WickedEve talks "About My Panties"!

[tigerjen]

When I talk about "My Rose"....
WickedEve talks "About My Panties"!

can I say hot hot hot?

link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=28471

check out another hot poem by WickedEve!

TJ

 

[Manjaro_Eve]

Thank you for commenting on my panty poem!
It was fun to write. I think my next one will about my bra! lol Or my hooters... that would be a hoot to write about!

Teasingly,
Wicked Eve

 

[tigerjen]

an ode to a bra?

Thank you for commenting on my panty poem!
It was fun to write. I think my next one will about my
bra! lol Or my hooters... that would be a hoot to write about!

Hi WickedEve!
(I notice you have two names on here...which one should I call you?)
You're welcome.........I think that your sequel to the panty
poem should be "an ode to a bra"?

TJ

 

[Manjaro_Eve]

Darn! I knew I was going to do that! lol I forgot to sign out as Manjaro Eve and sign in as my Wicked Eve... lol My Master (yes, I have one) and I use the Manjaro Eve one for stories and poems we work on together. Wicked Eve is my fun girl! Wicked Eve gets to submit panty poetry and odes to bras!

 

[tigerjen]

Darn! I knew I was going to do that! lol I forgot to
sign out as Manjaro Eve and sign in as my Wicked Eve... lol
My Master (yes, I have one) and I use the Manjaro Eve
one for stories and poems we work on together. Wicked
Eve is my fun girl! Wicked Eve gets to submit panty
poetry and odes to bras!

Cool!!!! Now I know the distinction! Merci!

TJ

 

[WickedEve]

Well, I'm back as Wicked Eve. If anymore Eves pop up on the message board, they are not me! Not unless I have multiple personalities... and don't know it.

 

[tigerjen]

multiple personalities.....

Well, I'm back as Wicked Eve. If anymore Eves
pop up on the message board, they are not me!
Not unless I have multiple personalities... and don't
know it.

You only have two......
But I'll keep my eyes peeled.........:6

 

[WickedEve]

Thank you Tigerjen

If more of my personalities do show up, alert my original personality so "we" can seek professional help.

 

[tigerjen]

I'll be right on it!

Thank you Tigerjen
If more of my personalities do show up, alert
my original personality so "we" can seek professional
help.

I will alert you! (playing theme from "Dragnet" in
background)

TJ

 

[Guest]

lol.........

Again....poems about panties and bras are ok.

But I like the ones dealing with after you've peeled all that stuff off.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=39666

To sleep......perchance to dream - William Shakespear

I remain..........

 

[WickedEve]

Maybe I'll do a series of poems about body parts. I'll start with lips and work my way down until I get to some naked, wet flesh.

Teasingly,
Wicked Eve

 

[tigerjen]

poems about body parts

Maybe I'll do a series of poems about body parts.
I'll start with lips and work my way down until I get
to some naked, wet flesh.

Hey!
That sounds real cool! I say that you go for it!

TJ

 

[KichigaiFufu]

When I talk about "My Rose"....
WickedEve talks "About My Panties"!

can I say hot hot hot?

link:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=28471

check out another hot poem by WickedEve!

TJ

How she DOES talk about those PANTIES! Speaking of real HOOTERS, WICKED Eve mentioned in a reply to our FEEDBACK about her W-A-Y tasty pean to panties a TRUE tale of panties WET from her tail, ziplocked & enveloped into a LOVE letter discovered by her Mother during their chucklacious drive to the post office. Well, you KNOW how that goes! I used to call mine, "My Dom Mom" when she'd drag me kicking and moaning out of my favorite chat brothel. Anyway, I DO wish our WICKED Poetess Laurelette would tell us more of her TRUE LIFE ADVENTURES! Hint, hint. WICKED Eve is the REAL THING all the way down!

LOVE HER SO MUCH!

Feverishly fervent fans, Lucky & Pixie

 

[Manjaro_Eve]

Kinky, after talking to you, I think we need to start a ziplock club! lol
To this day, I still don't know how momma guessed what I was mailing... I must have that guilty, "I've got panties in this box" look.

 

[WickedEve]

 

[tigerjen]

"About My Panties" is #1 today!

"About My Panties" is #1 today (as of 10:25am EST)
on the poetry toplist!

Way to go, WickedEve!

TJ

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

Sorry if this annoys, but, tigerjen, are you purposely promoting people?

Eve, the poem was fine, but, really, its greatest accomplishment was that it rhymed "lips" with "drips". I'm not saying you can't write, but this piece is certainly no indication one way or another. It's only two four-line stanzas long and says very little, and isn't all that brilliantly crafted . It's not that there's anything wrong with it, really, it's nice little read, but does it deserve an entire thread to tell the world how "great" it is?

I'm just wondering about all of tigerjen's "Oh my god this poem is so great!" threads lately.

TJ -- why all the fuss? They're not THAT good. And a couple of them are pretty bad. Are they all friends, or what?

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I take it all back ifyou're just trying to encourage and help writers get attention, which is certainly very nice.

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

I just read this on another thread:

I have recently been "laying low"
in terms of self-promoting my work and focusing on
promoting others' writing.

Guess that answers my question. LOL

It is nice of you to recommend and extol the virtues of other writers. Sorry, but your sensational praise of bad to okay poetry had me scratching my head.

 

[WickedEve]

Hi DCL

I didn't ask for my poetry to be promoted. But I've had fun with it. I agree about some of the poems. I was surprised that About my Panties was so well received. I wrote that bit of panty fluff in a couple of minutes. I thought some readers may have fun with it.
I've been submitting different ones just to see what works on this site. Some of the poems I've had a lot fun with and wanted to share. Some are better. I think my Quest for the Mermaid under Manjaro_Eve is good and a few others.
But I don't understand why you are "bothered" by tj promoting them. There's plenty of room on this board for all of us. If you're not interested in my poems, then skip threads that mention them.
I will share this with you. I'm a little bothered that the Panty Poem made it to number one, while what I consider much better poetry by me and others, didn't.
But Literotica is about fun and sex, mostly. So I will keep putting out these quickly written, little poems for those who enjoy them. And for those who don't, I have better stuff you may like. If not, there are plenty of good poets out there.

Wicked Eve

 

[daughter]

promotion

WE--

I don't think Dixon is bothered by your fun poetry. I think he's questioning why TJ is promoting these particular pieces.

You yourself said you are a little bothered that what you consider to be your better works have not ranked while a 'fun' ditty scribbled in a few minutes makes #1.

Makes sense to offer a variety and see what the readership is responsive to.

Wicked Eve, you've shared that you're interested in growing as a writer. That can't happen if folks like Dixon don't speak up and say when he thinks something is mediocre. He acknowledged that you have some skill and that your poems are fun. What's inappropriate about him saying something less than gushing praise? Why should he pass over them? He's not talking about his personal preference, he was talking about the construction of the poems.

At some point, if a writer is going to improve, we've got to examine the writing from a technical perspective. If you're a hobby writer, we can stick to the cursory praise that is fleeting. If you want to develop your skills at writing, then you have to be willing to talk about the constitutes solid writing.

Who hits the mark everytime? When we don't, and someone says so, it's an opportunity to work harder and improve. Of course, you'd have consider first if you think what he said is valid.

Peace,

daughter

 

[WickedEve]

I don't think Dixon is bothered by your fun poetry. I think he's questioning why TJ is promoting these particular pieces.

Hi daughter. Glad to get your comments on this.
First, I didn't say he was bothered by my fun poetry. I thought he may be bothered by tj promoting it.

You yourself said you are a little bothered that what you consider to be your better works have not ranked while a 'fun' ditty scribbled in a few minutes makes #1.

That's true. Maybe "bothered" isn't accurate. Though, I would rather see better poetry getting the recognition. I'm sure the Panty poem will only be #1 for a day. It's fun, but easily forgotten.

Makes sense to offer a variety and see what the readership is responsive to.

I enjoy doing that!

Wicked Eve, you've shared that you're interested in growing as a writer. That can't happen if folks like Dixon don't speak up and say when he thinks something is mediocre.

I want him to speak up! It's okay! lol I actually wrote him a nice email earlier and thanked him for being honest about my work.

What's inappropriate about him saying something less than gushing praise?

I'm confused by this statement. I'm sure I never said anything about that. I didn't say it was inappropriate for him say less than gushing praise. I hate gushing praise! It embarrasses me. I've laughed all the way through this fuss over these poems. That's how I handle praise. I actually have a problem with too much praise. I know I can do better and I don't want to be praised for this kind of work. But I also realize that people are enjoying it, so I go along with it and have fun. And I have had a wonderful time here!

*****
One last thing. To you tigerjen: You've been very nice to mention my poetry. I do appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed the poems, and I think some of what you promoted is good poetry, like Quest for the Mermaid. And I think it's cool to promote the other ones. A lot of readers have enjoyed them. They're entertaining.
I just wanted you to know that I do appreciate it. You've made a newbie feel welcome! Hey, I guess I'm not a newbie anymore.
I love literotica and all the new friends!

Teasingly,
Wicked Eve

 

[daughter]

Clarification

WE--

Then I misunderstood the statement, "pass over the threads". I took that to mean that we shouldn't comment to threads when we take issue with something in a work.

WE, I know you're open-minded. I wasn't speaking just about your poem, but to the on going debate on this site lately about what is and what isn't appropriate to say in a thread.

Peace,

daughter

 

[tigerjen]

DCL....you should never assume

I just read this on another thread:
It is nice of you to recommend and extol the virtues of other writers. Sorry, but your sensational praise of bad to okay poetry had me scratching my head.

DCL....
I just saw your two replies on here in regards to me....
firstly, when I first signed on to Lit back in the summer
I was told that one of the ways to have people check
out my writing was to check out and promote others'
writing. I think that you overreacted and should never
assume.......I may like a certain piece of writing, and
you may or may not like that same piece. That is
okay. But please don't assume I'm purposely promoting
others.......that was uncool of you to say that.

TJ

 

[tigerjen]

WickedEve....thank you.....

WickedEve wrote:
<<One last thing. To you tigerjen: You've been very nice
to mention my poetry. I do appreciate it. I'm glad you
enjoyed the poems, and I think some of what you
promoted is good poetry, like Quest for the Mermaid.
And I think it's cool to promote the other ones. A lot of
readers have enjoyed them. They're entertaining.
I just wanted you to know that I do appreciate it. You've
made a newbie feel welcome! Hey, I guess I'm not a
newbie anymore. >>

I want to say thank you for the compliment, WickedEve!

TJ

 

[WickedEve]

daughter, about passing over a thread, I must not have stated it right. I just meant that if someone doesn't want to read another thread about my poems, for example, to just skip over it and go on to something else.

Dixon did say, "but does it deserve an entire thread to tell the world how "great" it is?" I think all of the poems and stories on here deserve a thread, if someone wants to start one. You can read it or not. Comment positively, or negatively, or not at all. It's story and poetry feedback for all literotica members and non-members.

There's plenty of room here for Dixon, daughter, tigerjen, and everyone to post whatever they like about any story and poem.

This is my first experience with a message board, and I haven't been here long, you will have to explain this to me: "I wasn't speaking just about your poem, but to the on going debate on this site lately about what is and what isn't appropriate to say in a thread."