Which POV?
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sirhugs said:
It could definitely be an interesting story, sirhugs. I don't know which POV would be better because it would depend on how it was written. I enjoy "power play" stories where there is some basic gap between the main characters. That gap might be age, class, ethnicity, culture, education, position at work, etc. I would suggest that you write from the POV that most interests YOU because then your energy would permeate the text.
Good luck! If you get around to writing the story, let me know.
Mia
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why not one of those stories when you swich back and fourth between the two...
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I write in both directions and it can be difficult giving or trying to relate (for me) a females point of view. I can imagine 90% of it but then it is better to be careful and discrete when it comes to the sex part. {the female POV score pretty high in the same story compared to a male POV} {But many stories are still told better from the male POV because of the perversity expected from a males mind}
I don't want to throw sticks and stones at your story idea. But I would need to ask why is a prominant lady with a dirtbag?
I can see the business man with a tramp, actually that is probably very frequent.
The female is different she can pick and choose her prey among the the high society she lives in.
I do think, it is very possible for an upper class female to select a momentary lapse of reason. As in such a case as the Handy man or the pool boy.
I was just wondering what was your reason the female lowered her standards?
It is not uncommon for a wretched male to want to screw an uppity bitch. Just not common for that type female to search out the low class. Never mind mingle or come in contact with. Trailer park guys shop at wall mart. That is below a crested female to shop there.
Of course if you can have a good dirty reason it makes the story hot!
Phildo
PS. Handle the switch story is very difficult and can take a very long time to make it readable. It will never be completely believable because unless you can switch your writing habbits the reader can sense the same person's lingo. Not to mention how many people actually co write a perv story that actually lived out together?
It also can be difficult even with several editors to make it non confusing to the reader as every one will not catch each switch.
PPS. "write from the POV that most interests YOU" Absosmutinlutely!
I don't want to throw sticks and stones at your story idea. But I would need to ask why is a prominant lady with a dirtbag?
I can see the business man with a tramp, actually that is probably very frequent.
The female is different she can pick and choose her prey among the the high society she lives in.
I do think, it is very possible for an upper class female to select a momentary lapse of reason. As in such a case as the Handy man or the pool boy.
I was just wondering what was your reason the female lowered her standards?
It is not uncommon for a wretched male to want to screw an uppity bitch. Just not common for that type female to search out the low class. Never mind mingle or come in contact with. Trailer park guys shop at wall mart. That is below a crested female to shop there.
Of course if you can have a good dirty reason it makes the story hot!
Phildo
PS. Handle the switch story is very difficult and can take a very long time to make it readable. It will never be completely believable because unless you can switch your writing habbits the reader can sense the same person's lingo. Not to mention how many people actually co write a perv story that actually lived out together?
It also can be difficult even with several editors to make it non confusing to the reader as every one will not catch each switch.
PPS. "write from the POV that most interests YOU" Absosmutinlutely!
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ummm.... ok...... how do you always manage to confuse me?
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Phildo....Lady Chatterly's Lover...DH Lawrence...very hot!!!
All ladies don't necesarily like the restraining confines of their position.
All ladies don't necesarily like the restraining confines of their position.
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wicked woman said:
This is very true WW in fact I think it is a turn on for a woman to reach out of her enviroment. However the proposed story idea was.
Just so we are all playing on the same page I take skank to mean.
skank - any substance considered disgustingly foul or unpleasant
filth, crud
waste, waste material, waste matter, waste product - any materials unused and rejected as worthless or unwanted; "they collect the waste once a week"; "much of the waste material is carried off in the sewers"
Phildo
PS. My little Handle, Just as soon as I figure it out I will let you know.
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Phildo...point well taken...I wasn't responding to sir's original specific 'skanky' guy so much as I was your more general comments about why a high class woman lwould lower her standards with a pool boy or 'handy man' and how it could be hot.
sir's idea also reminded me a bit of the O.C. with the young guy from the wrong side of the tracks staying in the pool house and going out with the PYT that lives next door.
'skanky' is pushing it...I give you that...how about if the high society woman is trying to piss off her parents with the skanky trailer park guy?
sir's idea also reminded me a bit of the O.C. with the young guy from the wrong side of the tracks staying in the pool house and going out with the PYT that lives next door.
'skanky' is pushing it...I give you that...how about if the high society woman is trying to piss off her parents with the skanky trailer park guy?
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wicked woman said:
i watched a shrimp on the barbie today.... kinda like that?
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A7inchPhildo said:
My little Handle, Just as soon as I figure it out I will let you know.
explain to me in short words i will understand ok?
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"Got it Hun--I know the answer!"; To simplify a vexing problem. It would manifest such discombobulated confines of the original befuddle receive a reasonable gesture of wry manipulation. So hence forth after oneself such as I have liberally obnubilated the beginnings into a flummox of obscurity it tends to perplex another of where the underived question and now addle query separate.handlebars69 said:
So to the extent even to obscure the primary proposal maker with qualm as to the echt inquire.
Now to excogitate a elementary response in deficient communication would be to only acuire pettifoggery.
I hope that caters you with sufficient response to ruminate over my denouement!
Phildo
PS. WW, I got ya! Kind of like the movie the feller plays a homeless guy and the rich man takes him in. At first the mother and daughter detest him, and he even eats out of the dog bowl ( to show the dog it is ok to eat it). Next thing you know both the mother and daugther have the hots for him.
Sorry I cant even think of the big blond guy who plays the part of the poor guy.
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A7inchPhildo said:
why must you do this to me?!?!?!?!?!
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Exactly...the movie was called 'Down and Out' I think. Oh I can see the guy...sir, you've got the encyclopedic knowledge about films...what's his name? It's the same guy who played in that great movie Barbra Streisand directed and starred in as a psychiatrist and the guy was originally from the south.
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You got it...thank you kind sir
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That was a good movie, but everyone knows even real movies based on a real story are not real.
Nick Nolte .... Bette Midler ....
Richard Dreyfuss ....
Beverly Hills couple Barbara and Dave Whiteman are very rich but not happy Dave is a hard working business man, his wife is only interested in yoga, aerobics and other meditation classes, and he sleeps with the house maid. Their teenage son is confused about his sexuality and their daughter is suffering from eating disorders. While they are celebrating thanksgiving having plenty of food, street tramp Jerry is hungry, homeless, sleeping rough and has lost his dog. Jerry decides to end his life by drowning himself in their swimming pool. Dave rescues him and invites him to stay for a while.
Nick Nolte .... Bette Midler ....
Richard Dreyfuss ....
Beverly Hills couple Barbara and Dave Whiteman are very rich but not happy Dave is a hard working business man, his wife is only interested in yoga, aerobics and other meditation classes, and he sleeps with the house maid. Their teenage son is confused about his sexuality and their daughter is suffering from eating disorders. While they are celebrating thanksgiving having plenty of food, street tramp Jerry is hungry, homeless, sleeping rough and has lost his dog. Jerry decides to end his life by drowning himself in their swimming pool. Dave rescues him and invites him to stay for a while.
