shakespeare_i_aint
Shakespeare_I._Aint
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I'm going to use the term, "head-hop" as if I had always known what it meant. As though I hadn't googled it just yesterday after seeing an editor's forum post with that phrase in it.
Nowthen: If I was writing a story about a couple having a mutually-shared first experience with someone outside marriage, why can't I jump from the circumstances as reported by the wife to the circumstances noted by the husband?
Because they share a life, aren't they in some way one perspective?
I feel that any couple would talk quite a lot after the experience and share things that they noticed--often things the other person hadn't picked up on. Head-hopping is a way of getting some details and partner-thoughts introduced during the proceedings that wouldn't get there any other way.
It just seems to me that in a wife-sharing story, readers would like to know how each partner is processing an unfolding situation and the feelings of both, rather than the feelings of only one half of the couples equation.
But there are whole web pages dedicated to eradicating head-hopping in any form in any story. No exceptions had been carved out for me and my style.
Shirley, I can head-hop in a couples story, correct?
Nowthen: If I was writing a story about a couple having a mutually-shared first experience with someone outside marriage, why can't I jump from the circumstances as reported by the wife to the circumstances noted by the husband?
Because they share a life, aren't they in some way one perspective?
I feel that any couple would talk quite a lot after the experience and share things that they noticed--often things the other person hadn't picked up on. Head-hopping is a way of getting some details and partner-thoughts introduced during the proceedings that wouldn't get there any other way.
It just seems to me that in a wife-sharing story, readers would like to know how each partner is processing an unfolding situation and the feelings of both, rather than the feelings of only one half of the couples equation.
But there are whole web pages dedicated to eradicating head-hopping in any form in any story. No exceptions had been carved out for me and my style.
Shirley, I can head-hop in a couples story, correct?