Who caught who?

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Ultra Hot Hardbody is spending a day at the mall. In the course of shopping she notices she's caught the eye of an older guy. She goes about trying on outfits and shoes and keeps noticing said guy. He's not always there watching, but often enough for her to exaggerate some of her actions to be closer to shows. He's watching alright, but he's concerned that maybe he's being too obvious so he keeps moving off. She stops at the food court for coffee and he's there. But was he there first? Is she now following him? He drifts into a jewelry store under her watchful eye.

After a while he heads for one of the many exits. She's there and bumps into him. Literally. She coos into his ear dismissively .... ' You were supposed to be my puppy. You would have been rewarded' ... as she brushes a breast over his arm and begins to move away.

'And instead you were mine. Here you are. You heeled just fine.' he replies as he casually hooks his arm into hers.

She looks at him open mouthed, stunned that her game may have been his all along only barely muttering through her candy glossed lips. She was the master at this in the past and now she wasn't sure how to respond.

'Bitch' he says looking at her face almost contorted in disbelief.

"Oh, you have NO idea" she manages to get out as she bites his ear.
 
Or maybe he's more subtle.

He opens the box from the jewelry store to reveal a gold necklace and emblem that says "Bitch".
 
I might do something like this story from a slightly different angle. By all means, playing up on the mysteriousness of her being "stalked", but then upon bumping into one another literally, it was revealed they had played well in the past.

Maybe she was a "corporate whore", a lady who was a secretary or mail lady at a large corporation who being so good looking would accompany high end clientele of the corporation and take care of their EVERY need when they were in town. She was well compensated for this by bonuses in her paycheck, and one of the things this man liked, was treating her as a pet.

Now she is married and hesitant and fearful. Except... she LOVED what she did for him, and secretly regrets a more vanilla marriage. She liked the man, and their unique playful antics, but... that whole being married now thing.

She is thus "kidnapped" that is no kidnap really at all, and enjoys a night with the man. Really, really enjoys it, but her husband is worried about her being missing. He calls her best friend who worked for the same company, doing the same thing as a corporate whore, except she hated it. She tells the woman's husband she recognizes the man on the surveillance camera and knows where she might be, and now her husband knows her whorish past.

In the end, the wife is saved by her husband, but ultimately she cannot go back to such a boring marriage, and especially him knowing her past. But her best friend, she has secretly been infatuated with the husband, and so with leash hooked to her collar, the wife is headed for a divorce, but also a new masterful husband!
 
These are two complete strangers. Tentatively, hesitantly flirting, initially unaware the other also is.

A short story. Might even fit the 750 word tick. It ends there at the mall door, leaving the reader to wonder and fill in their own blanks.
 
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