Angelofsex
The Fire is Hot
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- Dec 10, 2001
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The day I wrote my frist poem I was so depressed..........Now my mind is braindead.......and I can't get my words down......It is like a block.
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ronde said:Really nice poem, Angel.
Maybe you're trying too hard to write. I haven't written much poetry, and I can't force it. I think good poetry comes from such depth that it's easy to lose the words that reflect your feelings and thoughts in such a few lines. Strong emotions help, and I think this poem is evidence. Try getting into the mood by sitting alone and thinking about the things that move you deeply. That works for me when I'm searching for a story line.
damppanties said:Hi Angel,
The poem was lovely. Poems like those do not come out everyday. Wait patiently for the next one! Hope it comes to you soon.![]()
-DP.
eastbayden said:My first post on Literotica to a lovely angel, tender words soothing my daily compendium of stress. Laying back tonight on my bed, the full moon almost here, I wish and angel like you would descend upon me and massage me softly and let me spread your wings as we fly up to a blissful cloud and listen to the nightingales sing and unite our passions into ecstasy. Keep writing!!....Denny