Wife at kickboxing

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I want to read a story about a wife taking kickboxing from a Hot instructer and then winds up having sex with him
 
over6fttallcop said:
I want to read a story about a wife taking kickboxing from a Hot instructer and then winds up having sex with him

does the couple take the class together? or is the hubby clueless?
 
As a teenager I was a boxer. I sparred a couple of times with females. Somewhat perversely, there was something erotic about it in a way. Though thinking about it, at that age, everything was hot.
 
wehstar said:
As a teenager I was a boxer. I sparred a couple of times with females. Somewhat perversely, there was something erotic about it in a way. Though thinking about it, at that age, everything was hot.


i would be more open for judo...less hitting and more time on the mat
 
I thought about this a little more.

One interesting factor with boxing gyms (which I guess relates also to kickboxing I'm sure) is the lack of female changing facilities, showers, etc. These places tend to have one changing room due to being historically male dominated sports. This would be more true of the traditional and smaller amateur clubs that compete seriously, as opposed to the newer "cool" places that seem to be popping up.

Another factor in the eroticism is the intense training involved. Hot, sweaty, sticky bodies. Before BO kicks in (bacteria growing hours after exercise), sweat contains sexy pheromones I am told. The mixture of sex with the endorphins released after really pushing your body to the limit exercising, would also be interesting.
 
I was kind of inspired by the thread.

What if this is a loving wives story where the couple goes to the gym together for kick boxing lessons (perhaps they were recently assaulted and were incapable of fighting off their attackers).

Their self-defense instructor starts putting the moves on the wife and ends up spending a lot of time on the mat with her. Anytime the husband objects, the instructor gives the twerp a beating in the ring, then goes back to "practice" with the wife.
 
Athena_e19 said:
I was kind of inspired by the thread.

What if this is a loving wives story where the couple goes to the gym together for kick boxing lessons (perhaps they were recently assaulted and were incapable of fighting off their attackers).

Their self-defense instructor starts putting the moves on the wife and ends up spending a lot of time on the mat with her. Anytime the husband objects, the instructor gives the twerp a beating in the ring, then goes back to "practice" with the wife.


some private lessons with the husband and wife. this will take the story down the path of a cuckold theme? the wife loves being with the big strong man.
 
It would definitely shift the tone. I am writing it now- just started in fact.

As I said, the assault would be the catalyst for the lessons. The wife is pissed that her husband was incapable of or chose not to, defend her. So when this hunky self-defense instructor starts feeling her up during her lessons, she encourages it. And when hubby speaks up or whines, he gets beat in the ring.

I'm not sure how long this will go or what type of twists would be introduced but it sounds fun and original.
 
wehstar said:
Another factor in the eroticism is the intense training involved. Hot, sweaty, sticky bodies. Before BO kicks in (bacteria growing hours after exercise), sweat contains sexy pheromones I am told. The mixture of sex with the endorphins released after really pushing your body to the limit exercising, would also be interesting.
In ancient Rome, gladiator sweat was a popular aphrodisiac for women of the ruling classes.
(I just *have* to write a gladiator story at some point...)
 
wehstar said:
Another factor in the eroticism is the intense training involved. Hot, sweaty, sticky bodies. Before BO kicks in (bacteria growing hours after exercise), sweat contains sexy pheromones I am told. The mixture of sex with the endorphins released after really pushing your body to the limit exercising, would also be interesting.

When I was in high school, I was in a jazz band with various other members of the marching band, This included two girls who were also on the soccer team. Their soccer practice overlapped with the Jazz Band practice, so they'd come in late, usually still in their soccer gear and quite sweaty.

One time, I happened to be sitting behind them in the band hall during practice... and I honestly don't think I've ever been hornier than that in my life, at least, not without some "warm up" first. Even at the time, I was fairly certain it had something to do with their smell. I couldn't even focus on the music I was supposed to play.
 
I played volleyball in high school and early on in college, and we girls can get quite a bit of sweat worked up during practice.

The worst part was watching my teammates in the little spandex bottoms and tops. They got these really sexy little sweat triangles just above the curve of their buttocks and breasts. Too die for!

I'd always masturbate after practice. I was pretty good at pretending that my sexuality didn't affect my view on the sport and teammates but they were beautiful. I was shorter then most of them and the thought of a sweaty orgy with these hot tall girls was too much.

I don't usually jump in like that but it is pretty sexy.

From a kick boxing or MMA point of view, the sweat could be a wonderful lubricant and excuse for accidental pokes, prods, and gropes.
 
Athena_e19 said:
I played volleyball in high school and early on in college, and we girls can get quite a bit of sweat worked up during practice.

The worst part was watching my teammates in the little spandex bottoms and tops. They got these really sexy little sweat triangles just above the curve of their buttocks and breasts. Too die for!

I'd always masturbate after practice. I was pretty good at pretending that my sexuality didn't affect my view on the sport and teammates but they were beautiful. I was shorter then most of them and the thought of a sweaty orgy with these hot tall girls was too much.

I don't usually jump in like that but it is pretty sexy.

From a kick boxing or MMA point of view, the sweat could be a wonderful lubricant and excuse for accidental pokes, prods, and gropes.

Uhm... I'll be in my bunk.

To suggest an alternate direction for the story, does the kickboxing instructor that cuckolds the husband HAVE to be a guy? Maybe it's just a very dominant (lith or butch, your choice) female kickboxer?
 
You absolutely could. It might be interesting to see this as a sexuality identity crisis of sorts for the woman.

I've already submitted my story... I'll post a link as soon as its up.
 
It's up and getting thrashed.... And I'm getting lots of hateful feedback and a few threats sent to my email.... It seems that guys don't like the story because of the cuckolding element to it... In fact, its probably almost humiliation.

Here's the link: Defending His Right

I'd love to hear what some unbiased readers think.
 
Athena_e19 said:
It's up and getting thrashed.... And I'm getting lots of hateful feedback and a few threats sent to my email.... It seems that guys don't like the story because of the cuckolding element to it... In fact, its probably almost humiliation.

Here's the link: Defending His Right

I'd love to hear what some unbiased readers think.


Wow, great work! So far you have 26 comments...and no I have not read them all. However, I do find it funny that people get upset while reading a story but isn't that a good thing? you've moved someone, to do something (i.e. write a comment about your story), granted some of these poeple are childish....


hope your score is better and the bad emails have stopped!
 
Thanks for the positive comment Jen.

The pace of the commentary, negatively at least, has really fallen off.

The way one of the forum moderators described it to me is that the category of Loving Wives has three more distinct groups that are all quite biased towards their own subject matters. Cuckolding is one and no matter how good the story, the other two groups generally dislike them.
 
Heya Athena, I just finished your story and commented.

I am amused to see how many of these guys failed to realize that "Athena" isn't customarily a male name. They probably are the guys who think it's a great idea to name their son "Sue" as well.

So tell me, what is it like to be a woman hating man? :D
 
Quite refreshing actually.

With the loudest spokespeople for the general male population sounding like this;

Hey idiot...not every man from planet is guilty for your wimp father and whore mother s behaviours...if youre sick go have some medical help...if not go KILL YOURSELF, nothing to loose...youre nothing, nada, ZERO, try hide your fat body in your father s grave, maybe one dead man will touch you and love you...or better, try DOGS, they dont need feelings to bread
I am part of the majority.

I don't know if they are stupid for not picking up on the name thing. Maybe they just think that Johnny Cash's lyrical subject in "A Boy Named Sue" and I were fathered by the same individual. I am one tough cookie after all

:)
 
Athena_e19 said:
It's up and getting thrashed.... And I'm getting lots of hateful feedback and a few threats sent to my email.... It seems that guys don't like the story because of the cuckolding element to it... In fact, its probably almost humiliation.

Here's the link: Defending His Right

I'd love to hear what some unbiased readers think.

on this subject, what if you had more details on the rape? is that a taboo subject? i'm not sure if i asked before but I have a couple of long stories that have some dark themes of our history (America). two stories are based in 1800's and one story is based on Roman times. I would love to know how close your story came to any limits for literotica? does that make sense?
 
I was a little concerned about the opening sequence and whether it would get shot down- but surprisingly it went through without one decline.

I actually used the term rape to describe the situation and despite Jasmine's enjoyment of it, I still described it as a somewhat emotionally traumatizing experience. I deliberately avoided more detail on it because I didn't want to write it, like it, then have to remove it.

It is an interesting point of contention though isn't it? How much would have been too much. Based on the story line it couldn't have been an overtly pleasing and satisfying experience for Jazzy to have the necessary effect. But could I have gone into more detail and still had the go ahead?
 
Athena_e19 said:
It's up and getting thrashed.... And I'm getting lots of hateful feedback and a few threats sent to my email.... It seems that guys don't like the story because of the cuckolding element to it... In fact, its probably almost humiliation.

Here's the link: Defending His Right

I'd love to hear what some unbiased readers think.
Now I enjoy the cuckolding stories and am naturally submissive with humiliation being a turn on of sorts. However when I read your idea above, about the coach and the wife doing it against the husbands will with him helpless - I didn't like the idea - a big turn off. I'll see what you wrote now and let you know what I think...
 
I always appreciate the feedback as long as it is intelligent and critical, not offensive and silly.
 
wehstar said:
Now I enjoy the cuckolding stories and am naturally submissive with humiliation being a turn on of sorts. However when I read your idea above, about the coach and the wife doing it against the husbands will with him helpless - I didn't like the idea - a big turn off. I'll see what you wrote now and let you know what I think...
As per aforementioned opinion it is perhaps a biased opininon. It is far from any fantasy I had, plus the little details in the opener seemed to lack realism - the behaviour of people in the gym different to any of my experiences. (You don't go to a gym for coaching and then just get beat up by someone far more experienced - not anywhere I have ever been anyway.) But then it is fiction.

It is written by a woman, and I can imagine it is more of a female fantasy, or that of a bi male I would have thought. I'm sure some people appreciate that sort of thing and would like to see chapter two.

There was one bit that made me grin though "The smell of her sweat on her body increased the vividness of her memories. "
 
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