Who's dick do I have to suck...

[maxdname]

to get the avenue to writer's "feedback?" I've written a couple o' tales and cannot find the complete "response" from the readers.
Also: how do I go about finding a willing female slave able to conduct an online and secret life, repleat with pillow talk and masturbation to the "top of the world, ma!" without breaking my sexless, but unbreakable LTR?
Please, I'm a writer with more than a modicum of keyboard talent, in search of a young beauty (photo crazy) who wishes to have a well-built, mature (45 years old, though looks MUCH younger) stern but appropriate "Daddy figure" in her life. If you are out there please talk to me. If you are NOT the "gorilla my dreams" OR I'm not your, BEST man, that's okay... then please read my stories and give me some feedback.
Till then, think of me (or someone you love, or at least want) when you touch yourself, and I offer my best wishes, mark.

 

[jazzysoul]

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

to get the avenue to writer's "feedback?" I've written a couple o' tales and cannot find the complete "response" from the readers.
Also: how do I go about finding a willing female slave able to conduct an online and secret life, repleat with pillow talk and masturbation to the "top of the world, ma!" without breaking my sexless, but unbreakable LTR?
Please, I'm a writer with more than a modicum of keyboard talent, in search of a young beauty (photo crazy) who wishes to have a well-built, mature (45 years old, though looks MUCH younger) stern but appropriate "Daddy figure" in her life. If you are out there please talk to me. If you are NOT the "gorilla my dreams" OR I'm not your, BEST man, that's okay... then please read my stories and give me some feedback.
Till then, think of me (or someone you love, or at least want) when you touch yourself, and I offer my best wishes, mark.

First of all, the first letter in the first word in the first sentence should have been capitalized. In the second sentence the term "o'tales" struck me as somewhat odd. Is that like O'Henry? Or O'Shannesey? Are you telling us you are Irish? Continuing in the same sentence, "response" really should not be in quotes. That's rather bad form, in my humble opinion. Then you end the paragraph with "...unbreakable LTR?" What does that mean?

Then the second half of theparagraph is completely off the subject. What does a "photo crazed" slave have to do with your "LTR"? I find this part of the piece totally unworthy and a waste of hard drive space.

Then you end with a plea to read your stories and comment. I'm again confused. You have stories? What do your stories have to do with your "LTR" or the "photo crazed" slave girl. More to the point, where is the url to your story, or was this it?

I really think you should have had a good editor look at this before you posted this mess.

 

[jomar]

Mine. Then I'll answer your questions. By the way, where's the spam link?

 

[writelove]

My understanding is that you have a Long Term Relationship (LTR) that you say you cannot end, want some safe and untraceable virtual sex, or if nothing else, feedback on your erotic tales.

I cannot understand why a relationship is unbreakable. No relationship is unbreakable. It might be financially difficult to swallow, but all relationships can definitely be ended one way or another.

You provided a home page that doesn't work, need to correct that. I looked you up and found that you have written a story recently.

The URL is: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=311817

The story is called Swing Shift. I read it and thought you were quite good. You had a style that some might not like, but you were consistent with it and it certainly moved the story along. You are simply an extremely funny writer, quick witted with your descriptions. The pace of your story is excellent and your dialog good.

Some of your images were cliches, some were a bit obscure, but on the whole, it worked nicely.

I am glad that I took the time to read it.

Now about sucking on my dick, well, no way.

I would think someone must exist who will want to work with you in the use of word sharing for the benefit of mutual mastabatory pleasures, perhaps a phone call or two when LTR is out of the house.

 

[jomar]

Okay, based on writelove's post you're off the hook on the dick sucking thing. Nice story by the way.