Who wants to role-play with Belinda?

blin18

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Hi folks. I'm Belinda; an author here on Literotica. I'm a student living in Sydney, Australia. I love writing, I love the sensual feeling of writing erotica, and I love it when my readers share that same feeling.

I've been told that my stories are good enough to sell, yet I publish for free because I get more readers, and I do enjoy engaging with my readers (about my writing, not about me personally).

But I have a special offer: a competition, if you like. A chance for one lucky reader to have a sexy role-play with my character Belinda from The Headmaster's Office. She's an 18yo schoolgirl in Sydney and ... well I won't ruin the story for you.

How to participate: It's easy, just read my story (The Headmaster's Office - link above) and then leave a public comment at the end with your Lit user name. Come back here and add a reply to this thread so that I know your comment is part of my competition, and next weekend (Saturday 23/8/2014, Sydney, Australia time) I will pick ONE winner. The winner will be my choice alone and no correspondence will be entered into. The one I pick will be the one I like the most.

What do you win? OK, disclaimer time. I have never role-played, so I might not be very good at it, but I do write erotica and folks say I'm pretty good at that, so ... who knows, maybe it'll work, maybe it wont. I will announce the winner in this thread and contact them via PM. I would like to do it in the RP forum here at Lit, but I will do it via PM if that's what the winner wants. Belinda from the story will exchange PMs/messages with the winner for a week. You talk about whatever you want and Belinda will follow. At the end of the week, I get back to my writing and shut down my PMs once again.

What are the limits? I expect the role play to be sexy, but not if you don't want to. Belinda likes oral, Spanish, 69, FFM, deep penetration and lesbian with toys. She LOVES CFNM, uniforms and dressing up. She doesn't do anal, humiliation, revenge, MMF, BDSM (except *maybe* some *very* light bondage and teasing), scat, snuff, mentrual, waterplay, incest. If you try any of that shit she will give you one warning and then cut you loose. If it is in one of my stories, she will do it, otherwise it's best to ask. She will only communicate through Lit; no Yahoo, no Kik, no Skype.

What if I don't like Belinda? If you read my other stories, I can be any character from them, like Rupali, or (if you follow me on Smashwords) Vicky or Celeste. Sorry, I can't be a guy. Alternatively, I can make Belinda older or maybe a little bit younger.

How many messages will we exchange? Hard to say. Most of you are in America and Europe, so the time difference plays havoc with me in Australia. It might turn out to be just one or two per day. I will do what I can, but I have other commitments and stories to write.

Any tips? Yes. I'm a writer, so I love words, I love expressiveness, I love good grammar and good spelling. I like to hear WHAT bits of my stories readers like, WHY they like them and HOW it makes them feel. And I can detect false praise a mile of, so keep it sincere and don't go over the top. The winner will be the one that best meets or exceeds that brief.

Why am I doing this? Just to generate interest in my stories and attract readers who haven't seen them yet. If I like it and it attracts a lot of interest then I might do it again.

Can I increase my chances by spamming your inbox with personal messages? No. If you want to win the competition, review my story, that's all. If you want to talk about my writing (not about me), then contact me through my story profile. If you want to talk about this competition, reply below.

Have I missed anything? Ask below.
 
Seriously? Nobody? Sigh. Midnight in Oz, going to bed. Good night Lit.
 
Hi Belinda ...

What a wonderful idea to promote your story! I read it this morning, and really enjoyed it. You can read my comments at the end there.

I love the challenge of your competition. I am a writer and editor too, and love communicating with other authors (though I am independent and have nothing to do with the Lit site other than being a member). I am not well-versed at role play, but I love to write, and have a bit of experience with online, distance challenged relationships; so, perhaps those steamy emails and sex chats will be profitable background.

Again, thanks for the great, well-written and sexy story. I enjoyed it and look forward to reading more. Hope things are all good 'down under' ... You have a new fan.
 
You're better at writing your female characters than your male characters.

That's my 2 cents
 
You're better at writing your female characters than your male characters.

That's my 2 cents

Yeah, I know, right? Maybe it'll come with experience, but I think I'm doomed to write most of my erotica from a female POV.

The next one to be released on Lit (Best on Board) is a 3rd person narrative from the POV of a male virgin (tip: that is not a permanent state of affairs). Headmasters office was my first attempt at erotica so maybe I have already improved.

Or maybe Best On Board will be shit. That's my two cents.
 
@ImaginaryLover70, thank God for you. I thought this was going to be a bust. Thanks for the lovely review. Whether you win or there is an even better review out there, it looks like I'm going to get my RP cherry popped by someone intelligent and expressive <shiver>.

If you send me direct feedback from the story page, I will put you on my mail out list for new stories.
 
Belinda I just wanted to say that I very much enjoyed your story and I left my comment as well. Very well written and good luck to all others.
 
W00t! Two entries! Its officially a competition!

Belinda I just wanted to say that I very much enjoyed your story and I left my comment as well. Very well written and good luck to all others.

Thanks for the lovely review southerncharm77.

OMG your avatar. I'm out at the shops and nearly dropped my phone!

Hit my author page and send me a message if you want to be on my mailing list for new stories.
 
W00t! Two entries! Its officially a competition!



Thanks for the lovely review southerncharm77.

OMG your avatar. I'm out at the shops and nearly dropped my phone!

Hit my author page and send me a message if you want to be on my mailing list for new stories.

Hehehe glad you approve. You are absolutely more than welcome. It's all my pleasure. I'm sending you a message now.
 
Yeah, I know, right? Maybe it'll come with experience, but I think I'm doomed to write most of my erotica from a female POV.

The next one to be released on Lit (Best on Board) is a 3rd person narrative from the POV of a male virgin (tip: that is not a permanent state of affairs). Headmasters office was my first attempt at erotica so maybe I have already improved.

Or maybe Best On Board will be shit. That's my two cents.

That might be a bit harsh.

I wouldn't say your male characters are doomed, or even bad, they're just generic or necessary filler. Lacking any anticipation for the reader to learn more about them. Mr Gallows just wasn't interesting, his character could be swapped with almost any male-deviant character in most of the stories that float around lit. Every time he spoke or became the focus of the narrative, I couldn't help but get that feeling one gets when a male porn-star starts to moan; "just shut up and fuck her".

Belinda was much more interesting. Her character actually had character. If another author tried to use her in their own story, they'd have some pretty firm guidelines to follow regarding who she is and how she would react in situations. My guess is you were putting yourself in her shoes, and a lot of who Belinda is, is actually you. Her only flaw was her virginity. Everything about her screamed experience, not chastity. She carries the dichotomy between innocence and sexual deviance too perfect to be a virgin. Ask yourself this, at the end of the story did Belinda go to bed dreaming of more, or crying for hours into her pillow? if the answer is dreaming, then she wasn't a virgin.

The pop culture references tells me you're either older than you say you are, or you're very astute to your audience and wrote it for older males. There was also something humorous about singing Gallows Pole during sex, given that the song is actually about an execution and not a penis.
 
Great job

Just read your story, Belinda, and thought it was great (gave you the full 5 stars. We'll get you that 'H' rating if it kills us). My favorite part was the hem measurement, very hot.

I'll look forward to your future stories. Put me on your list of subscribers!
 
Put me on your list of subscribers!

Thanks Linus, another great review. I love you guys.

To get on my mailing list, send me a message from my Contact page - link above - and include your email address.

Re your feedback on story length, I have tried writing shorter 'stroke' stories but it doesn't work. My second story - Fantasy Night - was supposed to be a 2000 word quickie ... but it kinda grew to 10000 words. My latest (Sundara) went to 16000 and the one I am currently working on (The Winsome Widow) is 20k and growing. Should go to about 30k. So the trend doesn't look good for stroke stories. The best I can offer by way of compromise is that I try to put one hot scene in the first half for impatient readers. Its the best I can offer :)
 
I just love that you put "duh" in a story title...priceless.
 
Re your feedback on story length, I have tried writing shorter 'stroke' stories but it doesn't work. My second story - Fantasy Night - was supposed to be a 2000 word quickie ... but it kinda grew to 10000 words. My latest (Sundara) went to 16000 and the one I am currently working on (The Winsome Widow) is 20k and growing. Should go to about 30k. So the trend doesn't look good for stroke stories. The best I can offer by way of compromise is that I try to put one hot scene in the first half for impatient readers. Its the best I can offer :)

I don't think you should necessarily make your stories shorter, I was just suggesting you consider making different scenes into chapters which would give them more focus and give the reader beginning and end points.

It was a minor comment on what was a great story. I'll give you my contact info for future stories.

Thanks!
 
Hi blin! Read, commented and rated! I really got in to this story; can I chat about with you via pm?
 
Hi Eyereadtoo, thanks for the review.

Regarding your review:

>> I really liked how Belinda went pseudo-Dom for a bit there on Mr. Gallows; have you considered starring her in a series? Maybe expanding on Belinda in her classroom, dorm, etc...

Hmmm. If you're looking for Dom/Sub from me then I'm afraid you're on a long and fruitless search. That scene where Belinda insists that Mr Gallows allows her to shave him was really just intended to be ironic and a bit funny. She will certainly tease, but I don't see Belinda going Dom.

You can send me direct feedback on my writing by using the Feedback tab at the end of each of my stories.
 
Hi Eyereadtoo, thanks for the review.

Regarding your review:

>> I really liked how Belinda went pseudo-Dom for a bit there on Mr. Gallows; have you considered starring her in a series? Maybe expanding on Belinda in her classroom, dorm, etc...

Hmmm. If you're looking for Dom/Sub from me then I'm afraid you're on a long and fruitless search. That scene where Belinda insists that Mr Gallows allows her to shave him was really just intended to be ironic and a bit funny. She will certainly tease, but I don't see Belinda going Dom.

You can send me direct feedback on my writing by using the Feedback tab at the end of each of my stories.

I understand you don't do the dom/sub story line, but the part where Belinda ordered Mr. Gallows to say, "Yes, Ma'am" and he complies had a tinge of that genre; and frankly, it was hot! I truly do think you did a wonderful job and I do hope Belinda develops into a series of her own.

Two thumbs (and five stars) up!
 
Okay, let me throw my hat into the ring. :)
I've already reviewed your story--which is great, by the way--so why not a role-play with Belinda?
 
Let me check out the submissions... but you seem like fun already.

:kiss:
 
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