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34yo eve is married(no kids) her husband asks her to entertain two out-of-town businessmen.....she is attractive,5'3"tall 120lbs green eyed blonde.
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Eve -- at least, I am assuming that is your name,
Do you have any preference as to character motivation? Why would her husband ask her to do such a thing? Does he need the money? Perhapos he must impress them for business reasons? Extortion, perhaps? Maybe he likes to watch, and plans to be there when she seduces them? Or is it that she is the one who wanted a little spice in her life, and he was forced to accommodate her?
How do you want this scenario to play out? The more info you give, the better the storyline can be written to your specifications. Get back to me.
-T
Eve -- at least, I am assuming that is your name,
Do you have any preference as to character motivation? Why would her husband ask her to do such a thing? Does he need the money? Perhapos he must impress them for business reasons? Extortion, perhaps? Maybe he likes to watch, and plans to be there when she seduces them? Or is it that she is the one who wanted a little spice in her life, and he was forced to accommodate her?
How do you want this scenario to play out? The more info you give, the better the storyline can be written to your specifications. Get back to me.
-T
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Dear T.
Thank you for responding,first of all I am Eve,our(your) story is basically my fantasy.In truth I am married to a Casino executive,but for the story I would suggest that he is a Sales executive,who need my help to close an important deal he has been working on for sometime.I am attractive enough,young enough and keen enough to carry this off.Part of my fantasy is to go out to meet these two men and be dressed and act like a high class whore,or maybe a high class whore would in truth be too refined for the person(read Tart) I want to be.I am sure you will have more questions,which I am more than willing to answer.
I thank you for your patience.....Eve
Thank you for responding,first of all I am Eve,our(your) story is basically my fantasy.In truth I am married to a Casino executive,but for the story I would suggest that he is a Sales executive,who need my help to close an important deal he has been working on for sometime.I am attractive enough,young enough and keen enough to carry this off.Part of my fantasy is to go out to meet these two men and be dressed and act like a high class whore,or maybe a high class whore would in truth be too refined for the person(read Tart) I want to be.I am sure you will have more questions,which I am more than willing to answer.
I thank you for your patience.....Eve
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Dear Mr.T.
Thank you.....I look forward very much to reading your story.Can you please post here to let me know where I will be able to read it.Thanking you in anticipation........ regards.....Eve
Thank you.....I look forward very much to reading your story.Can you please post here to let me know where I will be able to read it.Thanking you in anticipation........ regards.....Eve
Story in Progress
Eve;
Just a short note to tell you that I haven't forgot about your storyline. I have completed the first rough draft, and am making my way through the corrections.
Do you want the story posted here when it is complete, or emailed directly to you? Let me know.
Warmest,
-T
Eve;
Just a short note to tell you that I haven't forgot about your storyline. I have completed the first rough draft, and am making my way through the corrections.
Do you want the story posted here when it is complete, or emailed directly to you? Let me know.
Warmest,
-T
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Dear Mr.T
Thank you for your note it was nice to hear from you so quickly,I am really looking forward to reading your story,please post it here so I can pehaps share it with others.
Once again thank you..........kisses.......eve
Thank you for your note it was nice to hear from you so quickly,I am really looking forward to reading your story,please post it here so I can pehaps share it with others.
Once again thank you..........kisses.......eve
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Mr.T.
No problem,look forward to hearing from you.......Eve
No problem,look forward to hearing from you.......Eve
In the Garden of Eve
Eve;
I've rewritten the story to incorporate some of the new details I know about you -- piercings, interests, etc. I have also added characters from another storyline I've been working on for the last month, making it a crossover type story. Those details won't mean anything to you, but should provide thrills for the woman mentioned in the story.
I've also modified your avatar's persona, making her a little more worldly, but naive in other areas of sexuality. I hope this works out.
The title has been changed to "In the Garden of Eve." The three main character's names are Eve, Adam and Eden. I'm guessing that you don't need to be told where I took the Dramatis Personae list from, do I? I also made the main action occur in a Casino, in deference to you husband's true workplace. I named the casino "Gomorrah," in order to keep the biblical theme, and because of all of the sinful connotations the name carries. Sodom was too blatant for my tastes.
Anyways, just a short note to let you know that I am still hard at work on the story, and haven't abandoned you. If there are any other details you want added, let me know in this thread, or email me at tatewaki_25@hotmail.com. I am also hard at work at writing my "Synder and Ashe" and "Ember and Ashe" serials, so please forgive me if the story isn't being written fast enough.
Take care.
-T
Eve;
I've rewritten the story to incorporate some of the new details I know about you -- piercings, interests, etc. I have also added characters from another storyline I've been working on for the last month, making it a crossover type story. Those details won't mean anything to you, but should provide thrills for the woman mentioned in the story.
I've also modified your avatar's persona, making her a little more worldly, but naive in other areas of sexuality. I hope this works out.
The title has been changed to "In the Garden of Eve." The three main character's names are Eve, Adam and Eden. I'm guessing that you don't need to be told where I took the Dramatis Personae list from, do I? I also made the main action occur in a Casino, in deference to you husband's true workplace. I named the casino "Gomorrah," in order to keep the biblical theme, and because of all of the sinful connotations the name carries. Sodom was too blatant for my tastes.
Anyways, just a short note to let you know that I am still hard at work on the story, and haven't abandoned you. If there are any other details you want added, let me know in this thread, or email me at tatewaki_25@hotmail.com. I am also hard at work at writing my "Synder and Ashe" and "Ember and Ashe" serials, so please forgive me if the story isn't being written fast enough.
Take care.
-T
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Re: In the Garden of Eve
Get out of my head, eh?
Luckily the settings are different, though, but I have/had a story in the works called Down in the Garden and the main character is Eva.
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Get out of my head, eh?
Luckily the settings are different, though, but I have/had a story in the works called Down in the Garden and the main character is Eva. Down in the Garden
Ah, Tiggs, great minds do think alike after all!
I'm sure our tales won't be the last scamming the names of Adam, Lilith, Eve and the Garden of Eden. Ditto for Sodom and Gomorrah. Any tale you can draw upon that has such a huge readership as does the Old Testament will automatically be subjected to creative borrowing.
"Scampling" isn't just for Hiphop tracks!
Is your story nearing completion? I'm eager to read your story and to see how you handle it. Like I said in grade school to many a girl, "If you show me yours, I'll show you mine."
Cheers!
-T
Ah, Tiggs, great minds do think alike after all!
I'm sure our tales won't be the last scamming the names of Adam, Lilith, Eve and the Garden of Eden. Ditto for Sodom and Gomorrah. Any tale you can draw upon that has such a huge readership as does the Old Testament will automatically be subjected to creative borrowing.
"Scampling" isn't just for Hiphop tracks!
Is your story nearing completion? I'm eager to read your story and to see how you handle it. Like I said in grade school to many a girl, "If you show me yours, I'll show you mine."
Cheers!
-T
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Re: Down in the Garden
Saddly, not yet. But, maybe I'll come back to it soon. When I go through periods of writer's block, I get unfinished stories, and I sometimes start something new to try to gain my interest again.
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Saddly, not yet. But, maybe I'll come back to it soon. When I go through periods of writer's block, I get unfinished stories, and I sometimes start something new to try to gain my interest again.
Re: Down in the Garden
Tiggs,
That's the reason why I have so many stories being written at the same time. I can honestly say that I've never experienced writer's block. Instead, I always feel as if I'm behind schedule, desperately scrabbling to finish up all of my projects. I force myself to outline a minimum of two new stories a week, and to never start writing a story until it is fully outlined. I am free to deviate from my original outline, but I find it comforting to know that if inspiration doesn't strike, I have my original plan to rely on.
I don't know if that technique will work for anyone else, but it works for me!
Take care, Tiggs.
-T
Tiggs,
That's the reason why I have so many stories being written at the same time. I can honestly say that I've never experienced writer's block. Instead, I always feel as if I'm behind schedule, desperately scrabbling to finish up all of my projects. I force myself to outline a minimum of two new stories a week, and to never start writing a story until it is fully outlined. I am free to deviate from my original outline, but I find it comforting to know that if inspiration doesn't strike, I have my original plan to rely on.
I don't know if that technique will work for anyone else, but it works for me!
Take care, Tiggs.
-T
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Tatewaki said:
I have MANY stories all a page or two long, but I still get writer's block.
Someday I shall finish a story again...Writing like that does not work for me. I cannot outline a story, and I cannot go write a sex scene first and then go back to the "beginning". I get ideas in my head (and I jot them down as notes), but then I have to start AT the "beginning" adn just go start to (hopeful!) finish...
To Outline or Not to Outline. Is That the Question?
Tiggs;
I guess that is the difference between approaching writing as a craft, and writing as an art. One way isn't superior to the other, only different. Hell, it seems like the way I write differs from writing project to writing project. I still swear by outlines, though. Mind you, the outlines I use between writing assignments vary wildly. Sometimes, it is a pseudo-screenplay format I use. sometimes, a chronological treatment. Other times, I prefer to use dialogue only, with a little bit of stage direction added to provide context. Whatever outlining scheme I choose, I absolutely require one.
Sometimes I wish I didn't have to rely on an outline, but why mess with what works? By using the outlines, I always manage to finish what I start, even if the finished product sometimes falls short of what I originally imagined it to be.
-T
Tiggs;
I guess that is the difference between approaching writing as a craft, and writing as an art. One way isn't superior to the other, only different. Hell, it seems like the way I write differs from writing project to writing project. I still swear by outlines, though. Mind you, the outlines I use between writing assignments vary wildly. Sometimes, it is a pseudo-screenplay format I use. sometimes, a chronological treatment. Other times, I prefer to use dialogue only, with a little bit of stage direction added to provide context. Whatever outlining scheme I choose, I absolutely require one.
Sometimes I wish I didn't have to rely on an outline, but why mess with what works? By using the outlines, I always manage to finish what I start, even if the finished product sometimes falls short of what I originally imagined it to be.
-T
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Mr.T.
Having now read your profile,I see why you are making ajustments to our(your) story,perhaps I should have mentioned my peircings in my original note to you.I am more that happy with your proposed direction of the story,and there is no rush on my part to see it completed.However I am going to be away on vacation for the next two weeks,so if you print the story while I am away,dont be alarmed if there is no immediate response from me.Thanks for being so informative.
regards.....Eve
Having now read your profile,I see why you are making ajustments to our(your) story,perhaps I should have mentioned my peircings in my original note to you.I am more that happy with your proposed direction of the story,and there is no rush on my part to see it completed.However I am going to be away on vacation for the next two weeks,so if you print the story while I am away,dont be alarmed if there is no immediate response from me.Thanks for being so informative.
regards.....Eve
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Mr.T,
So disappointed that your story did not get approved,especially as you seemed to have put so much effort into the project.Some how I would still like to read it.......Kind regards.......Eve
So disappointed that your story did not get approved,especially as you seemed to have put so much effort into the project.Some how I would still like to read it.......Kind regards.......Eve
Don't lose hope!
Eve;
The story still says "Pending." I haven't received any feedback from Laurel or Manu stating that it has been rejected. Hopefully, it will get the green light one of these days.
I hope it does. as you say, I spent a hellish amount of time writing it.
Warmest,
-T
Eve;
The story still says "Pending." I haven't received any feedback from Laurel or Manu stating that it has been rejected. Hopefully, it will get the green light one of these days.
I hope it does. as you say, I spent a hellish amount of time writing it.
Warmest,
-T
It's FINALLY here!
Eve;
Your story request (I guess I should have said Requested Story!) is online. It went up this morning.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=41823
I hope you like it.
-T
Eve;
Your story request (I guess I should have said Requested Story!) is online. It went up this morning.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=41823
I hope you like it.
-T
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Nicely done
Very nicely done tatewoki. I enjoyed your story.
There is another story using this premise in the Loving Wives category. It is titled "Prostitute Games" by tonytony3. Obviously, it doesn't have your BDSM action, but it is well written and worth a look.
Very nicely done tatewoki. I enjoyed your story.
There is another story using this premise in the Loving Wives category. It is titled "Prostitute Games" by tonytony3. Obviously, it doesn't have your BDSM action, but it is well written and worth a look.
