Who untied me?

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Girl's having her first time with some bondage. Boyfriend doesn't know much about it so he improvises with some stockings or panty-hose, a sleeping mask for a blindfold and sock for a gag. He's about to start teasing her when someone pulls up outside of her parent's house. Boyfriend, showing his true character, grabs his clothes and bolts out through the back door, leaving her bound to the bed. Girl starts crying her eyes out and tries to struggle out but her restraints hold. She has an anxiety attack and loses all recollection as she hears someone rush into her room.

She comes to later, remembering that someone came in and untied her. She wasn't fully conscious but she knows whoever it was made sure she was okay and kept trying to soothe her. This would be a good thing but the person didn't untie her till she calmed down and their hands were on her naked body and when she calmed down the hands were still there...but the big thing is that whoever it was kissed her on the lips and a few other places while she was bound.

When she wakes up, she doesn't feel sore except for her wrists and there's nothing to indicate that someone tried to penetrate her or masturbated over her. Whoever it was kissed her without leaving hickeys and then covered her up.

She gets dressed and sees her family sitting down for dinner. Nobody mentions the attack or her being bound, though a couple of them joke about her sleeping all day. She tries to not let anyone know what she remembers and later calls her boyfriend to curse him out and ask who he saw drive up. Only thing is, he didn't look and it's a full house for the weekend as they are celebrating an event. It could have even been her extended family or their spouses/partners as everyone has a key.

That night she goes to bed. She wakes up to someone kissing her on the cheek and then saying sorry for that morning. She tries to grab onto the person but they bolt and hit the ground hard outside her room.

So as she lays there, she wonders who it could be.

Alternatively, the person could be a more teasing or manipulative sort, leaving pictures that were taken prior to her being untied and then having tasks she must complete if she doesn't want more pics to come out. More clues start to add up but she only has the weekend to figure out who it might be.
 
Girl's having her first time with some bondage. Boyfriend doesn't know much about it so he improvises with some stockings or panty-hose, a sleeping mask for a blindfold and sock for a gag. He's about to start teasing her when someone pulls up outside of her parent's house. Boyfriend, showing his true character, grabs his clothes and bolts out through the back door, leaving her bound to the bed. Girl starts crying her eyes out and tries to struggle out but her restraints hold. She has an anxiety attack and loses all recollection as she hears someone rush into her room.

She comes to later, remembering that someone came in and untied her. She wasn't fully conscious but she knows whoever it was made sure she was okay and kept trying to soothe her. This would be a good thing but the person didn't untie her till she calmed down and their hands were on her naked body and when she calmed down the hands were still there...but the big thing is that whoever it was kissed her on the lips and a few other places while she was bound.

When she wakes up, she doesn't feel sore except for her wrists and there's nothing to indicate that someone tried to penetrate her or masturbated over her. Whoever it was kissed her without leaving hickeys and then covered her up.

She gets dressed and sees her family sitting down for dinner. Nobody mentions the attack or her being bound, though a couple of them joke about her sleeping all day. She tries to not let anyone know what she remembers and later calls her boyfriend to curse him out and ask who he saw drive up. Only thing is, he didn't look and it's a full house for the weekend as they are celebrating an event. It could have even been her extended family or their spouses/partners as everyone has a key.

That night she goes to bed. She wakes up to someone kissing her on the cheek and then saying sorry for that morning. She tries to grab onto the person but they bolt and hit the ground hard outside her room.

So as she lays there, she wonders who it could be.

Alternatively, the person could be a more teasing or manipulative sort, leaving pictures that were taken prior to her being untied and then having tasks she must complete if she doesn't want more pics to come out. More clues start to add up but she only has the weekend to figure out who it might be.

This sounds interesting. I might try to write it one day if the muse strikes me.
 
Interesting concept. I like it, makes my mind go wild :) I really should read this forum more frequent than once every few months :)

To add to the mystery: apparently she doesn't recognise the voice of the intruder (male or female voice?). It would be very difficult, next to impossible, for a family member to mask his/her voice so she wouldn't recognise it instantly. So it almost has to be an outsider - a neighbour maybe, whom she knows by sight but doesn't have much personal contact with?

Could be a very interesting introduction to the common BDSM story concept where the slave girl never gets to see her master (M/F).
 
An outsider could easily work. I figured she was just so anxious at the time, she only remembers what happened, rather than how it happened. So she remembers what is said, rather the voice.
 
A typed note instead of a whisper would do the job as well - no risk of voice recognition, can still be both a familiar person or an outsider.
 
Took your idea and ran with it - wrote almost 5,000 words (1 1/2 Lit pages) today, read it once more, and submitted in EC as "Tied and Abandoned". Will be up in the next few days. Curious what it will do :) Also considering writing one switching the sexes.

Suggestions on how to continue are very welcome! I don't have any ideas yet, but the story can very well have a second part.
 
Nice idea the poor girl wondering who untied her and when, how long, and what did they possibly do to her, photos, video ? and who may see them
 
Loved it. And I see you already have a death threat to continue it, lol.
 
Wow. This scenario is So Hot!

Just a personal preference:

1.Given that I'm not into incest stories, I would prefer a slightly # scenario. For example, one in which she and about 6 guys and other girls were invited to a friend's mansion for the weekend. Or wedding or whatever. With a detailed description of the 6 guys and subtle or misleading cues as to the guys' identity (for added tension).

2.Re the identity of the guy:
Personally, I'd like it to be someone who had no previous interest in her but found himself increasingly attracted to her after the incident. As opposed to someone who, unbeknown to her, had a crush on her (that would be too vanilla and *yawn)
 
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