Why is it..................

Angelofsex

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The day I wrote my frist poem I was so depressed..........Now my mind is braindead.......and I can't get my words down......It is like a block.
 
Beautiful poem

Really nice poem, Angel.

Maybe you're trying too hard to write. I haven't written much poetry, and I can't force it. I think good poetry comes from such depth that it's easy to lose the words that reflect your feelings and thoughts in such a few lines. Strong emotions help, and I think this poem is evidence. Try getting into the mood by sitting alone and thinking about the things that move you deeply. That works for me when I'm searching for a story line.
 
Re: Beautiful poem

ronde said:
Really nice poem, Angel.

Maybe you're trying too hard to write. I haven't written much poetry, and I can't force it. I think good poetry comes from such depth that it's easy to lose the words that reflect your feelings and thoughts in such a few lines. Strong emotions help, and I think this poem is evidence. Try getting into the mood by sitting alone and thinking about the things that move you deeply. That works for me when I'm searching for a story line.

Thank you very much for answering me and for saying it was a nice poem..........it means alot to me..........I shall be trying again........Just hate it because I mess the last line up.
 
Hi Angel,

The poem was lovely. Poems like those do not come out everyday. Wait patiently for the next one! Hope it comes to you soon. :rose:

-DP.
 
damppanties said:
Hi Angel,

The poem was lovely. Poems like those do not come out everyday. Wait patiently for the next one! Hope it comes to you soon. :rose:

-DP.

Thank you very much damppanties.......:)
 
wonderful poem

My first post on Literotica to a lovely angel, tender words soothing my daily compendium of stress. Laying back tonight on my bed, the full moon almost here, I wish and angel like you would descend upon me and massage me softly and let me spread your wings as we fly up to a blissful cloud and listen to the nightingales sing and unite our passions into ecstasy. Keep writing!!....Denny
 
Re: wonderful poem

eastbayden said:
My first post on Literotica to a lovely angel, tender words soothing my daily compendium of stress. Laying back tonight on my bed, the full moon almost here, I wish and angel like you would descend upon me and massage me softly and let me spread your wings as we fly up to a blissful cloud and listen to the nightingales sing and unite our passions into ecstasy. Keep writing!!....Denny

Wow, thank you very much. My mind is starting to think again.
 
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