and presumably very little contact with friends and family? I'm not sure the amounts of money necessary to make this realistic exist.

Now you could kind of peice it out where each thing happens for a very specific reason and she's kinda coaxed into it or drunk for some of it. I can easily see a tattoo or something like that if it's small and easily hidden but breast augmentation? Piercings aside from the ears (which I assume she already has. All the women I know were pierced as extremely young girls. Which said aloud sounds rather barbaric but meh whatever. I is not women.)

Now if she needs the money because someone in her family borrowed money from the wrong guy, that I can make sense of or some other situation where she's bein gmade to do this a lot more than she's chosing it.

 

[BuckyDuckman]

I actually hadn't thought the experience would IMPROVE the looks of the wife... I was thinking she would be horribly, permanantly degraded. really obvious, explicit tattoos... piercings....

I DON'T think there's anything sexual about mutilation, but there's minor elements of it you might actually bring into it.

I think it will depend on whether the writer likes women or not. Having the wife mutilated wouldn't appeal to me as a writer or reader. The experience itself is juicy enough. Her away - willingly living the life of a prostitute . . . which leads me to Sean's comment:

The stakes are still too high without a good reason. Even if you take the husband completely out of the equation what sane woman is going to agree to permanent body changes and presumably very little contact with friends and family? I'm not sure the amounts of money necessary to make this realistic exist.

Now you could kind of peice it out where each thing happens for a very specific reason and she's kinda coaxed into it or drunk for some of it. I can easily see a tattoo or something like that if it's small and easily hidden but breast augmentation? Piercings aside from the ears (which I assume she already has. All the women I know were pierced as extremely young girls. Which said aloud sounds rather barbaric but meh whatever. I is not women.)

Now if she needs the money because someone in her family borrowed money from the wrong guy, that I can make sense of or some other situation where she's bein gmade to do this a lot more than she's chosing it.

I agree, the stakes are too high with a good reason, however, love and desperation are both good reasons. I also agree that sliding into the situation in question may be the best way to make it happen. A bit of false hopefulness can go a long way. "Honey, you'll be in . . ., but surely we can Skype."

Of course, the writer and OP get to do whatever they want. Just tossing out my ideas.

 

[tapeworm]

The input is very interesting. Germany is the known nation where prostitution, brothels, and pimping are legal; but Greece, Poland, Denmark, Slovakia, Honduras, Venezuela also have these three legalized.

As for the wife, she could be wanting to do something wild just once, or talked into it by some one who already did this type of contract. I leave this up to the writer's imagination. Or it could be a shaky marriage to begin with, and this is her idea of that trial separation.

Hopefully someone could make this idea into a story.

I'd be willing to collaborate with you on this story as the primary author. Here is my suggestion. The couple in question are immigrants from China and have sneaked illegally into Greece or Denmark. Unfortunately, they owe a considerable amount of cash to the snakeheads who were responsible for smuggling them into the country in the first place. Fearful of the triad's possible reprisals, they seek the protection of a local pimp who agrees to pay off the triad but only on the condition that the beautiful young wife becomes one of his employees. The husband has no choice but to accede to this demand. As shameful as the notion of being a cuckold is among mainland Chinese , it is still significantly more appealing then facing the wrath of the triads. If you're interested in the ideas that I have to offer , PM me so that I can be certain that I have your approval to commenc e work on the story.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I think it will depend on whether the writer likes women or not. Having the wife mutilated wouldn't appeal to me as a writer or reader. The experience itself is juicy enough. Her away - willingly living the life of a prostitute . . . which leads me to Sean's comment:



I agree, the stakes are too high with a good reason, however, love and desperation are both good reasons. I also agree that sliding into the situation in question may be the best way to make it happen. A bit of false hopefulness can go a long way. "Honey, you'll be in . . ., but surely we can Skype."

Of course, the writer and OP get to do whatever they want. Just tossing out my ideas.

Since the character is separated from her husband in the original idea I assume love isn't in play here. Desperation could be fun but I'm continually circled back around to why.

To be fair if you started the story a little farther in though you could get away with just because. Nobody questions why so and so in whatever situation if the story starts with them in it. They just are and that's good enough.

 

[DAMND ONE]

Sean, thank you for the information, and your right, I should have thought of those issues. I was thinking who ever wrote this would have figured that out. But what if the scenario is changed a bit?
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The wife is a secretly married woman who's a reporter, going undercover to get a story of prostitution in these countries? In those nations I mentions, (Germany, Denmark, Greece, Italy, Spain, Argentina, Brazil) The trade is highly regulated, and inspections and health screenings are necessary and legally required. So, the brothel is not a slave den, and the modifications won't be brutal; so this part of the contract would be limited as well.
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Instead of discovering that these regulated nations, have actually been furthering safety and eliminating the cruelty of the pimps who are no more then slave makers.
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She returns hot, but now with new contacts to help those who become trapped into the sex trade through immoral and slave making means.
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Please everyone keep the positive and workable crit's coming.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Would it break your heart if we change her from a reporter to a cop? It works either way I might add, at this point she's not really any crazier than other fictional reporters like Lois Lane or April O'Neal both of whom either have death wishes or are simply so confident in their respective heroes that they don't really think twice about jumping out of a plane without a parachute. It's not attempted suicide it's just getting your boyfriend's attention.

I'll always remember some Superman cartoon where a bunch of thugs, clearly real low level but not stupid thugs, attack a plane. Midway through the stick up one of the guys asks "hey don't I know you?" and one of his partners replies. "That's Lois Lane." "Lois Lane?! As in that one?!" "Yes, I am she." They promptly start running to the door. meaning to jetpack to safety. They were about five seconds too slow to escape. Poor guys. At least Supes didn't beat em up too bad.

Back on subject though (sorry I get rambly.) an undercover reporter/cop goes in to find out what things are really like and she agrees to go under as long as it takes and they set the period of time before they'll bring her out instantly as a year. We'll have her lose her special cell phone or whatever other contact method early on and she's determined to ride it out. And the one year is just some kind of standard protocol. We've all seen the movies about the undercover agents who've been left under so long that they've joined the enemy right? So that's why every year you're pulled out because they just can't risk leaving you in play any longer. I know it's a bit unrealistic but we need a reason for the date and the lack of contact and that's all I'm getting.

It explains why she agrees to the modifications as well, each of them are done mostly to improve her street value or make her easy to identify for whatever reason. In America I'd do it so I knew who my girls were but in a country where it's legal. . . we'll work on that just like we'll work on why these places are little better than slave dens later.

Is there a reason why you want it to be legal when so much of your story works way better if you just pop over to a country where it's not legal?

I'm curious where you see this going since you mentioned her coming out with information of other people who are trapped. I'm curious how dark you want to go with this.

I ask because I can see her getting some loyalty to some of the other girls who either take pity on her because she's new or figure out who and what she is and help her survive so that she'll return the favor when she gets out.

I have limited (knew a couple people, transcribed interviews, wrote reviews helped with screeners) with the porn industry so I'm gonna use some comparisons.

In porn this is done so there is always a "pro" on set in the story it would be basically the same thing just we don't want our heroine hurt (she needs a working name by the way. Not an official name just a name we can call her so she's not the heroine.) so for her first trick she's sent out with Molly our "load bearing slut." and she does most of the work while the Heroine whimpers and cowers. You see it a fair amount with actual porn where one girl is kinda passive and clearly confused while the other takes charge and when you watch too much porn you can tell the difference between I'm playing my role, I'm bored and oh my god what did I get myself into! It's the third we're talking about here.

 

[lovecraft68]

I guess I'm going to be a dud here, but this is one of those scenarios that I need a back story, why the hell are they doing this? is it for a huge pile of money? Why would a woman sign anything that would allow any "modifications" the pimp wants to make?

As much as I detest sexual slavery stories, I think you should remove consent and stick it there or none of this makes any sense.

On another note, wife turning prostitute is usually a turn on for me, especially with Hubbies knowledge(as in he is a voyeur and loves to watch from a hidden place.

But this one is beyond me.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Hey you can't be the dud! I'm already dudding it up here! Well I was and then I started helping.

 

[lovecraft68]

Hey you can't be the dud! I'm already dudding it up here! Well I was and then I started helping.

D'oh, I broke the two duds on a thread rule.

Okay, this is what we'll do. You said you started helping so you're no longer a dud.

I, on the other hand, will continue to stomp my foot and say "reality dammit!"

Honestly, I don;t know why, but the modification thing bothers me. That doesn't just scream slavery, but have you ever read some of the truly depraved BDSM modification stories? Ugh and I think that is what I keep having images of.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Agreed, I can be good cop. I think that's what I usually do with you anyway.

Yes I've read a few of those body mod stories and . . .yeah if there is anything in the world that disturbs me its those. I've been trying to keep this "tasteful" in my head. So she'll get a Tattoo like Pamela Anderson got that barbwire tattoo around her arm to commemorate her crappy movie It's easy enough to cover up with clothing and based on various . . .ahem. . .photos I've seen of her you can practically over look it if you don't know it's there or your attention is somewhere else and you could cover it up with make up without much effort too. By contrast I don't think women with full sleaves are sexy now if this is about breaking a bitch it makes sense but I assume that a large enough majority of guys think like me that even pornstars seem reluctant to get full sleeves. I see plenty with big tattoos but not a lot of sleeves. I guess (comic book geek in me coming out) you could probably get some pretty sexy facial tattoos if you were willing to forever brand this girl as the Elfin Sorceress Titania with a blue diamond tatooed over the her right eye. Or the Vampire Countess Elizabeth Bathory with. . .okay I don't know what facial tattoo I give the Blood Countess but yeah that. This would be the girl who's hair you dye Green or Blue or purple and seel her as the Mutant Domino with a spade over her eye. . .okay I can almost see that. Apparently the sickness is rising.

Piercings I have a harder time with cus like I said I can't think of any females (girls or women) that I know of who don't have pierced ears. Most seem to have two and three (two in the lobe, one up high) are common enough that I really dug a hole when someone's girlfriend got one and I was supposed to notice for reasons unknown. Anyway I was like nope nothing new, then from that to oh so many people have those I just assumed I'd never noticed on you before and I was looking for something new. I did not get cookies that day. Nipples and navals can be covered up with ease leaving lips, tongues and eyebrows left. Or the ever present clit but. . .yeah I'm admittedly a sadist. THAT SOUNDS CRUEL. And while a very evil part of me wants to know if you can attach a chain to it and use it as a leash 99% of me is going dear god what separates you from the monsters if you do that kind of thing!

I'm not a strict "real tits" I'm a strict "if I can tell you had work done you fucked up guy" That said I can't see anybody modifying a girl in this kind of story for any reason other than cruel and unusual treatment to giver her those really odd duck lips that too many starlets have and only Angelina Jolie seems to be able to pull off reasonably well (and I don't think they are great on her, I just think they don't ruin her) and the kinds of tits that have their own gravitational pull. Otherwise it's kinda pointless especially in a story. though I guess you COULD go with a reduction. . .I kinda wonder what Laurel would do if you took an adult woman and removed her tits outright, cut her hair short and made her run around playing with toy trucks? I mean anybody who's been around knows the 18 year old only rule is really more a mishmash of age, looks and behavior. Is twenty year old woman with no tits, hair cut like a boy skipping around flying a kite a prepubecent boy? She'd still even have the right voice mind you.

Which as an asside occasonally interests me from a social point cus there are girls (some porn star but just some women) who age REALLY well or really poorly depending on your point of view and look 14-16 all the way until they are 30 something. Are you a fucked up person for being with them? They are legal age but based on how we've made our society you shouldn't find her physically attractive and you are in fact sick for looking at her like that.

Anyway.

 

[DAMND ONE]

Interesting, hanks for the input everyone, it's helping greatly. As for the story being in a legal nation; I'm using it as a background for hushed reports of 'other' married women going there to experience the world of prostitution. Some not coming back and staying in the profession. And those that do come back becoming too sexually sophisticated for their husbands, and become high end escorts; or madams.
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I want to use the reporter angle because these are nations were it's legal, a cop wouldn't be of any use (although maybe I can have one going to the nation with her?). So, an intrepid reporter going to blow the lid off of the international sex slave trade. Only to become hooked in the life, advocating the legalization of prostitution, to end or at least diminish the taking of women and men into sex slavery here.
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As for the modifications, the contract will have to show a stipulation of not going over board. But, a mandatory 30 day training period by the brothel owner. I'll stop using the term pimp.
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[lovecraft68]

Good luck with this, but for me, its not my thing. Whenever sexual slavery is mentioned I'm more apt to write about the slave owner having his cock sliced off and fed to him.

Actually I did write something like that, but its published for pay, it would break the men can;t be harmed rule.