Author's Notes: Sorry I'm new to this website, and also to writing and most obviously erotic literature so pardon me if this is not good. This is my free write that I've done and it doesnt have any edits at all. I wrote it originally as is so if anyone could give me a heads up on how to improve it, then it would be great. I didn't really intend this to be an erotic story until I started reading it and I was unusually turned on by it. So I googled if there was a message board that would critique stories like this and there was! So how fortunate I am.
Anyways enjoy! This has many parts to it! So right now this is the first chapter, Whipped Cream Game. As I noted there some problems with the "I" and "Conner" statements, so basically "I" is considered "Connor" when its outside quotations. But yeah point me out for other mistakes.
The Story Erica- Chapter 1 Whipped Cream Game
So this is how a real girl's room looks like huh? So yeah they started lying down in the bed. Connor on his right side while Erica on her left they faced each other. They started talking about how finally their dreams came true and stuff and then Connor started to kiss her lips. She was playfully closing it and not opening it. It didn’t matter because it felt good to suck her lips as to swirling the tongue in with hers. She then decided to open her mouth as their tongues met and swirled around in frenzy. They didn’t really know how to make out right but Connor remembered from reading an online tutorial on how to make out that he need to swirl and lick her lips with gentle swirls around the outside rather than completely making their tongues meet. So he did that on her lower lip, as that was his favorite. Erica's favorite was Connor's top lip, so it wasn't a conflict at all.
Erica started to copy Connor’s strategy on this kiss; after all it felt very erotic. Very gently they would lick each other's lips swirling their tongue and tracing the lips, it would send chills down Connors hard cock. It kept on growing until it started to bump with Erica's legs. Erica would then rub her knee into Connor's crotch. Connor was surprised with Erica's aggression, as he was used for him to being the aggressor. Connor then started to slide his hands from the back of Erica down to her nice curved hips and onto her inner thigh. He would slide it up and down all the way to the inner knees and up to her high crotch just near her pussy. Fortunately Erica was wearing a dressed skirt so Connor would go up even higher and feel her nice pussy wet.
He took note of this and told her "Your wet". Erica responded in embarrassment "Shut up", she then moved her hands down from Connor’s chest down to his belly button and into his crotch area. She then used that baseball ball grip around Connor’s dick and balls, it felt good. Connor then rolled on top of Erica as he started making out with her this time with a steady fast-rhythm passionate kiss. As they were doing this Erica would dim the lights until there was none left. It wasn't dark though as the sun from outside would shine in through her aluminum foiled windows. Connor then remembered the whipped-cream game as he was shy to take any of Erica's clothing off, as they never really got far enough to be naked to each other so maybe this game would break the ice.
He then asked Erica to get the whipped cream; she said she didn’t want to. Of course she was in a very shy innocent denial that she was doing this all. You can see from her gestures that she was really uncomfortably with all this as Connor tried to forcefully dominate her, she willfully submitted though. So Connor decided that it was him who would get the whipped cream. She then took Connor’s wrist telling him to stop; she then blocked the door that would lead outside. She begged "Please don’t". Connor then kept on suggesting that the had to play the game until Connor forced her into the bed with a fake "okay fine I wont do it" as soon as she laid on the bed he quickly moved on the door. Erica then catched up and said she would get it as long as he waited inside the room.
Connor waited in the room for not even a minute and then he saw his girlfriend standing there with the bottle of whipped cream. It was unbelievable, maybe he could actually get to fuck this girl for the first time. So Connor grabbed the whipped cream away from her and forced her on her back as he got on top. He then started unbutton her upper dress; she held his hands as she was extremely shy. A virgin indeed, this must be her first time. It took a while to get her comfortable but finally she submitted again and the dress got off her, she was only in underwear. Connor then asked her to unbutton her bra, and she did so submitting again to Connor's demands. She then covered her breasts as she lay topless with only her panties on in front of her boyfriend.
Connor then motioned her with contact and moved her hands away from her breasts. It was a nice sight, perfect shape round without sag. It was a 34 B, he wanted to grab it in his mind but first he sprayed the cream into the two nipples. He then moved in closer with his head and started to lick the cream off the nipples, each lick he would look up into Erica's face. He could see as his saliva was oozing down the nipples making a nice shiny reflection. Finally the cream was gone. So he started spraying the cream down her belly button, and then started licking it also. He moved from the chest all the way down the belly button, swirling his tongue in circles. He then sprayed the cream on her inner thighs and calves as he licked it and cleaned it up. He then did a second licking around her high inner thighs closing in into her "private" spot. He could smell the scent of that warm attraction.
He then licked the pussy from the outside and wanted to move the panties as Erica grabbed his hands and said "Okay your done". Erica got on her knees facing Connor and pushed Connor onto his back. Wow what submissive force she has! She got on top of him. He told him to take his shirt off, and he did willfully obviously. She then grabbed Connor's pants and started pulling it down, and then it got stuck because his hard dick was on the way. She then grabbed his sobbing hard cock making way for the shorts to go down. She said "be a good boy woody".
She had that kind of guilt on her face as if she was being forced to do this, but after all its her submissive actions which had nothing to do with Connor's demand. She grabbed the whipped cream bottle and sprayed it over his chest and belly button as Connor did but she did something different this time. She used both hands massaging Connor’s chest and belly button up and down and she spread the whipped cream all over. She gave a seductive grin as she was looking down on Connor, which would’ve looked like she was dominating him. She said "Oh you’re all dirty, I think I need to clean you up".
Her face went closer and closer as she started to lick Connor’s nipples first, and then looked at Connor in the eyes. Wow what a beautiful scene, she slowly moved into sections up and down kind of like a lawn mower. It felt so good! It was like someone was tickling you and it sent waves down the hard-throbbing cock waiting to get out. It felt like she was licking his dick as he imagined her sucking his cock. She kept on licking up and down very slowly as her gaze started upon Connor. Connor never felt this much of excitement and teasing as she was doing. He wanted to get into action already.
Connor said "can you please suck me", she then said as if already knowing everything what’s going to happen "I will just hold on". From Connor’s chest you could see her tongue very nice and shiny and all her saliva is all over Connor’s chest and bellybutton. She then lowered herself down just 3 inches above Connor’s belly button. She then asked him "how low do you want me to go?" Connor then said in a mutter as he was too excited "..... Low" She then moved just two inches which is about one inch above his belly button. He couldn’t take this much teasing as he responded with "Lower". She then moved 1 inch above Connor’s belly button again saying "like this?" he then said lower, finally she said "Hmm there’s something on the way so I won’t be able to lick it, so I'll take it off.
She started to take off Connor’s boxers, as she felt his boxers she said "its wet" as his penis was erect and hard ready to be sucked. She then grasps the head of his penis saying "extra skin" Connor blushed as he was shy. Erica grasps the shaft of Connor hard dick and went lower and started licking the balls. Connor couldn’t take any more teasing and said "please just suck it". Erica then smiled at him and wrapped her lips around the head of Connors wet dick. She started sucking it and it felt really good as it was Connor's first experience.
After every stroke, as her head moved back and forth at the same time the vacuum mouth of hers was sucking Connor’s penis. It was an unbelievable feeling. Connor could hear some gargle as he stared at Erica's lips around his cock. He wondered if it was her saliva or his cum. She then opened her mouth and looked at Connor in that innocent gaze; he couldn’t believe what he was seeing. Her mouth was dripping with white cum, how could he have cummed? He doesn’t feel satisfied yet. Yet Connor’s dick started to get smaller and smaller as the erection was now nonexistent. This is embarrassing how could he have prematurely ejaculated? He doesn’t feel like it has, as he was extremely horny and wanting for more.
Anyways he accepted the fact that he had cum as his dick was full of white cum and Erica's saliva. She liked and cleaned up the whole thing, yet it still felt good as she was licking. So Erica then started to get up to Connor kissing him, at first he paused because he didn’t want to taste his own dick but he guessed it was a test so he kissed her. Connor then sat up and ordered Erica to take her panties off. She followed as he said "let’s have a 69". So Connor was on top and Erica was on bottom. Connor started licking the outside lips of Erica's pussy. He could also feel Erica sucking on his cock again, thought it was only a little hard. Connor then thrusted his dick deeper into Erica's mouth trying to imagine it was her pussy however Erica gagged. So he stopped doing that.
He licked Erica's pussy ferociously all around trying to pierce his tongue inside. His face was all wet though; without doubt this is the wettest pussy he’s ever seen. It was all over his face. Erica then said that she wanted to be on top so Connor then sat up so he can trade spots and lay down so Erica could mount him. Before Erica mounted him he said "You’re so wet, you got all my face wet", she then said "ha-ha" and wiped it with her hands and kissed him on the lips swirling her tongue onto his. It all happened fast and now she got up and her ass was sticking out in front of my face.
I've never seen a perfect ass like this, not even in pornographic movies. It was well rounded heart, as of porn stars except even better. Her pussy was of course swelling with her juices making it all shine. She then finally got to get his dick to its erected state and started sucking. As he watched her face sucking his cock, he could see her breasts moving up and down and he couldn’t lick Erica's pussy because she was too busy sucking his cock. Connor then felt the best thing he’s ever felt before, his dick being sucked as if it being pinched with many soft needles which was only a thin line between pain and pleasure. He could feel that feeling inside his stomach that again he had cummed but it wasn't an ejaculation. In fact the cum was sucked out of his cock that he did not have any repetitive vibrations down his dick as the normal ejaculation would’ve had. But nonetheless the pleasure was there, Erica sucked it off and you could see her open her mouth again as the white cum spilled from her tongue as she licked the head all the way down to the balls and leaving the cum.
Connor had to go back into business as he started licking her pussy deeper and deeper and he achieved the effect of making her stop sucking because she herself was now experiencing a good pleasure. She would moan as I sticked my tongue deep into her pussy. Though I couldnt really think that I'm sticking it in, but enough force to make her feel as if it was my dick. I was laying on the pillow her ass right in front of my face as I started sucking her clit and licking around her outer lips. I did this for a while until she finally said "Shit what time is it". We checked the clock and it was already 10:30 and her dad was about to arrive any moment. So I quickly dressed up and made out with her for a few minutes until we had to break it off because I had to leave very soon or else we will get in trouble.
Anyways enjoy! This has many parts to it! So right now this is the first chapter, Whipped Cream Game. As I noted there some problems with the "I" and "Conner" statements, so basically "I" is considered "Connor" when its outside quotations. But yeah point me out for other mistakes.
The Story Erica- Chapter 1 Whipped Cream Game
So this is how a real girl's room looks like huh? So yeah they started lying down in the bed. Connor on his right side while Erica on her left they faced each other. They started talking about how finally their dreams came true and stuff and then Connor started to kiss her lips. She was playfully closing it and not opening it. It didn’t matter because it felt good to suck her lips as to swirling the tongue in with hers. She then decided to open her mouth as their tongues met and swirled around in frenzy. They didn’t really know how to make out right but Connor remembered from reading an online tutorial on how to make out that he need to swirl and lick her lips with gentle swirls around the outside rather than completely making their tongues meet. So he did that on her lower lip, as that was his favorite. Erica's favorite was Connor's top lip, so it wasn't a conflict at all.
Erica started to copy Connor’s strategy on this kiss; after all it felt very erotic. Very gently they would lick each other's lips swirling their tongue and tracing the lips, it would send chills down Connors hard cock. It kept on growing until it started to bump with Erica's legs. Erica would then rub her knee into Connor's crotch. Connor was surprised with Erica's aggression, as he was used for him to being the aggressor. Connor then started to slide his hands from the back of Erica down to her nice curved hips and onto her inner thigh. He would slide it up and down all the way to the inner knees and up to her high crotch just near her pussy. Fortunately Erica was wearing a dressed skirt so Connor would go up even higher and feel her nice pussy wet.
He took note of this and told her "Your wet". Erica responded in embarrassment "Shut up", she then moved her hands down from Connor’s chest down to his belly button and into his crotch area. She then used that baseball ball grip around Connor’s dick and balls, it felt good. Connor then rolled on top of Erica as he started making out with her this time with a steady fast-rhythm passionate kiss. As they were doing this Erica would dim the lights until there was none left. It wasn't dark though as the sun from outside would shine in through her aluminum foiled windows. Connor then remembered the whipped-cream game as he was shy to take any of Erica's clothing off, as they never really got far enough to be naked to each other so maybe this game would break the ice.
He then asked Erica to get the whipped cream; she said she didn’t want to. Of course she was in a very shy innocent denial that she was doing this all. You can see from her gestures that she was really uncomfortably with all this as Connor tried to forcefully dominate her, she willfully submitted though. So Connor decided that it was him who would get the whipped cream. She then took Connor’s wrist telling him to stop; she then blocked the door that would lead outside. She begged "Please don’t". Connor then kept on suggesting that the had to play the game until Connor forced her into the bed with a fake "okay fine I wont do it" as soon as she laid on the bed he quickly moved on the door. Erica then catched up and said she would get it as long as he waited inside the room.
Connor waited in the room for not even a minute and then he saw his girlfriend standing there with the bottle of whipped cream. It was unbelievable, maybe he could actually get to fuck this girl for the first time. So Connor grabbed the whipped cream away from her and forced her on her back as he got on top. He then started unbutton her upper dress; she held his hands as she was extremely shy. A virgin indeed, this must be her first time. It took a while to get her comfortable but finally she submitted again and the dress got off her, she was only in underwear. Connor then asked her to unbutton her bra, and she did so submitting again to Connor's demands. She then covered her breasts as she lay topless with only her panties on in front of her boyfriend.
Connor then motioned her with contact and moved her hands away from her breasts. It was a nice sight, perfect shape round without sag. It was a 34 B, he wanted to grab it in his mind but first he sprayed the cream into the two nipples. He then moved in closer with his head and started to lick the cream off the nipples, each lick he would look up into Erica's face. He could see as his saliva was oozing down the nipples making a nice shiny reflection. Finally the cream was gone. So he started spraying the cream down her belly button, and then started licking it also. He moved from the chest all the way down the belly button, swirling his tongue in circles. He then sprayed the cream on her inner thighs and calves as he licked it and cleaned it up. He then did a second licking around her high inner thighs closing in into her "private" spot. He could smell the scent of that warm attraction.
He then licked the pussy from the outside and wanted to move the panties as Erica grabbed his hands and said "Okay your done". Erica got on her knees facing Connor and pushed Connor onto his back. Wow what submissive force she has! She got on top of him. He told him to take his shirt off, and he did willfully obviously. She then grabbed Connor's pants and started pulling it down, and then it got stuck because his hard dick was on the way. She then grabbed his sobbing hard cock making way for the shorts to go down. She said "be a good boy woody".
She had that kind of guilt on her face as if she was being forced to do this, but after all its her submissive actions which had nothing to do with Connor's demand. She grabbed the whipped cream bottle and sprayed it over his chest and belly button as Connor did but she did something different this time. She used both hands massaging Connor’s chest and belly button up and down and she spread the whipped cream all over. She gave a seductive grin as she was looking down on Connor, which would’ve looked like she was dominating him. She said "Oh you’re all dirty, I think I need to clean you up".
Her face went closer and closer as she started to lick Connor’s nipples first, and then looked at Connor in the eyes. Wow what a beautiful scene, she slowly moved into sections up and down kind of like a lawn mower. It felt so good! It was like someone was tickling you and it sent waves down the hard-throbbing cock waiting to get out. It felt like she was licking his dick as he imagined her sucking his cock. She kept on licking up and down very slowly as her gaze started upon Connor. Connor never felt this much of excitement and teasing as she was doing. He wanted to get into action already.
Connor said "can you please suck me", she then said as if already knowing everything what’s going to happen "I will just hold on". From Connor’s chest you could see her tongue very nice and shiny and all her saliva is all over Connor’s chest and bellybutton. She then lowered herself down just 3 inches above Connor’s belly button. She then asked him "how low do you want me to go?" Connor then said in a mutter as he was too excited "..... Low" She then moved just two inches which is about one inch above his belly button. He couldn’t take this much teasing as he responded with "Lower". She then moved 1 inch above Connor’s belly button again saying "like this?" he then said lower, finally she said "Hmm there’s something on the way so I won’t be able to lick it, so I'll take it off.
She started to take off Connor’s boxers, as she felt his boxers she said "its wet" as his penis was erect and hard ready to be sucked. She then grasps the head of his penis saying "extra skin" Connor blushed as he was shy. Erica grasps the shaft of Connor hard dick and went lower and started licking the balls. Connor couldn’t take any more teasing and said "please just suck it". Erica then smiled at him and wrapped her lips around the head of Connors wet dick. She started sucking it and it felt really good as it was Connor's first experience.
After every stroke, as her head moved back and forth at the same time the vacuum mouth of hers was sucking Connor’s penis. It was an unbelievable feeling. Connor could hear some gargle as he stared at Erica's lips around his cock. He wondered if it was her saliva or his cum. She then opened her mouth and looked at Connor in that innocent gaze; he couldn’t believe what he was seeing. Her mouth was dripping with white cum, how could he have cummed? He doesn’t feel satisfied yet. Yet Connor’s dick started to get smaller and smaller as the erection was now nonexistent. This is embarrassing how could he have prematurely ejaculated? He doesn’t feel like it has, as he was extremely horny and wanting for more.
Anyways he accepted the fact that he had cum as his dick was full of white cum and Erica's saliva. She liked and cleaned up the whole thing, yet it still felt good as she was licking. So Erica then started to get up to Connor kissing him, at first he paused because he didn’t want to taste his own dick but he guessed it was a test so he kissed her. Connor then sat up and ordered Erica to take her panties off. She followed as he said "let’s have a 69". So Connor was on top and Erica was on bottom. Connor started licking the outside lips of Erica's pussy. He could also feel Erica sucking on his cock again, thought it was only a little hard. Connor then thrusted his dick deeper into Erica's mouth trying to imagine it was her pussy however Erica gagged. So he stopped doing that.
He licked Erica's pussy ferociously all around trying to pierce his tongue inside. His face was all wet though; without doubt this is the wettest pussy he’s ever seen. It was all over his face. Erica then said that she wanted to be on top so Connor then sat up so he can trade spots and lay down so Erica could mount him. Before Erica mounted him he said "You’re so wet, you got all my face wet", she then said "ha-ha" and wiped it with her hands and kissed him on the lips swirling her tongue onto his. It all happened fast and now she got up and her ass was sticking out in front of my face.
I've never seen a perfect ass like this, not even in pornographic movies. It was well rounded heart, as of porn stars except even better. Her pussy was of course swelling with her juices making it all shine. She then finally got to get his dick to its erected state and started sucking. As he watched her face sucking his cock, he could see her breasts moving up and down and he couldn’t lick Erica's pussy because she was too busy sucking his cock. Connor then felt the best thing he’s ever felt before, his dick being sucked as if it being pinched with many soft needles which was only a thin line between pain and pleasure. He could feel that feeling inside his stomach that again he had cummed but it wasn't an ejaculation. In fact the cum was sucked out of his cock that he did not have any repetitive vibrations down his dick as the normal ejaculation would’ve had. But nonetheless the pleasure was there, Erica sucked it off and you could see her open her mouth again as the white cum spilled from her tongue as she licked the head all the way down to the balls and leaving the cum.
Connor had to go back into business as he started licking her pussy deeper and deeper and he achieved the effect of making her stop sucking because she herself was now experiencing a good pleasure. She would moan as I sticked my tongue deep into her pussy. Though I couldnt really think that I'm sticking it in, but enough force to make her feel as if it was my dick. I was laying on the pillow her ass right in front of my face as I started sucking her clit and licking around her outer lips. I did this for a while until she finally said "Shit what time is it". We checked the clock and it was already 10:30 and her dad was about to arrive any moment. So I quickly dressed up and made out with her for a few minutes until we had to break it off because I had to leave very soon or else we will get in trouble.
